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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Everyone is leaving the mansion but I stopped Rajeev as I need to discuss something.


Rajeev beta zara rukho, mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.

Woh Anmol ke baare mein.

Kaise jaa raha hai uske case ki sunwai?

Kab milega usse insaaf hamein insaaf?

Kab pakdenge yeh police wale uss kathil chamboor ko?

Kuch kar bhi rahe hai yaa nahi woh log.

Jaante haina beech majhdhaar mein maara gaya hai mere chote ko.

Toh teen saal hogaye lekin ek kathil ko nahi pakad sake aap log.

Kya kar rahe hai aap log baith ke tamasha dekh rahe hai ke

Kaise woh mujrim ghoom raha hai hamari sadko pe?

Aakhir kab tak intezaar karna padega hamein? Batao beta

Kab tak Bahu yunhi ghoot thi rahegi?

Kab tak hum sab yunh ladte rahenge aise hi?

Kab tak yun gumsum baithe rahenge hum re baba?


Main ab Kuch nahi jaanti jitni Jaldi ho sakhe yeh case ko suljhayiye.

Mujrim ko saza dilaao Rajeev beta.

Usse phansi pe chadao.

Ab hum aur intezaar nahi kar sakte.

Aur hum Isse zyada apni bahu ko tadapte hue nahi dekh sakte.

Aap mujhse vada kijiye ke aap jald se jald Anmol ko insaaf dilaayenge

Bas.

Puja was completed but everyone was completely disturbed seeing pooja crying and running away from there… I too opted to go out from the mansion witnessing all these but Buaji interrupted me.


"Rajeev beta zara rukho, mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai", Bua asked me.


"Haan aunty ji kahiye na.... Kya baat karni hai aapko mujhse ?" I was really surprised and curious as She interrogated me with many questions regarding Anmol's case....


Woh shaayad pehli baar mujhse itne saare baatein sawal ke tor par kar rahi hai isliye mein hairan ho gaya tha.... Par Aunty ji ki man mein case se related itne saare sawaal paida hona bhi jaayaz hai. Isiliye maine unhe poori baat apni tarike se samjhane ki poori koshish ki.


"Aunty ji aap case ke baare mein soch kar zyada tension mat lijiye..... Main saari updates pooja bhabhi ko dete aa raha hoon.... Main aapko purani baatein phir se yaad dilakar taklif nahi dena chahta.... Par, aap jathi haina murder case hain... Isliye bahut saara complications mere matlab hai bahut dhikath ho rahi hai. Par aap fikar mat kijiye sab theek ho jayega.


Police wale bhi jee jaan lagaa kar poori koshish kar rahe hain saare sabut dhoondh mein... Aur kaathil tak pahunchne mein.. Par isme abhi bhi thoda waqt lagega par namumkin toh nahi hai....


Aap khud jaanti haina chahe jitna bhi samay lage, jitni bhi koshish kyun na kare sach kabhi chupaye nahi chupta..... Aaj tak joh bhi case maine lada hai, hamesha jee jaan lagakar lada hai maine..Yeh toh mere dost ka maamla hai, uske nyay ka sawaal hai... Main use bhi pooja bhabhi aur aap sabko kabhi haarne nahi dunga… waqt zaroor lagega par asli kathil tak zaroor pahunchenge hum. Main uss mujrim ko kabhi nahi chodunga aur usse kadi se kadi sazaa bhi dilwaunga...woh ab zyada din tak azaad nahi ghoomega... Jab use kanoon sazaa degi tab jaake hum sabko shanti milegi.... Anmol ki insaaf bhi milega aur uss mujrim ko sazaa bhi. Vaada yeh mera aap se Aunty ji.


Bas thoda aur samay dijiye mujhe... Thoda aur vishwas kijiye mujhpar...Anmol keliye ye hamari akhri ladai hain... "


Bua ji was so emotional and all were already upset with Pooja and Abir... She was never vocal about it but it echoed silently... She became very impatient and wanted Anmol's murderer to get punished as soon as possible


"Vaada karta hoon mein aapse Aunty ji, mein bahut jald sab kuch teek kardunga, Anmol ko insaaf dilayenge lekin tab tak aapko Abir Bhai aur bhabhi ko...." I promised to bua and was about to say something when little angel aditi came running to Bua with teary eyes ...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Puja was completed but everyone was completely disturbed seeing pooja crying and running away from there… I too opted to go out from the mansion witnessing all these but Buaji interrupted me.


