So well written.
So well written.
Originally posted by: Abhyudaya
Sad ending. But I think his hatred his right. She again an impulsive girl. Please continue if possible.
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Actually I have written this according to Riddhima's POV, yes she is a impulsive girl but at the same time she didn't expected Vansh to doubt her character atleast. She betrayed him that's true but no one has the right to judge her character without knowing full truth. I hope i dont offend youπ€
Originally posted by: SilentEyes7
Ye kya kar diya payel...π
Tum bhi dukh de rahe ho colors kya kaam that...π
BTW very nice update...π
Keep writing...ππΌ
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Originally posted by: Harmankav
Very well written.... great...but sad ending....
Every story has a beautiful end. Please do write one more n make them together
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No promises honestly speaking
Tu has raha hai payu...
Hum sabko rula diya...
Originally posted by: Milalal27
very beautiful written. π
could you write also a happy ending to this story. Pretty Please. π€
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I will think but no promises π€
Originally posted by: the-havelgirl03
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Actually I have written this according to Riddhima's POV, yes she is a impulsive girl but at the same time she didn't expected Vansh to doubt her character atleast. She betrayed him that's true but no one has the right to judge her character without knowing full truth. I hope i dont offend youπ€
No dear. I understand her POV. If possible, please continue dear :) At least an epilogue where we can see Ridhima as a strong girl. I mean rather than dying - she can leave her life on her own terms. If possible only :)