ARHI FF: To Tempt a Songbird - Chapter Eight Updated! - Page 5

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So, Naksh knows as a matter of fact, but, has no intention in helping Khushi achieve her dream.

Arnav made Khushi aware of what is happening right now and what is going to happen later.

He was so sure about most of the things which are happening in Khushi's life. How did he find out about Khushi's dreams? Like Malik's Shashi also doesn't want his daughter to sing on the radio. Khushi is miserable and anyone who helps her achieve her dream will look like a messiah to her. Poor thing, what is she going to do now?

Loving the story.

Cheers....

Very nice story thus far. I like your dialogue for Arnav and Khushi. You write Arnav very witty and smart. I like that he seems one step ahead of everyone else. Wonder what happened to the family. Feel sorry for Khushi.

Arnav is probably right. Naksh and his family may not be happy with her dreams and aspirations.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Arnav is probably right. Naksh and his family may not be happy with her dreams and aspirations.

Thank you for your regular comments.

Originally posted by: LoLo

Very nice story thus far. I like your dialogue for Arnav and Khushi. You write Arnav very witty and smart. I like that he seems one step ahead of everyone else. Wonder what happened to the family. Feel sorry for Khushi.

Thank you. You know, dialogues are most difficult for me to write. I struggle with them the most. Arnav is indeed a step ahead. Let's see what Khushi is going to do about her own steps.

Originally posted by: Savera84

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So, Naksh knows as a matter of fact, but, has no intention in helping Khushi achieve her dream.

Arnav made Khushi aware of what is happening right now and what is going to happen later.

He was so sure about most of the things which are happening in Khushi's life. How did he find out about Khushi's dreams? Like Malik's Shashi also doesn't want his daughter to sing on the radio. Khushi is miserable and anyone who helps her achieve her dream will look like a messiah to her. Poor thing, what is she going to do now?

Loving the story.

Cheers....

Thank you for your comments. They have been a treat honestly.

Arnav gave her plenty to think about. About him finding out Sitare, it was through her Master, as he mentioned. You are right about Khushi. She's a true damsel in distress right now and anyone who comes helping will be a knight.

Is it possible to not like Arnav? 😆

I mean his “past” and that vulnerability along with being so forthright reels me in every damn time!

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Is it possible to not like Arnav? 😆

I mean his “past” and that vulnerability along with being so forthright reels me in every damn time!

You don't have to like this Arnav, as long as he makes you feel something (even dislike), I'll feel like I have done my job. 😉

Khushi wants to be a professional singer n dreamt of becoming successful but neither her parents nor her future husband has plans to give her dream a reality n Arnav just confirmed her doubts n also advised her to act fast or else it would be too late.