Akdha FF ~| Twist In Fate |~ - Page 14

Originally posted by: James12

This was 🤓

Wat???

Originally posted by: Mavi_16_2

🤔🤔 You?

I thought it's Sayani

Real authore is ME..

And post sayani kr rhi hai 😄

Originally posted by: James12

"Betrayal by one she loved"!

"Abandoned by loved ones"!

"No roof, no money"!

"Out in World full of predators!

"One wrong move and you become prey"!.

"Then there's little life depended on her for it's own life mean world to her"!.

"Emotionally down, Physically Exhausted, mentally drained"!.

"The two chapter gave insight to Plight of Girl who is Female Protagonist of story"!.

"Hira I wonder with all the schedule you have how you come up with this plot"?.🤓

"Sayani how you become victim of this 😆 seriously I wonder what you get in mind when you're about to update this 😊

Though the chap 2 was way to small but i think the story is very predictable for us"!.😳

@bold- boss, I am not a worker...my father is the owner there..I just supervise..😆

Ahh, change to modern one. Think that fits better for the plot

Physically and psychically at the end... devastated... abused... don't know where to go to... looking for help and harrased again

The nightmare continue 😭

So much to bear for the lonely girl. Poor Jodha. Hope she will find help, solace and a new home

Very sad. Well written Mahi👍🏼. Let's see where the path leads her

Thx for pm dear💖💖

Thx Sayani for posting 💖💖

Good one Mahi👍🏼 waiting for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Soso70

Ahh, change to modern one. Think that fits better for the plot

Physically and psychically at the end... devastated... abused... don't know where to go to... looking for help and harrased again

The nightmare continue 😭

So much to bear for the lonely girl. Poor Jodha. Hope she will find help, solace and a new home

Very sad. Well written Mahi👍🏼. Let's see where the path leads her

Thx for pm dear💖💖

Thx Sayani for posting 💖💖

Thx dii🤗🤗

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

@bold- boss, I am not a worker...my father is the owner there..I just supervise..😆

"You girls are impossible"! Supervising isn't easy job"!.

Anyway I mean to say with the working scheduled and other thing in hands how you get such a sad sad plot in mind 🤔

Originally posted by: James12

"You girls are impossible"! Supervising isn't easy job"!.

Anyway I mean to say with the working scheduled and other thing in hands how you get such a sad sad plot in mind 🤔

@bold, according to me it's easy😆

Your story is also sad sad ha

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

@bold, according to me it's easy😆

Your story is also sad sad ha

Ok if it's easy then update next soon 😉

"Expect LOC others are mix of humour suspense action And Thrill"! 😊

And it's come naturally because I has quite Sad past bottled inside"!.😊

Originally posted by: James12

Ok if it's easy then update next soon 😉

"Expect LOC others are mix of humour suspense action And Thrill"! 😊

And it's come naturally because I has quite Sad past bottled inside"!.😊

Ughh.. first u update