"Rajeev beta zara rukho, mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai", Bua asked me.


"Haan aunty ji kahiye na.... Kya baat karni hai aapko mujhse ?" I was really surprised and curious as She interrogated me with many questions regarding Anmol's case....


Woh shaayad pehli baar mujhse itne saare baatein sawal ke tor par kar rahi hai isliye mein hairan ho gaya tha.... Par Aunty ji ki man mein case se related itne saare sawaal paida hona bhi jaayaz hai. Isiliye maine unhe poori baat apni tarike se samjhane ki poori koshish ki.


"Aunty ji aap case ke baare mein soch kar zyada tension mat lijiye..... Main saari updates pooja bhabhi ko dete aa raha hoon.... Main aapko purani baatein phir se yaad dilakar taklif nahi dena chahta.... Par, aap jathi haina murder case hain... Isliye bahut saara complications mere matlab hai bahut dhikath ho rahi hai. Par aap fikar mat kijiye sab theek ho jayega.


Police wale bhi jee jaan lagaa kar poori koshish kar rahe hain saare sabut dhoondh mein... Aur kaathil tak pahunchne mein.. Par isme abhi bhi thoda waqt lagega par namumkin toh nahi hai....


Aap khud jaanti haina chahe jitna bhi samay lage, jitni bhi koshish kyun na kare sach kabhi chupaye nahi chupta..... Aaj tak joh bhi case maine lada hai, hamesha jee jaan lagakar lada hai maine..Yeh toh mere dost ka maamla hai, uske nyay ka sawaal hai... Main use bhi pooja bhabhi aur aap sabko kabhi haarne nahi dunga… waqt zaroor lagega par asli kathil tak zaroor pahunchenge hum. Main uss mujrim ko kabhi nahi chodunga aur usse kadi se kadi sazaa bhi dilwaunga...woh ab zyada din tak azaad nahi ghoomega... Jab use kanoon sazaa degi tab jaake hum sabko shanti milegi.... Anmol ki insaaf bhi milega aur uss mujrim ko sazaa bhi. Vaada yeh mera aap se Aunty ji.


Bas thoda aur samay dijiye mujhe... Thoda aur vishwas kijiye mujhpar...Anmol keliye ye hamari akhri ladai hain... "


Bua ji was so emotional and all were already upset with Pooja and Abir... She was never vocal about it but it echoed silently... She became very impatient and wanted Anmol's murderer to get punished as soon as possible


"Vaada karta hoon mein aapse Aunty ji, mein bahut jald sab kuch teek kardunga, Anmol ko insaaf dilayenge lekin tab tak aapko Abir Bhai aur bhabhi ko...." I promised to bua and was about to say something when little angel aditi came running to Bua with teary eyes ...

Rajeev beta aap kuch bhi kijiye bas yeh Anmol ki karwaai ko jaldi se insaaf dilaao.

Vishwas kiya hai Tum par humne beta khas tor pe Bahut ne.

Vishwas mat thodiye hamara.

I was about to say something just then Aditi interrupted.

Bua Dadi, Bua Dadi mumma chachu ke kamre mein ro rahi hai aur

Mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahti, said aditi while crying.

Acha, beta tum yehi sofa pe baithe raho main jaake tumhari mumma ko leke aati hoon.


Jai Shri Krishn Rajeev beta.

Main zara aati hoon.

I left the place to check Pooja.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Rajeev beta aap kuch bhi kijiye bas yeh Anmol ki karwaai ko jaldi se insaaf dilaao.

Vishwas kiya hai Tum par humne beta khas tor pe Bahut ne.

Vishwas mat thodiye hamara.

I was about to say something just then Aditi interrupted.

Bua Dadi, Bua Dadi mumma chachu ke kamre mein ro rahi hai aur

Mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahti, said aditi while crying.

Acha, beta tum yehi sofa pe baithe raho main jaake tumhari mumma ko leke aati hoon.


Jai Shri Krishn Rajeev beta.

Main zara aati hoon.

I left the place to check Pooja.


Aditi came running to Bua complaining that her momma is weeping hard. She was crying and struggling to even to emote her agony....


