AshNi + OC FF: Love is all you need - Page 40

Originally posted by: Anjani9

More than her Mother's longing for Ashu in her childhood, it is getting a new person now in to the so close knit family is tough for the kids ...

Well yes that’s true to an extent. Ashutosh has a direct connection only to Asha. All the others are new to him and he is to them. It remains to be seen how much Ashutosh is able to build a closeness with his step siblings and his stepfather. They may all be willing to participate in the wedding, but it remains to be seen to what extent Ashutosh is able to make it into the inner circle of the Sanyals.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Well yes that’s true to an extent. Ashutosh has a direct connection only to Asha. All the others are new to him and he is to them. It remains to be seen how much Ashutosh is able to build a closeness with his step siblings and his stepfather. They may all be willing to participate in the wedding, but it remains to be seen to what extent Ashutosh is able to make it into the inner circle of the Sanyals.

With Ashu's 24*7 job, when he will get time to bond with family....how about long leave for Ashu??

Originally posted by: Anjani9

With Ashu's 24*7 job, when he will get time to bond with family....how about long leave for Ashu??

He will be taking time off for the wedding and honeymoon! And the pre-wedding festivities!

Ryan's father has not yet taken initiative to meet Ryan though his brother and mother working towards his betterment...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ryan's father has not yet taken initiative to meet Ryan though his brother and mother working towards his betterment...

Yeah, it’s already been established that Robert has trouble expressing his affection/concern for Ryan. He’s just not made that way. So it would follow that he’s not going to seek Ryan out immediately knowing that he was the reason Ryan left home in the first place. He’s leaving it to Simon and Anne to smooth things over first. And perhaps he will approach Ryan when they have.

At the cost of repeating myself.. When are you going to introduce Ian.. Full fledged form

Originally posted by: Veni-Vidi-Vici

At the cost of repeating myself.. When are you going to introduce Ian.. Full fledged form

He will make an appearance at the opportune time!😃

His entry has got to be dramatic, don’t you think?

As Nidhi mentioned in Chapter 11, jealousy is a great motivator. So Ian’s presence is absolutely necessary for Sara and Ryan’s romance to get a boost! I’m still working in the opportune moment in the story

Originally posted by: Veni-Vidi-Vici

At the cost of repeating myself.. When are you going to introduce Ian.. Full fledged form

Ian into the scene now???? ☺️😆😉

Adds lot of spice...👍🏼

So the next update will take a while coming, it's been super busy at work and home, and I haven't even started writing it yet. 🤔

I wanted your feedback regarding the format of this fic: the alternating PoVs with Nidhi's PoV in between. Is it making sense? Is the story flowing well without seeming too confusing? Is it getting repetitive, are events being alluded to too often?

Would appreciate your thoughts on this! Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

So the next update will take a while coming, it's been super busy at work and home, and I haven't even started writing it yet. 🤔

I wanted your feedback regarding the format of this fic: the alternating PoVs with Nidhi's PoV in between. Is it making sense? Is the story flowing well without seeming too confusing? Is it getting repetitive, are events being alluded to too often?

Would appreciate your thoughts on this! Thank you! 😳

Seems fine. You please add Ashu's perspective too when updates about the wedding are written