Riansh OS - I , Wife of a Criminal - Page 5

Originally posted by: arryline

Brilliant Amrita !!!

Your words provided much needed clarity from Riddhima’s POV

Hope someday we get to see such scene !!!

Do keep writing more 😊

Thanks...🤗

Originally posted by: ria2794

this was brilliant. i just wished same would have happened without any of that over dramatic effect

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: ILTHBEB

Wahoo👏 brilliant. You should write ff

Thanks...I'll try to write another OS, if not FF. 😊

Originally posted by: Wynn

Wow Amritat, beautifully written viewpoint of Rhiddima's journey so far..lovely analysis and intruiging ending...I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue with the OS

Thanks...😊

I hope to write a part 2...

Originally posted by: Sofna

Wow this was absolutely amazing!👏

You are a brilliant writer.

It was soo engrossing whilst taking us through Ridhimas thoughts, feelings, dilemma and conflict.

I loved how it started off with her having no feelings at all for him to bring unnerved with the reason she was here anymore.

Please write more.

Thank you for pm❤️

Thanks a lot Sofna for your kind words...😊

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Amrita...🤗

Wow 🤩 just wow..

I always loved to read the episode updates given by you. And today you have fulfilled all of our wishes by giving us this OS..

This one is amazing..👏

You are a beautiful writer 😍

You have penned down Riddhima’s thoughts so beautifully... It was flowing from her first meeting to the lion to her entering into the lion’s den to becoming to lion’s lioness. ( yet she has not turned into lioness yet - I am looking forward to a continuation of this..)

She being absolutely hating the sight of this man to checking him out..😆😉

N then slowly the thoughts of her mind is totally captured by her husband. And shift in her POV towards him.

Just loved it.❤️

Keep on giving us the beautiful stories like this..

Thanks Darshi...🤗You too have wonderfully captured the essence of this OS!

Originally posted by: MudrasV

Nice update

Thanks... 😊

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Nice...

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk

Oh wow I love it,

You wrote your words while still keeping the essence and places in the show in your story and made it easy to read and relate

OS Nah Sweetheart we want more 😆

Thanks for letting me know Amrita and I really love it

Thanks...😊

I might write a part 2 soon...

Originally posted by: Smirna.vava

Wow awesome.beautifully written.

Thanks...😊