FF: Broken I Ch 20 - Pg 147 - Page 5

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Hi 😊I am mostly a silent reader of IF and it's my first post in this forum. Amazing OS and it for sure deserves to be continued in a proper story.

PS: If you like we could collaborate for this one I think I have an idea how we could continue this 😳 your stories are so amazing that it inspires and urges me to write something but since I am not a regular I am not sure and you are doing such an amazing job.

Sure dear. Please dm your thoughts. 😊

I would like to read next part to this.A strong Riddhima who doesn't need these both men in her life.

Originally posted by: MudrasV

I would like to read next part to this.A strong Riddhima who doesn't need these both men in her life.

I will try to put something soon

Hi PMed you do check and let me know how's it?? Good, bad or worse😳 It's a base plotline if it's ok will PM you indepth details rest part of the plot and Character Sketch of other characters. We can discuss further details :) By take care😊

The OS is amazing😍😍😍 I read it twice just I loved it...

I have a request if possible please give a continuation of this where we can see both Vansh and Kabir P.O.V after they come to know about her learning the truth, her absence and her confrontation plz... I love to read it.

I will be waiting for your other works to read and enjoy them...

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

I just hope to see a true guardian angel for Ridhima. No plans yet to continue because I have no thoughts yet how to shape the broken Ridhima. Let her grieve some more and in meantime, I will try to shape my thoughts for next chapter

Originally posted by: KV2711

. All the best for it yaar definitely you will work on it and bring us a new chapter of this which could be more interesting than previous update dear

Hoping for the same dear to bring a brand new engaging chapter for all of you guys :)

Note:-

Hello Guys, first of all, thank you so much for appreciating this OS. I am happy that everyone has liked this. With the help of @BhataktiAtma, I'm turning this OS into FF. Don't know how many chapters it would be how. However, on-demand we are making this story in FF and updates might be 2 -3 updates in a week and length might be little shot. So, hoping that further updates also will make everyone happy.

Feedback is appreciated because this OS is turning into an FF on demand of all of you. So please comment on whatever you felt on that particular chapter. The way it was unfolding, your thoughts, our writing style - everything, please. It will help us a lot.

Thank you once again :)

Very good please update soon

Riddhima, i hope she pays them back. I feel so sorry for her, also in the show. Wished she was the mastermind and strong. Just like Maya from Beyhad.

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