Vani OS - Dil Ibaadat - Page 4

Originally posted by: Berlin2220

Excellent....♥️♥️♥️ Pleas continue 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thank you so much 🤗

I just went "AWWW..." for forever!

This was so cute.

I loved Bani here.

The beginning was my favourite part.

Keep Writing...

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

I just went "AWWW..." for forever!

This was so cute.

I loved Bani here.

The beginning was my favourite part.

Keep Writing...

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Thank you so much 🤗

You're welcome <3

I was dying for writers on the forum to come up with shots on VaNi and finallyyy I am beginning to see them. These keep me going throughout the week until the next episode.

This was such a beautiful read! You wrote is wonderfully. The timing is so perfect too with the current track. Could totally picture these scenes playing out - including Mayuri's interruption lol. Loved the insight into Bani's thoughts and Veer continuing to give her all that love, reserved only for her. But my favorite part will be the first few paragraphs when Veer returns. Especially this bit;

"He did not realize what exactly happened but he heard her muffled sobs after she rushed to slam herself into his chest. Bani's hug was stronger than anything he has ever known, as if holding him was not quite enough for her , she wanted to feel every ounce of his being."

I am a SUCKER for such hugs! And I petition to have this kinda hug on the show when Veer returns please!

Originally posted by: nikki.171

I was dying for writers on the forum to come up with shots on VaNi and finallyyy I am beginning to see them. These keep me going throughout the week until the next episode.

This was such a beautiful read! You wrote is wonderfully. The timing is so perfect too with the current track. Could totally picture these scenes playing out - including Mayuri's interruption lol. Loved the insight into Bani's thoughts and Veer continuing to give her all that love, reserved only for her. But my favorite part will be the first few paragraphs when Veer returns. Especially this bit;

"He did not realize what exactly happened but he heard her muffled sobs after she rushed to slam herself into his chest. Bani's hug was stronger than anything he has ever known, as if holding him was not quite enough for her , she wanted to feel every ounce of his being."

I am a SUCKER for such hugs! And I petition to have this kinda hug on the show when Veer returns please!

Thank you so much Nikki... I am so glad you enjoyed this 🤗

The entire conception of this OS began with that hug. I wrote the scene in another thread and then got more ideas around it.

We all are hoping that we get that hug on the TV screen. (O writer didiiiiiiiii, suna na aapne?)

I will sign your petition ❤️

This was soooo beautiful!! I found this after so much scrolling, infact I read all your stories and now I will spam each one of them😆

About this, starting with first para, I could imagine the look in their eyes. I would love to see a vulnerable Bani concerned for veer!! I am just waiting to see how it turns out when she gets to know his truth!!

Please write more and more 🤗❤️

You know the plus point of ur writings? U write the dialogues exactly in the same tone of the characters in the show. Isse aur bhi jyada imagine kar sakti hu. Lagta hai episode hi dekh rahi hu..

That hug scene! Uff yehi toh chahti hu show mein. Bani daur k aaye Veer ko gale lagaye.. And Veer khush bhi aur surprised bhi...

That mayuri Bani cat fight 🤣 uff ekdam episode jaisi.. Whats app pe pic bhejti hu, pet bhar k dekho, aarti bhi utaar lo 🤣🤣

And Bani ki apology in from of Veer and their romantic moments ☺️

Sab Bani ko apologies ko lekar os bana rahe hai. Ab show mein bhi iss track ko laana parega jaldi 😳

Very good job Poorva.

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

Dwipi 🤗

You know the plus point of ur writings? U write the dialogues exactly in the same tone of the characters in the show. Isse aur bhi jyada imagine kar sakti hu. Lagta hai episode hi dekh rahi hu..

Mujhe yeh jaankar badi khushi hui. Mere dimaag mein toh pata nahi din bhar kitne Vani ke episodes chalte rehte hai 😆

That hug scene! Uff yehi toh chahti hu show mein. Bani daur k aaye Veer ko gale lagaye.. And Veer khush bhi aur surprised bhi...

Woh scene humne ek thread mein discuss kiya thha... That became inspiration for the OS.

That mayuri Bani cat fight 🤣 uff ekdam episode jaisi.. Whats app pe pic bhejti hu, pet bhar k dekho, aarti bhi utaar lo 🤣🤣

Ab Veer ka charm hi aisa hai. Woh hai hi itna handsome dashing aur irresistible. Toh uske liye Bani ko aisi ladaaiyaa karni padegi naa 😆

You know naa Veer ka charm hi alag hai

And Bani ki apology in from of Veer and their romantic moments ☺️

I like that one moment when he puts back the strap of his gown back ☺️

Sab Bani ko apologies ko lekar os bana rahe hai. Ab show mein bhi iss track ko laana parega jaldi 😳

Aaega aaega... Woh track bhi aaega. Main bhi wait karti hu.

Very good job Poorva.

Thank you Dwipi 🤗