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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing. post next one soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Riddhima went from zero moral support to. A mob wanting to defend her 😂😂😂😂

Great update ! ♥️


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Nice update...

Continue soon...

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awe poor Vansh Ha Ha riddihima go save your husband. he he poor guy he will be ready to elope with his wife soon this mad and crazy family Uff so many chaos please do continue bye sumi
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Amazing.post next one soon

Yeah , keep reading ♥️

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Chapter 14

Mission: investigating vansh...


Vansh is surrounded by chaotic people who are creating chaos just to talk to him.


He remembers Riddhima's words "aab se 365 days , 24*7 humara life issi mess mein hogi".


He holds his head .


Then he remembers how Riddhima stopped them .


He stands up with a angry expression and shouts


Vansh : stop it.


Everyone is surprised with vansh .


Then vansh suddenly changes his aura into a sweet personality with a smile because he cannot afford to make enemies .


Vansh : I will talk with everyone. You all decide who wants to come first .


A young man enters the mansion running .


Person : where is he ?


Vansh immediately understands .


Vansh : I am here.


That person looks at vansh with a strange look and checks him out top to bottom with a serious expression.


Person : I need to talk to you !!


That person is Faye , Riddhima's best friend .


Everyone start again .


Vansh takes the lead to stop them fighting .


Vansh : At this note . I will choose, phele Nani.


Vansh think's Nani will not have much to say and she loves him so it's easy to deal with .


Nani asks everyone to leave the hall .


Everyone leaves only vansh and nani are left they sit on opposite couch facing each other .


Ishani , siya and aryan peak into the hall .


Vansh : Nani aapko kya baat karni hai ?


Nani : vansh Aab mein tumhari Nani nahi hun .

Mein Riddhima ki amma hun.

Toh tum Riddhima ki amma ko jawab do .

Aur tumahari Nani Riddhima ki amma ke notes utilise kar ke tume jeet ayegi .

Aur woh yogi(achachan) tume khud Riddhima de dega .


Nani smirks



Vansh smiles at her actions


Nani opens a paper .


Nani : Riddhima ke husband ke liye meine kuch questions prepare kiye thay .


Vansh is surprised to see a long paper coming out .


Nani starts asking questions and she doesn't stop at all.


After some hundred questions ,she stops .


Vansh becomes tired and losses his energy , just talking with one person .


Ishani , siya and aryan laugh .


Siya : chalo aab chalte hai .


Aryan : No I am not going to leave any where , this is pure entertainment .


Ishani : vansh bhai mein bohat zyaada patients hai .


Nani completes her investigation about how vansh is as a husband .


Nani is about to say something but viven and Faye enter and ask her to exit .


Now viven and Faye sit on the couch or sofa in the hall opposite vansh's .


Faye : show me your ID !!


Vansh gives him a look.


Faye : I want to check , agar tum fraud nikle ? I have major trust issues bro .


Vansh obliges as he has no choice .


Faye checks it properly and keenly .


Faye : okay ,this looks fine .


Vansh : yeah , obviously.


Faye : what do you think of women in general ?


Vansh feels like' what ' but he calms down .


Vansh explains what he thinks of women without any sugar coating , to the point .


After listening to vansh ,Faye is assured that vansh is going to respect Riddhima's ideas and decisions .


Faye stops his investigation


Viven starts with his typical expression less face and calm aura .


Viven : tum itne saal Nani , nanu ko respect nahi kiya jab bhi woh pooch thay te aane keliye , apne family ko respect nahi kiya jo yaha pe hai .

Mein kaise maan loon ki tum Riddhima ko ek family de paoge .


Vansh is little disappointed with his actions but he didnt do anything deliberately .


Vansh : mein apne mistakes ko jaanta hun .


Aur repeat bhi nahi karta hun .


Mein Riddhima ko hamesha kush dekh na chahta hun .


Aur 100 % usse kush rakhunga.


Viven : mein kaise maan loon .


Vansh : yeh Vansh rai Singhania ka assurance hai . Tume mere actions mein pata chal jayega .abhi din kitne hue mujhe mil ke !!


Viven silently leaves after hearing him


But Faye still relaxing on the sofa .


Vansh raises his eyebrows asking what else .


Faye still smiles and raises his eyebrows to him relaxing and suddenly he realises he still has something to say .


Faye claps his hands once and composes himself to speak .


Faye : aab aate asli important point pe .


Faye : I have deal for you !!


Vansh : what ?


Faye in panic .


Faye : please save me from Riddhima and I will help you with achachan .