"It's really heart wrenching to see a little girl breaking down seeing her mother in such anguished state. She was clearly puzzled to witness her mother going through a trauma in front of her eyes but she hasn't reached the stage yet to understand what's happening around..


Bua ji immediately after getting to know about Pooja's state from the kid. She asked the kid to stay there and let her go and take her mumma along with her.. Bua left the place heading to Anmol's room to look after Bhabhi. The little kid is left alone in stressful mode there all alone.


I was about to leave but I couldn't as I saw the little kid weeping around in an empty Hall lonely wandering her mother.. I approached the little kid and went down to my knees matching her height.


"Heyy!! Baby doll…..idhar aao uncle ke paas . Aap pehle apne rona band kijiye.....ache bache aise nahi rote. ...." I wiped her little teary eyes.


"Hmmmm…Toh ab batao kya hua? Kyun ro rahi thi aap? Mummy ko dekh ke.? Very bad ah.. Aap ko toh mumma ko strength deni chahiye. Lekin yeh kya aap toh ro rahe ho.. Accha! Toh main ab samjha mumma ko rote dekh aap pareshan ho, right? Iss mein pareshaani ki kya baat hai betu? Aap ko kabhi kisi ki yaad aati hai toh aap kya karti ho? Aaap bhi thoda sa rothi ho na ya phir gussa karti ho. Waise hi mumma ko bhi koi yaad aa gaya hoga.. Isiliye thodi der rokhe phir bahar aa jayegi.. Lekin jab woh bahar aayegi aur aapko yuhn rote hue dekhegi toh aur bhi pareshan hogi na… mumma ko pareshaan karna hai kya? Nahi na, toh jaldi se ache bacchon ki tarah apni aankhen pocho aur vimla maasi ke saath jaake khane khalo taake aap apni mumma ko khila sako unki favorite dish.. Surprise… theek haina. Ab jaldi jao aur chodna mat Vimla maasi ko.. ", I responded to Aditi.

I was able to cheer her back to mood and send her away with vimla. "Dhyan rakhna bacchi ka", I said to Vimla maasi …

I sighed*.. and finally left the mansion by 9.

(Credits to @Home786)

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I went to Anmol's room. I see a complete darkness in the room.

All I could hear was the fumbling voice of tears. It's Bahu who crouched on the floor shattered completely.

I approached Bahu quickly and sat beside her.

I shook her to bring her to consciousness and out of painful trance.



Bahu, Bahu sunn re.

Kya hua tujhe bahu kuch toh bol.

Aise chup mat raha kar bahu.

Kuch toh bol beta. Teri chuppi mujhe darra rahi hai bahu.

Bahu sunn rahi hai Tu

Bahu kuch toh bol re beta.

Bhagwaan ke liye kuch bol de Bahu, Anmol ke khatir hi kuch bolde.

Tujhe aise chup dekh kar sabse zyada taklif usse hi hogi.

Bahu, I scream with pain.

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Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

I went to Anmol's room. I see a complete darkness in the room.

All I could hear was the fumbling voice of tears. It's Bahu who crouched on the floor shattered completely.

I approached Bahu quickly and sat beside her.

I shook her to bring her to consciousness and out of painful trance.



Bahu, Bahu sunn re.

Kya hua tujhe bahu kuch toh bol.

Aise chup mat raha kar bahu.

Kuch toh bol beta. Teri chuppi mujhe darra rahi hai bahu.

Bahu sunn rahi hai Tu

Bahu kuch toh bol re beta.

Bhagwaan ke liye kuch bol de Bahu, Anmol ke khatir hi kuch bolde.

Tujhe aise chup dekh kar sabse zyada taklif usse hi hogi.

Bahu, I scream with pain.

I was sitting in a fix like a petrified soul and Bua tried her best to revive me back to consciousness. As soon as I came out of my trance, I saw Bua ji sitting beside me with tears. I quickly hugged her tightly and began to blurt out my emotions.


