FF: Broken I Ch 20 - Pg 147 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Yes yes yes !!!

Will be eagerly waiting 😉

Thank you :)

Waiting for the next part to see a strong Riddhima.

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Note:-

Hello Guys, first of all, thank you so much for appreciating this OS. I am happy that everyone has liked this. With the help of @BhataktiAtma, I'm turning this OS into FF. Don't know how many chapters it would be how. However, on-demand we are making this story in FF and updates might be 2 -3 updates in a week and length might be little shot. So, hoping that further updates also will make everyone happy.

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Looking forward dear...😊

Originally posted by: Milalal27

Riddhima, i hope she pays them back. I feel so sorry for her, also in the show. Wished she was the mastermind and strong. Just like Maya from Beyhad.

😎

She will be and teach both the guys good lesson. Enjoy the ride:)

Originally posted by: Gurikaur_ginni

Abhyudaya🤗

Thank you so much yaara

@BhataktiAtma thank you

Strong riddhu on the way

Excited mai Edda

Thank you hope you enjoy:)

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Let's make her strong

😈

Chapter 1

It’s a game of love in a game for love.

So let the game begin.

Roaming in her room Chandrika RaiSinghania aka Dadi Rai Singhania once again tried to call her granddaughter-in-law. Finally, after numerous attempts when at eighth call her beloved granddaughter-in-law Riddhima picked up the call the lady took a sigh of relief.

Dadi: Beta where are you? I was so worried you have been gone from home since morning and no one knows where you are and you did not even inform anyone.

Riddhima (in a shaky voice): I am sorry dadi. Emergency thi iss liye inform nahin kar payi.

Dadi: Emergency? Sab thik toh hai na bacchche aur teri awaaz ko kya hua tu theek toh haina. Mujhe teri chinta ho rahi hai.

Riddhima: Haan dadi I am absolutely fine main abhi app hi ko call karne wali thi woh yahan connection theek nahin hai. Actually mujhe ek….haan medical camp ke liye urgently nikalna pada (pause)(then gulping) apko batana chahti thi but time nahin mila. Aur Vansh (pause then chuckling humorlessly) ka toh apko patahi hai who toh mujhe waise bhi ghar se bahar nikalne nahin deta hai iss liye apko bata rahi hoon please app sabsambhal lena. Mujhe pehle hi jana tha par sab bhul gayi. Main…. Samajh hi nahin payi kya karun (with heavy voice)acchanak se sab ho gaya kuch samajh hi nahin aaya.

Dadi: Tu kya bol rahi hai beta. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Riddhima: Dadi I mean purani commitment thi issliye mana nahin kar payi hospital walon ko who bhi iss kaam ke liye. Agar app permission dein toh main jaun filhaal hospital mein hoon.

Dadi: Haan haan bacchche bhala iske liye bhi permission ki jaroorat hoti hai kya tu befikar ho ke jaa main yahan sab dekh lungi.

Riddhima: Thank you dadi. Aur haan wahan connection theek nahin hai iss liye app logon ke calls lagein ge nahin mujhe but app tension mat lena.. main… beech beech main appko call karti rahungi agar kuch arrangements wahan hote hain toh.

Dadi: Theek hai apna khayal rakhna aur jaldi wapas aaana.

Riddhima: Ok dadi. Aap bhi apna khayal rahiyega. Bye.

2 Months later….

VR Mansion

While everyone was gathered in hall dadi spoke.

Dadi: Hai Riddhima puredo mahine baad ghar aa rahi hai. Kitna suna suna lagta hai ye ghar uske bina.

While rolling her eyes Ishani spoke.

Ishani: Dadi isko suna suna nahin shanti kehtein hain after all koi din bhar yahan se wahan jasoosi karnewala jo nahin hai. And look how peaceful it is koi naya hungama nahin.Warna har roz kuch naya hota hi rehta tha but on the second thoughts I kind of miss her daily dose of entertainment jo nahin hai. Thoda boring hone laagatha sab kuch.

Making Aryan smirk, Chachi and Anupriya chuckled. Vansh and Angre who were coming down from the stairs heard it and gave a look to each other. It’s been two months since when Dadi came to Vansh’s room and informed him that his bothersome wife had decided to go on some godforsaken medical camp without informing him or taking his permission. The guts of that girl have always irked him. When Vansh called her bothersome he hasn’t been wrong since even without being physically present herself here that girl has managed to put him on his toes wondering why the girl who he was pretty sure was in love with him a mare pawn of his to teach that Kabir a lesson had not informed him first forget that not even mentioned it once. Then further she hasn’t even called him once in the entire two months while has been in touch with his dadi and making calls to her once in every two to four days. Making him doubt her so like a sensible man that he is he sent Angre to find about her and if Kabir knows anything about it also made him inquire about her in Hospital. Surprisingly even Kabir had no idea about Riddhima’s whereabout and even hospital confirmed about her been gone to some medical camp with the team of doctors and staff to some remote area with not many connections and will be back in two months. Though he could not find anything of suspicion yet could not help having that nagging feeling that something is not right to call it his instinct or gut feeling. Now that she is returning he’ll have to fasten up his plan of action to teach her and her Kabir a lesson and get done with both of them for once and for all thought Vansh.

Dadi(angrily scolding): Ishani tamiz se baat karo mat bhulo Riddhima tumhari bhabhi hai.

Outside VR Mansion a car came to a stop.

Riddhima came out and stood in front of the gate of VR Mansion remembering a voice “Beta just remember aap akeli nahin hain iss duniya mein. Halaat chahe jo hon par hamesha har kisi ki zindagi main koi ek aisa insaan jaroor hota hai jo unse beinteehan pyaar karta hai isliye kamse kam uss insan ke liye kabhi himmat mat hariyega.”

“You were right I cannot let them break me.” Thought Riddhima looking in front with a determined look in her eyes.

Chapter 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=17#154721400

The story is at the developing stage. So, unable to give any precap. However, would request to comment because as said this story is turning into FF because of you all. So please share your thoughts. If makers are not giving what we want, let's turn this story into something which is looking forward. So do share thoughts.

Dadi ka naam edit kardo

I liked the first chapter a determined Riddhima.Would love to see her coming behaviour with Vansh and his family.

Originally posted by: MudrasV

I liked the first chapter a determined Riddhima.Would love to see her coming behaviour with Vansh and his family.

Hope we don't disappoint you in future 🙂