RiAnsh OS on Karva Chauth - Tu Hi Mere Rab Ki Tarah Hai ❤️ - Page 4

Ohmydz Darshiiiiii😲. This was amazing aaaand looong👏.

Finally that no man's land in their bed was eradicate.

Loved reading their entire day and how they worry about each other.

They say one thing but feel the other.

I loved the way you wrote it like soul mates.

Hinglish I struggle with but got there.

Wonderful

Do write more❤️🤗

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Amazing darshi 👍🏼

I love the small details u have written so beautiful ❤️

Beautifully written

Keep writing

Thank you Mariya..🤗

I love these small details..

Yeh chhoti chhoti baatein hi hai jo kahaani bunti hai..😳❤️

I will definitely write if an idea pops up.

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Eeshu 🤗❤️

Thank you thank you.. taareef ke liye shukriya I am flattered.😳

Finally the end result is here seems like KP na hua birbal ki khichdi ho gayi. 😆

I hope yeh OS tumhaare expectations pe khara utra ho...😳

Mirror scene was yours and Gauri’s farmaaish so maine puri kar di..😆🤗

Maine socha sirf Ridz hi kyun vrat rakhe?? Vansh ko bhi apni sweetheart ke liye vrat rakhna chaahiye naah..😆

Maine type kya kiya tha woh zyaada yaad nahi aaya but jitna aaya woh wapas se sab likha so it is what it is. But seems it turned out good.

Thank you again for loving it. , inspiring me and motivating me.🙏😁

Haan bahut hi acha tha yeh Darshi....

Mirror scene wala idea Gauri ka tha

Maine bas atheist vansh and riddhima keeping vrat with sincerity ka kaha tha..

@bold exactly. Dono ek dusre ke liye vrat rakhe yeh wala concept bahut acha lagta hai mujhe bhi..

@red 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Omg...this was sooooo sweet....plzzzz write more on riansh....plzzzz absolutely loved it ❤❤❤❤

Thank you dear for loving it .😊

I will try definitely if something comes up in my mind.

Originally posted by: merryyura

Haan bahut hi acha tha yeh Darshi....

Mirror scene wala idea Gauri ka tha

Maine bas atheist vansh and riddhima keeping vrat with sincerity ka kaha tha..

@bold exactly. Dono ek dusre ke liye vrat rakhe yeh wala concept bahut acha lagta hai mujhe bhi..

@red 🤗🤗🤗

Eeshu..🤗

Ya mujhe comments post karne ke baad yaad aaya mirror scene was Gauri’s idea.

Vansh didn’t want Ridz to keep vrat but Ridz kept it and Vansh too kept vrat unknowingly.😆

Originally posted by: TC_FA

it was so good

Thank you Tanika 🤗

Writers like you has inspired me.❤️

Originally posted by: aalina4734

This is Amazing..

Beautifully written..

Loved it!

Hi, Thank you for loving it.😊

Originally posted by: amritat

This is so beautiful...☺️

Thank you Amrita 🤗

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Haye!!! This was really beautiful.

I was blushing all the while ☺️☺️

Aww . ❤️ Thank you Anika..🤗

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Bohut khubsoorat OS hai darshi❤️

Aapki OS padhne ke baad mere dil mein aya-

Taarif karu kya uski jisne ye OS banaya

Thank you Asfia 🤗

Shayri ❤️

Aapne ki taarif woh padh ke humaara dil muskuraya...

Aapki shaayri ka andaaz humein bada pasand aaya..❤️