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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya


Request to share your thoughts on character so it would help us a lot to bring better story 🙂


I think Riddhima's right on track. It is time she gives sharp replies to Vansh.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: amritat

Really nice...please continue...looking forward to Riansh angst.

Thank you will try to update soon... talking about angst I don't no maybe for now Riddhu will be in pain but Vansh his full-fledged angst will come much much later but till then the ride will be fun. Even though Riddhima will be in pain but she will make sure she doesn't suffer alone and has company of quite a few people 😉😅

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: amritat


I think Riddhima's right on track. It is time she gives sharp replies to Vansh.


Oh yes, she is ready to slap on his face with sweet replies. Sometimes sweet is injurious to health 😎😎

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Posted: 5 years ago

Show that

Vansh can feel the pain of riddhima in somewhere corner of his heart nd also show riddhima pain where riddhima talk with herself and that time vansh sab sun lega chupke se vansh ko bhi kidar na kidar feel hona chaye that he is doing wrng with riddhima something like that mujhe jayada toh pata nhi this are my thought

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Uttara98

Show that

Vansh can feel the pain of riddhima in somewhere corner of his heart nd also show riddhima pain where riddhima talk with herself and that time vansh sab sun lega chupke se vansh ko bhi kidar na kidar feel hona chaye that he is doing wrng with riddhima something like that mujhe jayada toh pata nhi this are my thought


Cannot bring this monologue soon as it is ff. However, will surely keep in our thoughts to bring such scene in the story 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: amritat


I think Riddhima's right on track. It is time she gives sharp replies to Vansh.

Thank you I promise you one thing though Vansh won't be going all passionate and angsty for Riddhima anytime soon but whenever he does it will be bad really bad. This he won't get Riddhima easily bahut papad belne padenge they say no "jo cheez aasani se mil jati hai uski value nahi hoti" he got Riddhima's love pretty soon and easily hence did not value it and played with her and for that he will suffer immensely in future.:)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Thank you I promise you one thing though Vansh won't be going all passionate and angsty for Riddhima anytime soon but whenever he does it will be bad really bad. This he won't get Riddhima easily bahut papad belne padenge they say no "jo cheez aasani se mil jati hai uski value nahi hoti" he got Riddhima's love pretty soon and easily hence did not value it and played with her and for that he will suffer immensely in future.:)

Thanks. Is Abhudyay your second account?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update. Waiting eagerly for the next

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: amritat

Thanks. Is Abhudyay your second account?

No no we two very different people we are collaborating for this FF. She wrote the OS. I got inspired for an FF and got the plot story so asked if she would like to collab for this one. She agreed so i wrote the first chapter got her thoughts on it she liked it I guess so converted this into FF and posted. I did not knew how to go with second part so our girl @Abhyudaya to the rescue. She helped a lot putting the pace and shaping of this chapter 🙂
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Nice update. Waiting eagerly for the next

Thanks will try:)

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