Riansh OS - I , Wife of a Criminal - Page 3

Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Wow!! This is absolutely amazing... 👏 👏 👏

You have summed up everything so brilliantly...

I could actually imagine Riddhima sitting all alone having all these flashbacks, wondering about Vansh, thinking about her life, how it has changed and how she has seen different shades of Vansh...

I wish CVs take an idea from here and show something similar in the show also...

I just loved reading it... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Do write more... 🤗

Thank you so much Nikita... 😊

There were a few things that really bothered me...like, why didn't Riddhima ever get scared that Vansh might molest her? Or doubt Kabir's accusations? I added those in my OS.

Glad you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: merryyura

This is so beautiful amrita

So perfectly summed up at the same time it feels like I'm reading something new totally.

I can read this not just once, but many times.

Keep writing more like this amrita..

You're amazing!! 👍🏼

Thanks Eesha...😃

@bold - That's a big compliment...🤗

Oh wow I love it,

You wrote your words while still keeping the essence and places in the show in your story and made it easy to read and relate

OS Nah Sweetheart we want more 😆

Thanks for letting me know Amrita and I really love it

Originally posted by: the-havelgirl03

Awesome os❤️

Thanks...😊

Wow awesome.beautifully written.

Originally posted by: Lipstickqueen

It was very engrossing and I felt like you were Riddhima. Well done Amrita 👏👏👏. Keep going please as I would like to know how this turns out. You have a natural ability.

Thanks...🤗

I might write a part 2...which will be the separation track.

Originally posted by: LostTraveller

I love it. Its written so well. Absolutely wonderful. Please write more.

Thanks...😊

Originally posted by: s_lover

Wow Amrita your writing skills are something else.

Too detailed, It gave me a new feel.

Please keep on writing whenever you have time.

Thanks for sharing with us

Thanks...☺️

Awesome how beautifully you have penned down it👏👏👏 brilliant

Oh I loved it. Very well written and neat and crisp.I like both of your Vansh and Riddhima. Thanks. No a second thought,do you mind to continue the story forward?