| SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 3 | : CC#3 [FD in pg. 20] - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Home786

Now it's Rajeev and Abir convo.

Make it short and crisp yet convincing and elegant...

Try karti hoon 😳 result ka bata nahin🤪

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

“Zkm taaza rahenge toh ussey theek karne ki lagan lagi rehti hai,” loved this shaheen ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thank you Shristi...
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Soooooo... conversation main pehle start karoongi, right?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Soooooo... conversation main pehle start karoongi, right?

Yup👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Okay 👍🏼 thoda time legaga bas

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Soooooo... conversation main pehle start karoongi, right?

Shrishti your turn dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shrishti your turn dear

Just one correction, cut copy your Pooja part in previous post itself.....

Pooja already replied to your recent post na...

Just cut entire Pooja part and paste in your previous post itself..

And in the recent post, just leave Abir's part..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Home786

Just one correction, cut copy your Pooja part in previous post itself.....

Pooja already replied to your post na...

I have cut it shaheen....everything okay now na🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Okay 👍🏼 thoda time legaga bas

Okay👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

I have cut it shaheen....everything okay now na🤔

pooja invited me very politely but i had some questions in my mind already and wanted to clear it with her at the first place.

"Bhabhi aditi ab teek haina ? Ghar main sab teek hai? I'm sorry kal mujhe aur bhi zyaada kaam tha isliye aapse zyaada kuch puch nahi paya."I asked her

Pooja assured me that everything was fine and normal but I could read what could have happened last night, just by reading her unpoken words from her expressions.

" bhabhi main aapse pehli baar baat nahi kar raha hoon.mein samajhta hoon kal raat kya huva hoga.bhabhi mujhe lagta hai hame ab iska dhyan rakhna chahiye aur mein iss baat ka pura khayal rakhunga...aur fikr mat kijiye sab theek hojayega. Yeh case hum zarur jeetenge aur woh bhi bahut jald.

She nodded yes to me realising the momentum of my words and was in a hurry for the puja..It seemed she wanted to forget everything that happened...She immediately left from there to serve other guests.



Add this entire dialogues in your first scene itself... Just go to main thread cut and paste this dialogue in your previous post before Pooja's reply..


In your current post just leave last pata where you notice Abir looking at you...

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