"Bua ji, Bua ji kyun kiya Anmol Ji mere saath aisa Bua ji? Kyun? Aisa vachan kyun liya mujhse jisse mein nibha nahi sakti? Kaise pura karun main Anmol Ji ki aakhri ichha? Kaise khush reh sakti hoon Main? Main na Bua ji roz ro thi hoon andar hi andar ghut ghut ke. Kyun hai itna kathor aap ka yeh bhagwaan? Kyun meri zindagi ki agnipariksha leta hai hamesha? Jab kuch cheen na hi tha do diya hi kyun? Ek pal me sab de kar ek hi pal sab mere aankhon ke saamne se cheen lete hai aap ka yeh bhagwaan. Kyun yeh bhagwaan unn sab logon ko cheen leta hai jisse mein pyaar karti hoon, jo meri zindagi ka hissa hai, kyun? Kyun koi khushiyaan mere paas aake rukhti nahi hai Bua ji? Kyun mujhse khush rehna ka haqq cheen lete hai aap ka yeh bhagwaan? Kyun char din ki roshni bhi naseeb nahi hoti mujhe? Aisa konsa paap kiya hai maine, bataiye na Bua ji? Mere saamne hi unhe itni berehami se maara gaya lekin main kuch nahi kar paayi Bua ji, Kuch nahi.. Aur maina Bua ji apne aap ko bahut hi mushkil se sambhal ke rakka hai Anmol Ji ko insaaf dilane haina warna main toh kab ki toot chuki hoti. Lekin jab jab yeh din aata haina tab sab kuch ek gehre zakm ki tarah dard hota hai Bua ji. Jab tak main uss insaan ko saza nahi dilwati na main haarungi nahi, Bua ji. Mere kadam tab tak daudenge jab tak uss mujrim ke kadam rukh nahi jaate hai. Main apne Anmol Ji ko insaaf dilaake hi chaein ki saans lungi. Lekin yeh dil roz tadapta Bua ji, kya karun iss ka? Bataiye na, Bua ji", I shattered completely in tears, screaming aloud emoting all my emotions by placing the head on Bua's shoulder..

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Originally posted by: Home786

I was sitting in a fix like a petrified soul and Bua tried her best to revive me back to consciousness. As soon as I came out of my trance, I saw Bua ji sitting beside me with tears. I quickly hugged her tightly and began to blurt out my emotions.


"Bua ji, Bua ji kyun kiya Anmol Ji mere saath aisa Bua ji? Kyun? Aisa vachan kyun liya mujhse jisse mein nibha nahi sakti? Kaise pura karun main Anmol Ji ki aakhri ichha? Kaise khush reh sakti hoon Main? Main na Bua ji roz ro thi hoon andar hi andar ghut ghut ke. Kyun hai itna kathor aap ka yeh bhagwaan? Kyun meri zindagi ki agnipariksha leta hai hamesha? Jab kuch cheen na hi tha do diya hi kyun? Ek pal me sab de kar ek hi pal sab mere aankhon ke saamne se cheen lete hai aap ka yeh bhagwaan. Kyun yeh bhagwaan unn sab logon ko cheen leta hai jisse mein pyaar karti hoon, jo meri zindagi ka hissa hai, kyun? Kyun koi khushiyaan mere paas aake rukhti nahi hai Bua ji? Kyun mujhse khush rehna ka haqq cheen lete hai aap ka yeh bhagwaan? Kyun char din ki roshni bhi naseeb nahi hoti mujhe? Aisa konsa paap kiya hai maine, bataiye na Bua ji? Mere saamne hi unhe itni berehami se maara gaya lekin main kuch nahi kar paayi Bua ji, Kuch nahi.. Aur maina Bua ji apne aap ko bahut hi mushkil se sambhal ke rakka hai Anmol Ji ko insaaf dilane haina warna main toh kab ki toot chuki hoti. Lekin jab jab yeh din aata haina tab sab kuch ek gehre zakm ki tarah dard hota hai Bua ji. Jab tak main uss insaan ko saza nahi dilwati na main haarungi nahi, Bua ji. Mere kadam tab tak daudenge jab tak uss mujrim ke kadam rukh nahi jaate hai. Main apne Anmol Ji ko insaaf dilaake hi chaein ki saans lungi. Lekin yeh dil roz tadapta Bua ji, kya karun iss ka? Bataiye na, Bua ji", I shattered completely in tears, screaming aloud emoting all my emotions by placing the head on Bua's shoulder..

I hugged back my Bahu with tears and tried to pacify her.

Bahu, ae Bahu kyun ro rahi hai re Tu?

Tu jaanti hai tujhe aise rote hue dekh kar sabko taklif hogi khas kal ki Anmol ko.

Bardaasht kar paayega woh yeh sab. Tujhe iss tarah taklif mein dekh kar kaisa lagta hoga usse, bata?

