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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update 🥰

Quite long one though😆

Edited by MahiraSingh3030 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you ❣️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Awesome update 🥰

Quite long one though😆

Thanks..❣️😁

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One of Bali's most magnificent temples, Pura Luhur Uluwatu is located in Uluwatu. Uluwatu temple is renowned for its amazing location on the top of Bukit limestone cliffs, around 70m (230 feet) above sea level.

RAM- come fast...

Said Ram looking back at others who were climbing the stairs.

URMILA- oh god... I'm so tired..

Said Urmila stopping in between and keeping her hands on her waist.

LAKSHMAN- ok.. let's take a break here.. I will wait for you..

URMILA- aww..

Urmila pulls lakshman's cheek lightly as both of them took a break for sometime.

LAKSHMAN- you all continue.

Shatrughan nods and continued climbing the stairs. Ram Siya and Bharat Manvi reached at the top and look at the surrounding.

MANVI- wow.. this is beautiful..

Exclaimed Manvi looking at the temple. It has a north and south entrance, with a small forest in the front with monkeys, said to guard the temple.

RAM- The locals believe that the divine trinity of Brahma, Vishnu, and Shiva, become one at Uluwatu, and so the temples is a place of worship of Rudra, the Balinese Hindu god of all elements and protector against evil sea spirits.

Ram guided them with the information about the temple as he was checking it himself on his cellphone.

SIYA- wow..

Siya exclaimed listening to the given information. Lakshman Urmila and Shatrughan Shruti too joins them listening to Ram.

LAKSHMAN- what a beauty infront..

Said Lakshman looking at the sun going for the sunset.

RAM- let's go inside...

They started walking inside the temple. There were lots of monkeys in front by which Shruti and Urmila got scared. Lakshman started laughing at them and teasing them. Ram holds Siya's hand while she looks at her side to face him.


Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon

Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon


Ram smile at her indicating her to walk. She nods her head in yes and both of them started walking towards the rock.


Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak

Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu


They both stand in front of the temple premises and joins their hands to pray.


Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu


Ram looks at Siya who's eyes were closed, having a light smile on her face.


Sajdhe sar jukhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu..!!


Bharat and Manvi followed Ram and Siya to the temple. Manvi was about to slip at the entrance when bharat holds her hand.


Kaisi hai yeh doori, kaisi majboori

Meine nazron se tujhe choo liya


Manvi thanks him by a smile. They both headed forward and prayed together with their hands joined and eyes closed.


Oh ho ho Kabhi teri khusboo

Kabhi teri baatein

Bin mange yeh jahan pa liya


Urmila sighs finally once they reached at the door. Lakshman forwards her the water bottle and she smile taking it from her.


Tu hi dil ki hai raunak,

Tu hi janmo ki daulat

Aur kuch na janoo

Bas itna hi janoo


Urmila drinks the water and Lakshman smile looking at her. Her eyes falls on him and she asked him why he was looking at her.


Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu


Lakshman nods his head smiling. Urmila rolls her eyes and indicates him to follow her. They both moves towards the temple.


Sajdhe sar jukhta hai

Yaara mein kya karuo

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu..


Shatrughan and Shruti follows their elder siblings.


Cham cham aaye, mujhe tarsaye

Tera saaya ched ke chumta


Shatrughan was busy in his phone taking pictures of the walls when Shruti hits his shoulder. She indicated him to concentrate in praying.


Oh ho ho tu jo muskaye

Tu jo sharmaye

Jaise mera hai khuda jhumta


Shatrughan giggle at her scoldings and nods his head. He keeps his cellphone in his pocket and followed what Shruti told him


Tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hi meri ibadat

Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu


All the couples prayed together and leaves from the back door of the temple.


Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu


Ram indicates everyone to move towards the cliff side as there was going to be a performance held.


Sajdhe sar jukhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai

Yaara mein kya karu


Everyone got settled near the cliff side where some performers were performing a traditional skit and dance. A Kecak dance performance based on the Ramayana is performed daily in Uluwatu temple. Everyone there cheered them up by clapping their hands...

*****

At night, everyone were sitting for the dinner at the restaurant.

RAM- what would you all have.?

Asked Ram passing a menu card to Manvi.

MANVI- let siya dii and Urmila come.. then we will decide.?

Manvi suggested while Ram nods his head.

SHATRUGHAN- me to jyada kuch khaunga nahi. I am not at all feeling hungry..

Said Shatrughan having a glass of water.

SHRUTI- ha tumhe bhuk hogi bhi kyu.? Already you had lots of sandwiches at evening.

Said Shruti nodding her head in disbelief.

LAKSHMAN- true.. we all have told you to wait till dinner. But you didn't listened to us..

Lakshman hits his head while Shatrughan pouts at him.

BHARAT- where is bhabhi and Urmila..?

Asked Bharat looking around to check if both the ladies have came or not.

Here Siya and Urmila were moving towards the restaurant from their room. Suddenly Urmila thinks something

URMILA- dii...

Siya stops and faces her.

SIYA- what happened.?

URMILA- I left my cellphone in room..

Said Urmila apologising. Siya nods her head.

SIYA- Tum bhi na Urmila.. let it be now..

Suggested Siya while Urmila shook her head.

URMILA- no dii.. I'll bring it na. You wait for me here only. I will be back in 2 minutes..

