PreRish: Moments P151 Just to say.. NOTE P153 new link! - Page 80

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

132.6k

Users

43

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

jagrutid thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

☺️ so cute Kuki ☺️


She's really sweet

WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago
woh aise hi Jake perched herself on the counter and then hugged her mom by her legs aww ☺️ saying thank you for saying yes ☺️ .

Where you and pa childhood sugar hearts ☺️

jagrutid thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

woh aise hi Jake perched herself on the counter and then hugged her mom by her legs aww ☺️ saying thank you for saying yes ☺️ .

Where you and pa 'childhood sugar hearts ☺️


Thats the best bit in that moment I think.. sugar hearts 😆

WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid


Thats the best bit in that moment I think.. sugar hearts 😆

kuki has been developed as sugar hearts herself I remember her first appearance making cookies in shapes of Heart ❤️ such a cutie 😚


Sneha abhi tak uss jagah pe nahi ayi. So usko baad mein khane wali hoon 😝 filhaal I am a baised eater 😂 I mean reader 😂😂😂

Edited by WaqtZaya - 5 years ago
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago
next moment pls.
jagrutid thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago


its all in my head at the moment but better get writing

jagrutid thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Okay here it is please leave lots of likes and comments - I've asked the mods to move this thread to ff forum @Mods if you see this please move it - thank you


George

George took extra special care this morning to prepare breakfast. He placed Rishabhs toast carefully on the plate and wiped off speckles of bread from the sides of the plate . He checked to see if he had his letter safe in his uniform pocket. “Here goes he said to himself”

...

The aroma of coffee passed through Bajaj house and it was more Rishabhs liking than anyone’s. As he glanced through the morning paper at the head of the table looking towards Prerna with a intricate look of the eyes as she walked in and took a seat beside him. “Good morning” she said again, a added pleasantry to the private one they’d shared earlier this morning.

“Good morning George”

“Good morning sir, ma’am” replied George putting down the breakfast on the table.

“Sir there’s something I would like to ask of you” said George after a moment Rishabh raised his eyes warmly to ask what it was.

He saw George reach to his pocket and take out a envelope and hand it over.

Rishabh opened the envelope and unfolded the note. On crisp paper with blue ink written in fine English.

Rishabh took a moment and then put the note down

“No, that will be all thank you George.”

Sharply and smoothly disapproving of George’s request Prerna looks towards her husband who has a very stern focus on his breakfast now and then at George who’s eyes looked a little disheartened.

Prerna didn’t know what was in that note all she knew was she wanted to help George who against Mr Bajaj was a little fragile in standing his ground. In fact there weren’t many who could stand their ground before him. “Leave it to me” said Prernas eyes to George with silent reassurance and George nodded walking away into the kitchen.

Prerna reached for the letter that sat by Rishabhs breakfast plate whilst he went on a eating.

It read formally It’s contents, Georges request for leave - retirement.

Prerna glanced up at her husband and knew now wasn’t the time.

...

Mr Mehra shielded Rishabh from the rain with his umbrella, enough for him to be able to light his cigar.

A graveyard was a destination that called for a steady heart and mind. This was the one time Mehra wondered whether Rishabhs Tabaco might have been a necessity rather than a indulgence.

Rishabh discarded it and very quickly and walked out to his parents tomb stones

Not a care in the world for the bitterness of the wind or the rain George’s talk of leave had made Rishabh thing of his parents.

...

Kuki go and fetch a towel for your Pa

Said Prerna when she saw Rishabh walk into the house having been in the rain.

Not that it made him look any less gentlemanly that was.

..

Approaching his chair he took away his blazer unbutton the collar and pulled at the stands of his tie to but them a side on the office table and sank into his chair for a moment.

Just as he ran his hand through his hair he felt a towel being thrown around his neck.

“Barish mein bhighne ki Umar nahin hai aap ki” said Prernas voice from above his head. Lightening his mood

“What gives you that idea? ” he said softly at her tease.

After a moment of comfortable silence Prerna decided to break the silence on the matter.

“Mr Bajaj ..About George woh”

“I’ve made my mind up on that matter that Prerna.” Rishabh was quick to interject her words and stern too.

As much as Prerna respected him she also respected the life lessons he’d given her one of which was independent thought.

“He’s our George too..You should let him go, He deserves to spend them with his family, do more of the things he enjoys.”