Kyun apne aap ko taklif de kar usse bhi dukhi kar rahi hai Tu?

Usne jo bhi kiya sirf aur sirf teri khushiyon ke liye kiya.

Teri raksha karne ke liye kiya. Jaate waqt usse sirf teri parwa thi Bahu.

Mat ro re Bahu. Beta Tu agar aise royegi toh kaise chalega re.

Teri hi himaat se yeh buddhi ab tak zinda hai. Kamzor karegi kya mujhe Tu.

Kya mujhe dukh nahi hota lekin main tum sab logon ke liye apne ghum ko pee jati hoon.

Aur yeh din har saal hum toh Anmol ke liye hi Pooja rakhte haina?

Bahu itni zakm mat de apne aap ko ke yeh zakm sukh hi naa paye.

Hum sab mil kar ladenge, yeh teri akeli ki jung nahi hai. Hum sabki hai.

Anmol ko zarur insaaf milega. Woh insaan hamari aankhon ke saamne phaansi pe chadega.

Woh din dur nahi Bahu. Itna sabar kar liya ab bas thode din aur.

Aane wali diwali se pehle yeh ravan ka anth zaroor hoga.

Bas ab Tu rona bandh kar.

Aur rahi baat tere aur Abir ke rishte ki toh hum yeh baad mein baat kar lenge.

Ab Tu rona bandh kar aur jaa jaake apne kapde badal ke aa jaa.

Arey kya pagal panti hai re Bahu.

Chal uth ab jaa Aditi ke kamre mein aur apne kapde badal. Main tum dono ke liye kuch khane ko bejhti hoon.

Theek hai.

Bas ab koi natak nahi Bahu. Jo keh rahi hoon waise kar.

Haan nahi toh kya meri rotlu bahu hamesha khud bhi ro thi hai aur yeh buddhi ko bhi rulate rehti hain.

Pagal ladki. Chal ab jaa.

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I hugged back my Bahu with tears and tried to pacify her.

Bahu, ae Bahu kyun ro rahi hai re Tu?

Tu jaanti hai tujhe aise rote hue dekh kar sabko taklif hogi khas kal ki Anmol ko.

Bardaasht kar paayega woh yeh sab. Tujhe iss tarah taklif mein dekh kar kaisa lagta hoga usse, bata?

Kyun apne aap ko taklif de kar usse bhi dukhi kar rahi hai Tu?

Usne jo bhi kiya sirf aur sirf teri khushiyon ke liye kiya.

Teri raksha karne ke liye kiya. Jaate waqt usse sirf teri parwa thi Bahu.

Mat ro re Bahu. Beta Tu agar aise royegi toh kaise chalega re.

Teri hi himaat se yeh buddhi ab tak zinda hai. Kamzor karegi kya mujhe Tu.

Kya mujhe dukh nahi hota lekin main tum sab logon ke liye apne ghum ko pee jati hoon.

Aur yeh din har saal hum toh Anmol ke liye hi Pooja rakhte haina?

Bahu itni zakm mat de apne aap ko ke yeh zakm sukh hi naa paye.

Hum sab mil kar ladenge, yeh teri akeli ki jung nahi hai. Hum sabki hai.

Anmol ko zarur insaaf milega. Woh insaan hamari aankhon ke saamne phaansi pe chadega.

Woh din dur nahi Bahu. Itna sabar kar liya ab bas thode din aur.

Aane wali diwali se pehle yeh ravan ka anth zaroor hoga.

Bas ab Tu rona bandh kar.

Aur rahi baat tere aur Abir ke rishte ki toh hum yeh baad mein baat kar lenge.

Ab Tu rona bandh kar aur jaa jaake apne kapde badal ke aa jaa.

Arey kya pagal panti hai re Bahu.

Chal uth ab jaa Aditi ke kamre mein aur apne kapde badal. Main tum dono ke liye kuch khane ko bejhti hoon.

Theek hai.

Bas ab koi natak nahi Bahu. Jo keh rahi hoon waise kar.

Haan nahi toh kya meri rotlu bahu hamesha khud bhi ro thi hai aur yeh buddhi ko bhi rulate rehti hain.

Pagal ladki. Chal ab jaa.

I gave a big hug to Bua Ji with happy tears of solace.