Please she will kill me . You need to just convince her that job chodna is not a big deal .


Vansh : main kyun ....


Faye : kyunki woh sab ki baat sun thi hai lekin karti uski marzi.

Lekin woh tumhari baat sun thi bhi hai aur karti bhi hai .


Vansh still doubts on Riddhima doing what he asked her to do .


Yet vansh


Vansh : okay , deal .


Faye calms down and they both shake there hands .


Then veda enters to speak .


Veda starts to speak and asks him normal questions but veda keeps having mood swings and she suddenly raises her voice and gets angry and then cries and smiles .


Vansh has a really hard time speaking with veda .


Veda is still speaking but Riddhima's dad enters and ask her leave as he cannot wait anymore and out of patients .


He pushes veda away from the hall gently .


Riddhima's dad is a very lively ,chilled out and active person .


Dad :( chilled out tone ) so , your my marumakan (speaking in Malayalam ).


Vansh : sorry , I cannot understand the language .


Dad : oh tum Hindi ho naah . Haan , toh mein pooch raha tha tum mere son - in- law ho ??


Vansh : haan .


Dad very seriously talks to vansh and vansh listens carefully .


Dad :tume ek kaam karna hai , ek private villa karido mere liye city ke bahar .


Vansh is shocked with his demand .


Vansh : kyun ?


Dad : aise expression kyun de rahe ho ? Tum rich nahi ho naah ?

I knew it ,your a homeless guy and Riddhima pitied you and she thinks its love.


Vansh is surprised with his assumption theories .


Vansh : No wonder Riddhima makes too many assumption theories .genes kaha jayenge


Dad : what ?


Vansh : I am not homeless . I have good enough money.


Dad after listening to him takes a sigh of relief and thankful that his plans of buying a house with the help of son-in-law to drink didn't get ruined .


Dad : perfect !

Riddhima ke khatir buy me a house soon .


Vansh clueless about intentions and his weird demand and weird personality but he agrees to do it for Riddhima .


Vansh : aap ka kaam hojayega ...


Dad gets up and gives a friendly hug to vansh .


Dad : you can call me 'dad'.your my son -in -law after all .


Vansh nods his head with still being puzzled about the person.


Dad leaves with joy of his plan becoming sucessful .


After dad left ,Myra( Riddhima's bff )and rashmika ( Riddhima's cousin and bff ) enter the hall with a cunning eyes .


Vansh was not expecting them to look at him like that because they were supporting them (riansh) through out the hospital day trails .

Myra opens her note pad and pen from the bag .


Myra : what degrees do you hold and from which Universities .


Vansh wasn't surprised at all , he was already used to all type of questions .


Vansh tell her all the details .


Myra : what is your business turnover ?


Vansh and Myra speak about his company and business .


Myra : Riddhima has her own business to run and I am her business partner , I want to know will you be able give her space to take her own decisions .


Vansh : definitely ! Uske har decision ko main support karunga .


Rashmika laughs bitterly


Rashmika : definitely !!

It's a big word .

You married my sister without her consent and now your saying that you will respect her decisions .


Myra : Yeah , I thought one really genius person was able convince Riddhima to marry him , but what I get to know you forced your decision on her .

I am totally disappointed.


Myra expresses her dejection .


Rashmika : everybody knows the truth .

Amma (Nani), viven , Faye and achachan through amma(Nani).

Everybody knows ....


Vansh : I know my mistake , but some mistakes lead to beautiful destinations you see .


Myra and rashmika both get really agitated to here what vansh said .


Myra : I know what you have told is a true statement but I cannot support that statement .it doesn't really be valid in all situations .


Rashmika : not all mistakes lead to beautiful destinations.

They can be tragic too .


So just take back ,take it back .


Myra : no need to take it back but .

What I really want from you is apologize to Riddhima for doing that to her .

Imagine her situation how insecure she must have felt that day .

Now that you love her you would know that right .

You should apologise ,it will make your relationship more strong .

Trust me .


Vansh listens to Myra and imagines Riddhima's pain and understands his mistake .


Vansh : I will apologise .


Myra feels relieved .


Rashmika : yes , you better .


Finally , most important .


Myra and rashmika look at each other and signal each other and they walk to vansh and sit beside him on his side couch /sofa .


Rashmika : it's a warning .


Myra : yeah , so carefully listen to us .


Rashmika : if you ever in your life made my sister cry .

That will be your last day of your life .


Myra : last day means 'last day '


Vansh smirks


Vansh : aacha ! Dekhenge .


Myra and rashmika are surprised that he not taking there warning seriously.


