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Posted: 5 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow...

Amazing...

Continue soon...

thanks so much ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

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Hi Nainaa🤗

Finally you have updated. Thank you so much❤️


I loved the update. As we both know we almost get the same ideas and we love same mushy mushy scenarios.


I loved the face that finally Bani disclosed every single thing to Veer. And that actually made me think ki Veer ko show mein pata hai that she is adopted? 


Anyways pasand ayi mujhe puri update, finally bed sharing let's see what all you will show.


Lekin update thoda chota tha, but that reminds me of something is better than nothing😆


Please jaldi update karde please.


hiii thank you for readinggg so glad you enjoyed. haha same ideas always, we're very similar 😆

no i don't think veer knows that she's adopted, waiting for the reveal toooo hehe

bed sharing ke liye kuch ideas hai and your ideas are also there for the next chapter, soon soon promise 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Nainaaaaaaaaaa meri sweet heart 🤗


Chapter 8
I absolutely love the fact that Veer did not let Bani touch her feet. Yes! Kyonki Bani uski ardhangini hai.
Vani on a dinner date. That is an absolute dream. You know it is a great idea for a separate OS as well.

“technically satyug was out first date baby.”

“offo veer i dont think that counts since i killed you on our “first date”
Naina you have my heart for writing this! This is funny. 😆
I loved that Vani have a few moments to spend quality time with each other. Screen pe toh koi chaiin se rehne hi nahi deta.
My heart melted when Bani said Veer is the only family that she has. I am waiting for such a dialogue on the show as well after Veer gets to know about Bani's childhood.

Babies? Ahaan!
I am just imagining how cute are Veer and Bani's babies going to be!
Powerful too! That can be a really good arch in the show if the writers want it.
That gives me so many different ideas for fanfictions.
veer was around but didn’t sit with them. This is so subtle. He is so particular and protective for his sweet heart.
Feels like Chachi and not Bani is the real Naagin. She spits so much of venom.
Veer is a man with real blood, flesh and spine. The way he stood up for Bani and made it clear that no one can dis respect her


Chapter 9
My heart goes out for Bani. She has been through so much. She has experienced so much of heart break, pain and betrayal. She put up with her Chachi for so long just because she desperately needed a mothers love.
Veer assured Bani that the cheel clan got her back. Reminds me of the scene when the entire cheel clan walked out of the main door.
Naina please write some bonding scenes between cheel bros and Vani.
I hate chachi! I so freaking hate chachi! Urgh. Disgusting woman. First she makes Bani do all chores then decides to marry her off but then calls off the wedding because no one will do the chores? What the hell! Such a low creature.
Another OS idea - A spinoff of Cinderella featuring Vani.
I am so happy for Bani. She has a home and she has a loving family. She deserves all the happiness in the world.
Yayyyy! Vani are sharing the bed.
Naina can you please begin the next update with Veer admiring Bani's beauty while she is trying to sleep. She is not able to sleep, so he comforts her and helps her sleep like a baby.

Thank you so much for writing this Naina. The updates were fantastic.


poorvaaaa 🤗

veer always treats her as an equal tou i thought either they touch each others feet ya phir neither. this felt like it fit more. hehe waiting for the reveal to happen on tv too of her childhood and hayeee vani babies

i feel like even in the show, he's always lurking around (in the most positive way) and i love that about him. he gives space but makes sure to be there to protect her.

i actually have some cheel bonding in the next chapter andddd yes yes yes i'm planning to include your idea in the beginning of chapter 10, coming soon!!

you're most welcome and thank you for your comments and for reading, they always make my day 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: nainaasharmaa


hiii thank you for readinggg so glad you enjoyed. haha same ideas always, we're very similar 😆

no i don't think veer knows that she's adopted, waiting for the reveal toooo hehe

bed sharing ke liye kuch ideas hai and your ideas are also there for the next chapter, soon soon promise 🤗


acha. chalo koi ni. pata lagega. may be jo vo child artist hai vo past hi disclose kare because usne kapde ab ke time ke pehne the not satyug.


baki i am waiting to read next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel


acha. chalo koi ni. pata lagega. may be jo vo child artist hai vo past hi disclose kare because usne kapde ab ke time ke pehne the not satyug.


baki i am waiting to read next update

haan shayad abhi soon, and yes yes i'm planning the next chapter hehe

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Posted: 5 years ago
#86

This was emotional with the past bit but I like it hope singhania's know this and make her feel more loved wanted and belonged

Also after getting to know the nagin part

Plz update the next part soon eager to read more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: dershika

This was emotional with the past bit but I like it hope singhania's know this and make her feel more loved wanted and belonged

Also after getting to know the nagin part

Plz update the next part soon eager to read more

writing a cheel khandan bonding chapter soon!! & monday tak i think new chapter upload karungi. weekend ke liye enjoy naagin on tv haha weekdays mein entertain karungi 😂

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Posted: 5 years ago
#88

Please continue soon. Please please

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I hope u l continue this soon. Pls continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#90

Naina.

Bring it on......

It has been months

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