" Thank you Bua ji, ek maa ki tarah mujhe sambhal ne ke liye. Mujhe har pal yeh yaad dilaane ke liye ki main akeli nahi hoon aur yeh jung meri akele ke nahi hum sabki hai. Mujhe hehsaas dilane ke liye ke meri zindagi yehi khatam nahi hui. Aap sab hai mere liye aur Aditi woh toh meri jaan hai. Main aap sabko chod kar Kaha jaungi. Anmol ji ka haath thaam kar iss ghar mein aayi thi ab meri aakhri saans tak yehi unn ke aashiyane mein apna dum bhi thodungi.


Ab nahi harungi kyunke mujhe pata hai jab tak aap ka aashirvaad aur apka pyar mere saath hai main kabhi nahi harungi.. Ab aap isse pehle ke mujhe daante main jaake kapde badal leti hoon. Sukriya Bua ji", I walked away from there to Aditi's room with little ease.

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I gave a big hug to Bua Ji with happy tears of solace.

" Thank you Bua ji, ek maa ki tarah mujhe sambhal ne ke liye. Mujhe har pal yeh yaad dilaane ke liye ki main akeli nahi hoon aur yeh jung meri akele ke nahi hum sabki hai. Mujhe hehsaas dilane ke liye ke meri zindagi yehi khatam nahi hui. Aap sab hai mere liye aur Aditi woh toh meri jaan hai. Main aap sabko chod kar Kaha jaungi. Anmol ji ka haath thaam kar iss ghar mein aayi thi ab meri aakhri saans tak yehi unn ke aashiyane mein apna dum bhi thodungi.


Ab nahi harungi kyunke mujhe pata hai jab tak aap ka aashirvaad aur apka pyar mere saath hai main kabhi nahi harungi.. Ab aap isse pehle ke mujhe daante main jaake kapde badal leti hoon. Sukriya Bua ji", I walked away from there to Aditi's room with little ease.

I am pleased to see her ease with her sorrows and I am happy my words founded her solace of comfort.

Acha Tu ab jaa re. Bas saare nautanki mere hi bhagye mein leekein thei.

Ek beta jo dangh se baat nahi karta, apna muh hi nahi kholta aur ek Bahu jiss ke aansu aur baatein khatam hi nahi hote. Lekin Abir ke saamne toh maun vrat rakh leti hai.

Kya hoga re inn dono ka. Mera kya hoga jo unhe jhel rahi hoon.


I locked Anmol's room and headed to check on Abir in the urge to suggest him to have a word with Pooja.

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ABIR SINGHANIA:


Three years. Three years have passed and still, still now, no one in this family has been able to move on from the grave loss. His smile still haunts me to this day, I feel guilty that even after these years, I am not able to bring him justice. I feel guilty that I am not able to fulfill his only request from me. He wanted me to keep Pooja happy, to make this family move on but I am failing. Yess, I am failing to keep up Anmol's promise, his undying wish..


Pooja, the one who finally got peace and love in her life’s after years of hell, again is pushed into the darkness of loneliness where she doesn’t let anyone enter except him and his memories. I have tried, multiple times, to be able to enter into her world, to get her trust but she has closed off all the way into her realm.


Bua, the same bua who had accepted Pooja wholeheartedly now has deep down created a barrier between them which even she doesn’t notice. She had let her superstition go when Pooja brought happiness in the family but somewhere deep down, it has woke again after that incident. She blames Pooja's fate for that, she never lets it show but I can see it in her eyes, her body language. But one thing to be honest, Bua loves Pooja a lot as a daughter..


If there is one person in this family who is oblivious to what is happening, it is Aditi. Her innocence is her weapon to sadness and grieve. The only thing she knows is that her chachu has gone somewhere far, among the stars where he is watching down upon us. He is testing me and everyone else, seeing how we all will do without him. All she wants is the motherly love from Pooja and she's cherishing the happiness amidst all unexplained sorrows..


