riansh os: alive - Page 4

Originally posted by: annie2248

Wow!! I still have goosebumps. 👏

This is just phenomenal.

You are awesome🤗

Thank you so much Annie!!

Originally posted by: Wynn

Wow, absolutely beautiful, creatative poetry, words in motion coming alive with each stanza, a real gift in creative writing, thank you for the OS.

Thank you so much for your comment Wynn!

It was very greatly appreciated. 🤗

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

flowed really well, thanks so much for sharing!

Thank you so much for your comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Gur🤗❤️

So glad to see you back.. Hope you are doing fine now.

Read in the afternoon itself but couldn’t comment. Read again and its beautifully penned..

Superb 👏

More than an OS its like poetry in motion...

Riddhu and her fears and Vansh assuring her by being her side..❤️ beautiful 😍

I am so happy to read something from you after so long.. this is lovely..🤩

D!! I've missed you.🤗

Yeahh, I'm feeling much better since we last spoke. Upar se I got a bit of work to do so uss mein bhi busy hogayi thi. 😆

How have you been? Still a busy bumbling bee? 😆

Aahh, thank you so much! <3

I was a bit apprehensive about it tbh, since it's very different from how I used to write in the past. But I guess that's a good sign, cuz as a writer you should always be growing, and improving. :)

I'm hoping to put out some longer pieces as well!

Originally posted by: param18

Soo so beautifulllll😍😍😍great job💯💜

Thank you! 🤗

Originally posted by: ShumiM

It is wonderful .please do write more. Thanks

Thanks Shumi! 🤗

Gur this is just Woww!!!!

So beautifully u summed up her inner turmoil... her fight with self ... her conquest to come in terms with her own feelings for HER MAN!!

I think the unspoken ...yet soulful bond of RIANSH has always been so strong even in the show

They hardly interact ... forget share their feelings with each other

Yet so much attraction ... so much passion ... so much intensity!!

Loved it!!

😃

Wow Gur, this was very intense. Ridz's emotions u wrote it perfectly man, i could feel it all. I am still having goosebumps. Superbly written👏👏

Originally posted by: HeytzMaaneet

Gur this is just Woww!!!!

So beautifully u summed up her inner turmoil... her fight with self ... her conquest to come in terms with her own feelings for HER MAN!!

I think the unspoken ...yet soulful bond of RIANSH has always been so strong even in the show

They hardly interact ... forget share their feelings with each other

Yet so much attraction ... so much passion ... so much intensity!!

Loved it!!

😃

Thank you so much!! <3

I agree. Much more than their spoken words, it's in their silences that so much gets said. There is so much going on, a lot that they're still trying to figure out, and they'll work it all out little by little.

Originally posted by: SoniRSippu21

Wow Gur, this was very intense. Ridz's emotions u wrote it perfectly man, i could feel it all. I am still having goosebumps. Superbly written👏👏

Thank you Soni.