Bond Beyond Forever - A Rudhita TS (last part updated on pg11) - Page 12

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Heyy thanks Akshu❤️

Okk I wanted the confrontation part to be simple.. But bahut mehenat ki hai😆

Thanks for liking that🤗

I always feel that confrontations and arguement between couples should be simple and calm. It actually shows their maturity and understanding towards each others POV. And here Rudhita were just

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Heyy thank you so much❤️ by the way what can I call u???

Glad you liked the part and understood the emotions I portrayed.. 🤗

I am not giving any ideas to cvs... 😆😆

@bold thanks for informing me.. Can you tell me about which part you are talking about??


Will wait for your reviews in my other stories too🤗

Welcome😊 here everyone calls me T and mahi calls me haddi buddy, now you choose what you want to call me🤗

😆i didn't say you were giving it, i just forbid them from taking it🤣

Not a specific part exactly, i just felt that you could have been easily divided this chapter into two or three parts. Focusing a little more on the reunion part, a little more jealous rudhita, misunderstanding ager jhat se khatam ho jaye toh maja nahi ata.

That does not mean it wasn't good, the chapter was very very good. But I'm expecting the best because you have that potential.👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AK_2010

I always feel that confrontations and arguement between couples should be simple and calm. It actually shows their maturity and understanding towards each others POV. And here Rudhita were just

Yes.. I always wanted from the start that they both talk calmly to clear the misunderstanding. Actually I had thought of numerous ways of their confrontation but then decided this one finally.. Happy u liked it 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: castlebones

Welcome😊 here everyone calls me T and mahi calls me haddi buddy, now you choose what you want to call me🤗

😆i didn't say you were giving it, i just forbid them from taking it🤣

Not a specific part exactly, i just felt that you could have been easily divided this chapter into two or three parts. Focusing a little more on the reunion part, a little more jealous rudhita, misunderstanding ager jhat se khatam ho jaye toh maja nahi ata.

That does not mean it wasn't good, the chapter was very very good. But I'm expecting the best because you have that potential.👍🏼

Mahi has given you a pretty name but I am going for T okk😆

Thik hai🤣

Thanks for telling actually I too personally wanted to divide it. But it would have gotten long I wanted to end it as a TS only. So making it a long update ended it here. And yes as I had used leap so wanted to show them more mature and thats why didn't added the jealous part. 😊

No worries I will add this idea in some other stories okk😳

Thank you once again ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow❤️

How did I miss this os?? 😭

Sana you are such a wonderful writer girl ❤️🤗

Damn this is so emotional 😭 budhu Anirudh and budhu Bondita dono ki dono pagal 🤪😭

Part 1 such a beautifully penned one ❤️😳

This ARC is very much like ours 😆 impulsive and without thinking taking decisions 🤪 budhu kahinka 🤣

And bon bhi apni patibabu se kam nahi hai 😭 she left the mansion.!

Lemme read part 2 and 3 😆 and come back again

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Wow❤️

How did I miss this os?? 😭

Sana you are such a wonderful writer girl ❤️🤗

Damn this is so emotional 😭 budhu Anirudh and budhu Bondita dono ki dono pagal 🤪😭

Part 1 such a beautifully penned one ❤️😳

This ARC is very much like ours 😆 impulsive and without thinking taking decisions 🤪 budhu kahinka 🤣

And bon bhi apni patibabu se kam nahi hai 😭 she left the mansion.!

Lemme read part 2 and 3 😆 and come back again

Lalz❤️

Thank you so much🤗

Haan woh toh hai dono k dono budhu😆

Humare ARC se hi toh inspired hai mera ye ARC.. Pehele bolta hai phir sochta hai 🤪😆

Dono pati patni ese hi hai😆


Once again thanks❤️

Waiting for your comment for 2 and 3🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Thank you Scarlet❤️

You know what I love your comments.. And thank you for loving all those parts🤗

I was in confusion how it would have turned out but seeing your comment I feel it's not bad😆

@bold mind sach mein corrupt ho chuki hai kya karun 🤪

Thank you once again ❤️

🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely ❤️


I envisioned Aarya as lil bondita 😆

Ani babu is so impulsive 🤦🏻‍♀️ But cares for his Bon 😳


Even she was ready to be single mom for his and ‘mini’s’ sake


Sad ! But in glad they reunited ❤️


Chaudharys loving bon more than Ani 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thread opened Apsana.

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