RiAnsh TS: Betrayal [Last part - Pg 8/ 18.11.20] Completed - Page 8

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Posted: 5 years ago
#71

So well written.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Sad ending. But I think his hatred his right. She again an impulsive girl. Please continue if possible.



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Actually I have written this according to Riddhima's POV, yes she is a impulsive girl but at the same time she didn't expected Vansh to doubt her character atleast. She betrayed him that's true but no one has the right to judge her character without knowing full truth. I hope i dont offend you🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Pavi10989

I like it..👏Even though its a sad ending...


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Posted: 5 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Ye kya kar diya payel...😭

Tum bhi dukh de rahe ho colors kya kaam that...😭

BTW very nice update...😭

Keep writing...👍🏼


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Posted: 5 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Harmankav

Very well written.... great...but sad ending....

Every story has a beautiful end. Please do write one more n make them together


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No promises honestly speaking

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Posted: 5 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ShumiM

It’s sad but good. Thanks 🙏


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Posted: 5 years ago
#77

Tu has raha hai payu...

Hum sabko rula diya...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Milalal27

very beautiful written. 😭


could you write also a happy ending to this story. Pretty Please. 🤗


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I will think but no promises 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: the-havelgirl03


Thank you ❤️


Actually I have written this according to Riddhima's POV, yes she is a impulsive girl but at the same time she didn't expected Vansh to doubt her character atleast. She betrayed him that's true but no one has the right to judge her character without knowing full truth. I hope i dont offend you🤗


No dear. I understand her POV. If possible, please continue dear :) At least an epilogue where we can see Ridhima as a strong girl. I mean rather than dying - she can leave her life on her own terms. If possible only :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamgirl08

What an amazing story dear ...I loved it


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