Bawra Mann : Vani Os - Page 2

Originally posted by: _NINA_

Really nice dear

Its good

Thank you ❤️

Sneha 🤗

I cannot even begin to explain the kind of feelings I felt while reading this OS.

It is so natural and normal. Just beautiful.

You know one of my professor once told me ke simple cheezon ko simple banane mein bohot mehnat lagti hai. I can truly feel it in your words.

The way you explained Bani's feelings and the subtle progression in their relationship, it made me so happy.

My most favorite part of the story is how Veer was pretending to sleep.

Icing on the cake is that this song is one of my all time favorites.

Thank you for writing this ❤️

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Thank you Soo much!! ❤️

I wait for such scenes in the show

Same here

This is so good.. Matlab so beautifully written the scene.. The sweetest.. Generally hum jaise Vani scenes dekhte hai yeh poora alag, sweet romantic matured still childish cute.. I will definitely want to see these scenes in the episodes.. Keep writing.. 😳

Btw aj main saare os padhne ki mood mein hu.. Aur kya kya os hai yahan koi mujhe bata sakta hai?

Such a lovely OS I enjoyed reading these scenes between Bani and Veer a lot! It was so sweet. ❤️

I love that Veer claimed that there could never be a love like his. Very Veer thing to say! 😆

Also loved him laying on Bani's lap, and best part, pretending to be asleep. Right before I read that he was pretending, I was wishing he'd be awake to catch Bani in the act and indeed he was and I was so happy! I love that you ended with that too. Makes me want so much more!!!

Thanks so much for writing and sharing! 😊

Loved it🤗 please do continue its a good plot and Meera ki shadi main vani fans will get lot of good scenes.😆show main toh ayega nahi please do continue if you have time

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Sneha 🤗

I cannot even begin to explain the kind of feelings I felt while reading this OS.

It is so natural and normal. Just beautiful.

You know one of my professor once told me ke simple cheezon ko simple banane mein bohot mehnat lagti hai. I can truly feel it in your words.

The way you explained Bani's feelings and the subtle progression in their relationship, it made me so happy.

My most favorite part of the story is how Veer was pretending to sleep.

Icing on the cake is that this song is one of my all time favorites.

Thank you for writing this ❤️

Awww!! I am glad you loved it so much!!! 🤗❤️

i love this song and now a days I love Vani, they're so perfect together and I am waiting for the time when Bani will accept she loves him and will realise his honest efforts towards her.

Infact subconsciously I think she knows, like that is how she realised it wasn't veer but someone else when Shakura came. ❤️

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

This is so good.. Matlab so beautifully written the scene.. The sweetest.. Generally hum jaise Vani scenes dekhte hai yeh poora alag, sweet romantic matured still childish cute.. I will definitely want to see these scenes in the episodes.. Keep writing.. 😳

Btw aj main saare os padhne ki mood mein hu.. Aur kya kya os hai yahan koi mujhe bata sakta hai?

Thank you sooooo much for liking this 🤗❤️

And, there are a lot of talented writers here but not a lots of written work, I don't think there's a separate topic too so I guess you can search "Vani os" or "os" in the forum search option, that's how I found them!!

Originally posted by: indigal07

Such a lovely OS I enjoyed reading these scenes between Bani and Veer a lot! It was so sweet. ❤️

I love that Veer claimed that there could never be a love like his. Very Veer thing to say! 😆

Also loved him laying on Bani's lap, and best part, pretending to be asleep. Right before I read that he was pretending, I was wishing he'd be awake to catch Bani in the act and indeed he was and I was so happy! I love that you ended with that too. Makes me want so much more!!!

Thanks so much for writing and sharing! 😊

Thank youuuu sooooo much ❤️

I wrote this with so much love and I am happy to receive the same ❤️

Originally posted by: fire_wings

Loved it🤗 please do continue its a good plot and Meera ki shadi main vani fans will get lot of good scenes.😆show main toh ayega nahi please do continue if you have time

Thank you ❤️

I will keep writing more 🤗