I closed my eyes and began to feel Anmol's presence here, "Bhai, kya hua itni udaasi? Kyun Bhai? Jaante haina aapke chehre pe udaasi nahi dekh sakta main. Nahi dekh sakta aapke yeh aansooo joh sabse choop ke behte hain. Kya Bhai yahan aap ro rahe ho aur wahan meri Pooja. Sirf itni guzaarish ki thi maine aap dono se ke hamesha khush rehna ek dusre ke saath rehna lekin aap log yunh apne aap ko taklif de kar mujhe bhi taklif de raho. Main kahin nahi gaya. Main yahin hoon aapke paas, aap sabke paas. Bas meri Pooja ka khayal rakhna Bhai", said Anmol. I opened my eyes. The room was dark and the little light coming from the window caused monstrous forms to be taken from the objects in the room. I got up from the bed and headed towards the balcony. I went outside, letting the cold air blow on me. It felt like home there, it almost felt like Anmol was present right there, comforting me, trying to tell me that I will always be there for you.



As I broke out my trance, I could hear Bua and Pooja's voices weeping hard. I headed towards Anmol's room where I witnessed their breakdown. I had heard and witnessed Pooja's breakdown. It hurt me, it hurt me every time, I saw her like that. She rarely ever lets her feelings out, she bottles her emotions up so much that when the bottle finally overflows, it creates a waterfall. A waterfall of tears and anger. Tears for Anmol and Anger for the person who dared to harm him.


(Credit to Shristi@AnonymouslyS)



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Originally posted by: Home786

ABIR SINGHANIA:


Three years. Three years have passed and still, still now, no one in this family has been able to move on from the grave loss. His smile still haunts me to this day, I feel guilty that even after these years, I am not able to bring him justice. I feel guilty that I am not able to fulfill his only request from me. He wanted me to keep Pooja happy, to make this family move on but I am failing. Yess, I am failing to keep up Anmol's promise, his undying wish..


Pooja, the one who finally got peace and love in her life’s after years of hell, again is pushed into the darkness of loneliness where she doesn’t let anyone enter except him and his memories. I have tried, multiple times, to be able to enter into her world, to get her trust but she has closed off all the way into her realm.


Bua, the same bua who had accepted Pooja wholeheartedly now has deep down created a barrier between them which even she doesn’t notice. She had let her superstition go when Pooja brought happiness in the family but somewhere deep down, it has woke again after that incident. She blames Pooja's fate for that, she never lets it show but I can see it in her eyes, her body language. But one thing to be honest, Bua loves Pooja a lot as a daughter..


If there is one person in this family who is oblivious to what is happening, it is Aditi. Her innocence is her weapon to sadness and grieve. The only thing she knows is that her chachu has gone somewhere far, among the stars where he is watching down upon us. He is testing me and everyone else, seeing how we all will do without him. All she wants is the motherly love from Pooja and she's cherishing the happiness amidst all unexplained sorrows..


I closed my eyes and began to feel Anmol's presence here, "Bhai, kya hua itni udaasi? Kyun Bhai? Jaante haina aapke chehre pe udaasi nahi dekh sakta main. Nahi dekh sakta aapke yeh aansooo joh sabse choop ke behte hain. Kya Bhai yahan aap ro rahe ho aur wahan meri Pooja. Sirf itni guzaarish ki thi maine aap dono se ke hamesha khush rehna ek dusre ke saath rehna lekin aap log yunh apne aap ko taklif de kar mujhe bhi taklif de raho. Main kahin nahi gaya. Main yahin hoon aapke paas, aap sabke paas. Bas meri Pooja ka khayal rakhna Bhai", said Anmol. I opened my eyes. The room was dark and the little light coming from the window caused monstrous forms to be taken from the objects in the room. I got up from the bed and headed towards the balcony. I went outside, letting the cold air blow on me. It felt like home there, it almost felt like Anmol was present right there, comforting me, trying to tell me that I will always be there for you.



As I broke out my trance, I could hear Bua and Pooja's voices weeping hard. I headed towards Anmol's room where I witnessed their breakdown. I had heard and witnessed Pooja's breakdown. It hurt me, it hurt me every time, I saw her like that. She rarely ever lets her feelings out, she bottles her emotions up so much that when the bottle finally overflows, it creates a waterfall. A waterfall of tears and anger. Tears for Anmol and Anger for the person who dared to harm him.


(Credit to Shristi@AnonymouslyS)



I see Abir witnessing mine's and Bahu's talk.

Abir tune sab dekh liya na. Chalo, acha hua ke tu sab jaan hi gaya. Maine samjha diya bahu ko apni taraf se.

Ek baar tu bhi baat karle. Mujhse zyada teri baatein asar karegi uss pe.

Jaa beta baat karle bahu se.


Just by nodding yes, he headed to Aditi's room.

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