Rashmika : you think it's a joke.


Myra : we are damn serious .

We were only supporting you for Riddhima .

If she is not happy , we will not let you be happy .


Rashmika : if you don't keep her happy or made her cry .

We might just kill .

Toh abb bolo agar Riddhima kahe ...


Myra : ki black colour white hai?


Rashmika : toh tum kya kahoge?


Vansh very seriously answers the question ...


Vansh : khabhi khabhi usse sahi kahunga .

Khabhi kahbhi usse galat kahunga .

Lekin jo bhi kahunga usko protect karne ke liye kahunga .


Myra and rashmika didn't expect this answer . They both thought as they were warning him and he is here to impress everyone to take Riddhima home, he will be like "if she says it white ,it will be white for everyone "but he genuinely told what he would do .


They both were impressed and were successful in warning him.


Myra : good !


Rashmika : okay , aab warning yaad hai naah .

So , dhyan se .


Vansh : okay mother- in- laws I will .


Myra and rashmika after hearing him mention mother-in-laws burst into laugh .


They leave laughing .


Vansh relaxed after he's done talking with everyone .


And was about to leave .


Suddenly he sees two people approaching him .


He remembers they wanted to speak to him too .


The gardener and rohini (maid in nani household) come to him


Vansh : ohhh , sit .


Vansh patiently sits down to talk .


Gardener :(with malayalam accent) Sir, myself upmanyu das . I have been working with Riddhima and family since 20 years .


Rohini is pissed with his introduction .


Rohini : (speaking in malayalam language) stop it .


Rohini opens her phone and opens translator app which can give voice translations.


Rohini speaks something on phone .


Rohini : (speaking in ML) we just have request !


Vansh hears the translation through the phone .


He opens his phone and opens the translator app


Vansh : kya request hai .


Rohini understands after hearing it through phone translation in Malayalam .


And is happy that he is such a understanding person .


Rohini : woh ...


Upamanyu takes the phone and starts talking to vansh and he is nearly in tears .


Upamanyu : (translator speaking ) hume aap se ek he request karna hai .


Bas yehi request hai aap ki Riddhima ko hamesha kush rakhna.


Woh bohat aachi hai ek chitti(ant) ko harm karti nahi hai . Unka dil bohat sacha , saaf aur Masum hai .


Upamanyu in tears and emotional as he seeing Riddhima's husband and he is in happy tears .


Upamanyu : aapko pata hai mein ek homeless insaan tha aur jab ek din amma ( Riddhima) ne mujhe sadak pe dekha shiver karte hue barish mein woh mujhe ghar leke aagayi .


Aur jab sab puchne lage bikhari ko kyun ghar layi woh kehne lagi ki mein bohat intelligent hun isiliye unhone kaam pe rakh liya , mujhe kaam diya aur ghar diya .


Aur itna he nahi jab unhone jaana ki mein padh likh sakta hun .

Tab unhone mujhe apne liye sapne dekhna ke liye encourage kiya .

Aaj mein ek government job karta hun .

Woh meri maa ki tarah hai , meri maa mujhe bachpan mein chod kar chali gayi . Jab tak woh thi mera bohat kayal rakh thi ti.


Jab woh chali gayi mein bas sadkon pe batak tha ta .


Uske baad Riddhima ne kayal rakha mera.


Woh mere maa jaisi hai .


Nahi nahi woh meri maa he hai.


Unke dono maa aur papa bachpan mein guzar gaye ,bohat takleef Saha unhone .


Aaj unki shaadi hogayi mein bas aap se chahta hun ki aap unhe bohat khush rakhe aur protect kare bohat Masum hai .


Vansh is really surprised to know Riddhima's sweetness.


Upamanyu :Aur mujhe unke choice pe pura bharosa hai , mein aapka madad karunga achachan ko impress karne keliye .


Rohini : haan , mere bhi yahi request hai ..


Vansh opens his phone through voice translator


Vansh : Mein , hamesha usse kush rakhunga .


Vansh hands his handkerchief to upmanyu .


Upamanyu and rohini feel assured after vansh told them he will keep Riddhima happy and understands that he is a good person after vansh handing a kerchief to him and speaking to them .


Vansh still sitting on the sofa in the hall is now relaxed after all the stress and new energy is felt by him in his body

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He is left with a smile on his face after listening about Riddhima's sweetness.

Edited by Max789 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow...

Amazing...

Continue soon...


Thank you 🙏

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loved it awesome thnx for pm update soon

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Please update soon. Amazing

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hehe vansh needs to impress so many

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