Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated) - Page 66

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

So vivid so alive so barbaric the entire hunting trip.. I was just awed by your writing skills it seemed I was there witnessing all those happenings..it was bone chilling..and just opposite there a morning soothing , vibrant, full of life.. Stuti you know I adore your writing.you are one of the rarest of the rare who narrate anything flawlessly.there is a rhythm in your writing..I am very fortunate to be your reader.thank you Stuti for being my window,my escape and my solace.

I love the way you have shaped Ruq character dignified slight arrogant who knows her limitations when arguing with Shenshah .

I love this self-respecting,bold, fiery Jodha who will not allow anyone to mess with her.I am touched with her gesture to accompany him in hunting only being his window not to show her weaponry skills..then you twisted the whole scene, it was unannounced, unpredictable leaving us in shock.. then the famous quote -kshatryani raised her weapon to protect..

Reading whole update was a bliss.. everyone is not blessed with what you are Stuti- a mind full of imagination and the art to narrate.please keep writing..

Thank you so so much for such a beautiful review dear! I could read it hundred times and it made my day!

Originally posted by: lkdaswani

This chapter was utterly riveting. I could imagine her in the place of Deepika Padukone in the song Deewani Mastani. THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. I just hope there are no more problems in their relationship but I also know that love without hardships is not love.

Thank you so much dear. Waiting for your review for the next one...

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Very good update.......😊

You have beautifully written the beauty of nature and forest......

>> Thank you so so much 😊

Still I don't understand what was running in Jodha's mind when she accepted the challenge of deer hunt.....hunting deer is against her values.....

>> She took an instant decision as her mind was more directed towards shooting than hunting. When the hunting started she realized she cannot go against her values just to prove her skills.

But she won the challenge but hunting the man eater and thus shutting the mouths of Ruqaiya begum and harem👏......this is secondary thing.....but the main thing is true to her words she is his window of escape😳....she did the thing which everyone is fearing to do even though it's their duty to protect the Emperor and his life is in danger👍🏼.........

>> Yes!👍🏼

Please update next chapter fasttt😃......if possible.....

>> Let us see...

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Didi I hv to read ur story from start

Then will comment😊

Waiting for it😊

Originally posted by: Soso70

I feel very sorry for your loss. Wish you and the relatives all the best 🙏

> Thank you for this dear . 😊

Finally Jodha unintentionally "wins" the challenge without giving up her principles. she retains her dignity and ashamed Ruquaia. Selfless she accompanied the emperor only as his window. She saved Jalals life and proved her weapon skills. I wish Ruquaia won't be jealous and can handle the situation. Perhaps she can see Jodha as equal and they're becoming friends. I think Jodha could use one in life of harem.

> Yes, Ruqaiya is mature enough. let's see how it goes.😃

Your description of the morning walk was marvellous. you described the morning mood and the feelings of the two wonderfully. I Like their conversation. very deeply thoughts.

> Thank you 😃

your writing style puts one directly into the situation.

the hunting trip brings out some new faces of Jalal. not only the face of an emperor but also the face of the human Jalal.

>> Yes

I also like this bold Jodha who sticks to its principles and does not allow itself to be misled.

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I'm curious who sabotaged Jalals machan. Who is the villain who wants to see him dead and why did none of his men help him as he fight with the tiger.

>> Let's see what reveals in the next chapter.

I admire your writing. Please keep on writing this marvellous story.

>. Thank you again dear. Loved your review. Thank you so much for this.

Take care

> You too

Originally posted by: swetiii

Wow

Very thrilling chapter

Jo saved Jalal ❤️

She followed her virtues and principles

Ruku was challenging Jo in the morning

She's going down in the competition😆

Shatriayni proved that she's the best

Morning bliss followed by life saving 🤗

Beautiful chapter dear

Update asap

Sorry to hear about your loss

May his/her soul rest in peace

Thank you so much dear. So glad to know that you liked it😃

Originally posted by: suganMCAmuthu

Awwwwwww u just had my heart with ur ending girl.... I love it

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

"What to say Stuti!!sort of lack of words to define your work the excitement & joy to read again n again😘💓💓💓

>> Ufff!

😆

From the Vivid discreption of Morningto that Beautiful song,

uhhh, loved the refreshing beginning you gave, For that Take a Bow

>> Thank you

And the selection of song "Alabela Sajan aayo ri"

I like this song particularly for the reason, This suits for them & i read this in one of the OS/SS on Akdha long back, today it gave a kind of happiness to read

>> Oh really? Can you tell me the name of that ss?

Agar yaad hota toh jarur mention karti😳 will search mil gaya toh will tell you.

Kshatrayani raised her weapon to protect.

And it sent a surge of relief and happiness,

Breath taking it was, don't know how many times reread this to sink in the euphoria it created.

>> Thank you so much dear... I enjoyed writing it as well.

Just a sentence is enough to bring a soothing end to a diasasterous night😳

Can't discribe in words, how it felt at the End created endless desperation to read next part...

When will you give next one Stuti????

>> Dekhte hay

Why?😭 Atleast you can give a hope..

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The Start & End you gave was Tremendous Unprecedent Stupendous Fantastic

I'm unable to remove the scene infront of my eyes and now how much i want to praise the way you put the interactions i just don't want get out of the spell..

>> Bass bass! I am already red

But that's how your updates make me feel⭐️

Kudos to you dear Author

I will be back again with comment once again cause there is still whole Praise Worthy update i ignored

Sorry for the partial review but i can't help it

>> There will be more?

Yes, want give more, but then Rashmi updated her story & got busy, will do that. How can i ignore Ruku😆

You just made my day

>> You too

Thanks to you

>> Thank you so much for such a wonderful review dear

🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

You're welcome dear 🤗

What a chapter....👏.... and what an end😭...... should you stop there Stuti😈

What will I do till next update 😡😭😭

Extraordinary chapter..... the start was mesmerising......a beautiful start to the day with a beautiful person too....nothing can go wrong there...... BF ruined by Ruqaiya... and then man-eater hunting...... didn’t Ruqaiya not want to come too...😆.....

And the Kshtarani finally did take up arms to Protect ......Super