Rishabh had a different stance on the matter “Retirement isn’t just all the nice things ! it comes with loneliness and illness and trouble. He has no one to look after him Prerna no children that really care, no one.” His voice getting firmer and louder towards the end.

Putting her hands to his shoulders looking down at her husband in the chair she replies softly.

“He’ll always have you”

Rishabh starting into oblivion can feel his wife’s ways begin to impede on his thinking.

“Im interviewing a replacement first tomorrow morning”

She adds as she breaks away from him taking the towel and now walking away.

“You’re treading a fine line Mrs Bajaj”

Groans Rishabh at the challenge

“I know” replies Prerna sounding unphased by her husbands aloofness on the matter.

...

Next morning the rivalry on the matter between the couple was apparent to all the candidates. Rishabh Bajaj made for a mean interviewer and perspective boss scaring many and offending some whilst Prerna sat beside him tried to be a voice of reason and the only smile in the room it seemed.

“No”

“No”

No

“That will be all thank you” said Rishabh to every single candidate even the one or two Prerna thought might be great for the job.

“Please leave”- he said cutting through the conversation between Prerna and the candidate who had is eye on Prerna something his wife hadn’t caught onto. Rishabh throwing the last portfolio with a thud he walks off with a glare at Prerna who’s heart is beats rather fast.

Walking into the kitchen for a water break hoping Mr Bajaj would do the same after a cigar she imagined, her mother in the kitchen was sight for sore eyes.

She hugged her back with a sigh what a horrible day it was she though..

Maybe you should have married someone a little more like your father… joked Veena

it’s too late Ma ..too late - replied Prerna in a humorous sigh..

..

Elsewhere Rishabh who was heading to his study in a distasteful mood passed Kuki’s bedroom and naturally the sight of his girls made him smile.

“Come here, he said to them both..” perching on his knees they both gave him a cuddle as soon he was reachable.

After a moment - Rishabh Bajaj’s mind went to work.

As George walked one of the corridors in Bajaj house. Kuki and Sneha blocked his way. Not long after the father

George mumbled little Sneha which made him smile happily.

Please stay George”.. said Kuki cutely

George didn’t know what to say to these adorable faces

“Until Sneha Is this much taller??” added Kuki showing George how much more Sneha needed him.

“Please please” .. pretty please with a cherry on top!”

The conversation went on this way for a while with the girls following George around the house.

Elsewhere with some breathing space, Rishabh and Prerna reunited in the lounge.

There’s one more candidate said Prerna gently wary of his previous outburst.

Rishabh nodded but before they could sit down George and the girls walked into the room.

Actually I’ve decided I’ll stay a little bit longer if that’s okay said George with Sneha on one side and Kuki on the other.

George’s decision bought a smile to all faces. Prerna gave Rishabh a glance knowing that this was his work.

Edited by jagrutid - 5 years ago
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

I cried 😭 while reading. This is so so so endearing 😭😭 me cries 😭😭

I can imagine both Asad and Bajaj and somewhere even KSG too 😭 and myself 😭 isn't this how we all are ?? After all George was his family ☺️ and one doesn't retire from his family do they ☺️😘


Goody goody, Bajju got idea from his kids 😁✨ intelligent bittu ✨😁


Hahahhaa at

1) Barish mein bhighne ki Umar nahin hai aap ki” said Prernas voice from above his head. Lightening his mood


“What gives you that idea? ” he said softly at her tease. .

2)

Maybe you should have married someone a little more like your father… joked Veena

it’s too late Ma ..too late - replied Prerna in a humorous sigh..


3) Prerna sat beside him tried to be a voice of reason and the only smile in the room it seemed.


“No”


“No”


No



And btw no not yet time to eat Sneha up, Kuki is the only baby I am gonna eat her ☺️ why is she so awwwdorable 😭

WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Also thank you Ritu ji for the info 🤭 ki yea update hogaya ☺️❤️ how cute you are ☺️ thank you so much ☺️ I want more updates pls 😭 Saturday ko ek pls 🥺 see me little kuki face 🥺

Pori thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago

Awwwww!!!

The girls 😍😍♥️

This was a post which gave insides to Rishab’s emotions towards george!!

I liked Rishab’s “please leave” I could actually picture this scene.

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 26 days ago

Cover credits dellzcreations L A M H E They say, our loved ones look at us from skies with love, but I had no idea about the feeling to live...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 months ago

P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the pub, but he...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 9 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Priyogita · 1 years ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".