Said Urmila running from there while Siya smile at her. She took out her cellphone from her handbag to message Ram - "we are coming in few minutes.." Suddenly someone bumped into her and her handbag falls down while the lady's handbag also fell.

LADY- I am so sorry...

The lady apologize and started picking Siya's handbag.

SIYA- it's ok ma'am. No need of this..

Siya said trying to pick her handbag herself but the lady denied.

LADY- no.. it's ok. It was my fault. I am so sorry..

The lady gets up handing Siya's purse to her. Siya smile at her.

SIYA- thank you..

The lady smile at Siya leaving from there. Siya dust her handbag once and looks at Urmila who was coming towards her.

URMILA- kya hua.?

Asked Urmila witnessing Siya dusting her bag.

SIYA- kuch nahi.. one lady got bumped into me..aur mera bag gir gaya.

URMILA- oh..

SIYA- you got your phone.?

Urmila nods in yes showing her the cellphone.

SIYA- ab chale.?

URMILA- yaa..

Siya and Urmila leaves from there to the restaurant where everyone were waiting for them.

SHRUTI- these two are here..

Siya and Urmila settled beside their respective partners.

MANVI- itni der kaha lag gayi.?

Asked Manvi while urmila looks at Siya requesting her to not tell everyone. Lakshman watches her doing this.

LAKSHMAN- hmm pata tha.. because if mila only...

Said lakshman nodding his head in disbelief while Siya giggle at them.

WAITER- excuse me sir.. bolehkah saya mengetahui pesanan anda?

Interrupts the waiter in the Indonesian language while everyone looks confused. The waiter understood looking at their expression.

WAITER- I am sorry. I was asking about your order, sir..

Ram smile nodding his head. Everyone gave their order and the waiter leaves from there.

RAM- siya.. ise apne pas rakhna..

Ram hands her his wallet and she opens her bag to keep it safe. Her eyes falls on an unknown wallet which she took in her hand.

SIYA- ye..!?

RAM- what happened.?

Asked Ram looking at her expressions.

SIYA- Ram. I think this wallet is of that lady..

Ram looks confused while Siya told him about what happened few moments back.

RAM- oh. So I think you should check with her identity card or anything.

Ram suggested her to check her wallet so that Siya could get any identity proof. She nods and started searching for something relevant when her eyes falls on that lady's identity card.

SIYA- there's a phone number.

Ram nods and Siya dialled the number.

LADY- hello.? Who's this.?

SIYA- hi.. actually I am the same person, we got bumped few minutes back. I hope you remember.?

Siya speaks on the phone looking at Ram. Rest everyone were busy in their own gossips.

LADY- ohh.. yes.?

The lady sounds confused.

SIYA- mistakenly, I got your wallet with me. Where should I return it to you.?

LADY- oh.. is it?. Then will it be possible if we meet at same place.?

Siya smile looking at Ram

SIYA- sure.. see you in a minute..

Siya hangs the call and turns to face Ram.

SIYA- I will just come..

RAM- should I come with you.?

Siya smile nodding her head in no. She excused herself and went near the same place where she has met the lady.

LADY- hii..

Siya smile at her and hands her the wallet.

LADY- thank you so much.. I troubled you, I am sorry..

SIYA- please don't feel that way. Fortunately I got your contact details from your identity card.

The lady became happy with Siya.

LADY- it seems you are an Indian..

SIYA- ya.. I am from Mumbai..

LADY- nice. I am from Chennai... My name is Manda Lankeshwar...

The lady introduced herself to Siya. For a moment Siya's concentration went to the lady's surname. Suddenly her cellphone interrupts her thoughts.

SIYA- excuse me..

Siya picks her call as it was from Lakshman.

SIYA- I am coming laksh.. give me a minute...

Said Siya on the call and turns to face Manda.

SIYA- I have to leave. Nice meeting you..

MANDA- same here... And thank you once again...

Siya smile at her and leaves from there while Manda too leaves from there at her way...

*****

References:

Song: "Tujhme Rab dikhta hai"- Rab ne bana di jodi (2008 movie)

*****

What will happen next..??

Stay tuned...

Edited by ILuvAnya - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali170299

Wow....suspense started🤭😉..

Itna bada bhi suspense nahi hoga. Just a trailer for the upcoming sequences 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello everyone

Hope you all are doing well

I am not able to update due to my busy schedule.

I will surely update regularly once I get free.

Stay tuned.❣️❣️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey, Though till date I was just a silent reader who just look after the update every morning after waking up but after waiting for soo long I just can't wait moreeee so please please please please update soon yaar....

You are just a fab writer who just make addicted of your writing skills so please update soon naaa...😭

Desperately waiting for the update..

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Originally posted by: Urmila54

Hey, Though till date I was just a silent reader who just look after the update every morning after waking up but after waiting for soo long I just can't wait moreeee so please please please please update soon yaar....

You are just a fab writer who just make addicted of your writing skills so please update soon naaa...😭

Desperately waiting for the update..

.

.

Welcome to the FF❣️

Thanku so much for these words.🤗

I am definitely going to update don't worry about that.😁

Stay tuned, stay connected..🤗❣️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ya sure... Will eagerly wait for the update......❤️❤️😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila54

Ya sure... Will eagerly wait for the update......❤️❤️😃

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