ArHi FF: Incandescent (Completed) | Extra Scene | Page 133 | 25/06 - Page 83

Nice addition. Khushi is concerned about his family and at the same time, can't keep her wistfulness about spending time with the family. Payal as a true friend worried about Khushi and her relationship with Arnav without any obligation.

Good one.

Cheers...

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Thank you so much for the extra

Beautiful! I think I'm going to start re-reading it! Brought up so many memories!

Cheers and thank you for the extra love!

A nice surprise to have the extra chapter. We know how things worked out in the end. This little glimpse was like icing.

It's an amazing ff

The first I start reading, I thought it would be some dark ff but as the story goes with flow and how the characters are developed in the story is just amazing. The way you showed their emotions and how understanding they were left me amazed.

With the story I even thoroughly enjoyed the comment on parts.

You have developed the story so amazingly and I would love to read more stories from you.

Updated my comment on page 133.

Cheers.....

Thank you thank you so much for the extra scene really appreciate it

Also wanted to to ask if your going to be starting a new ffs any time soon

Hi I am new to this forum!😃 but an Old arshi fan😉and I am really Happy and feeling content after reading this ff and I appreciate the way you have written this story both beautiful and different from the normal stories and the way you have started is so awesome and the way you have included the past in between is utmost superb totally I enjoyed reading this and I hope to read more stories from you!❤️

Good luck & God bless you 👏

wowwww, happen to be back to the forum and find this story, and it is completed!! I have just glanced through and I'm in love with your writing style, I plan to read this!!

I have complete reading this in one go!!! Thought this concept is not new, you write it beautifully in a very delicate way, no nece.ssary drama or twists, just beautiful emotional outfall with passion and love, I'm in love with Khushi's conversations after Arnav's confession and proposal, they will hate each other for doing things for the sake of the other party and she doesn't want him to do it half-heartedly. The choice of words are smart and the development of characters, their relationship and emotion are reasonable and well-justified. I have usuallyread stories of only known authors these days but I clicked in this story as I was captivated by the story name, and I'm glad that I did, the story is as beautiful and mesmerizing as its name. Please accept my buddy request and let me know if you decide to write more stories.