Found love in a hopeless place : Riansh Drabble

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hola guys,

These days, Riansh are everywhere, and who cannot fall in love with them. With gloomy days now approaching (MUs and Separation) I guess. Let's enjoy the good days and a Drabble from my side based on today's voot episode (aftermath)

Also, you all are amazing, I have been in a couple of Forums, on IF since a long time but never posted much because I didn't feel as comfortable as I feel here, you all are sweet and welcoming and never rude, never fight, no negativity, touchwood. Ilauveyouall. 🤗





"Vansh, mere sir m dard ho raha h" she woke up as she held her head between her palms

"So obvious, ye lo, nimbu paani pee lo" He came by her side and offered her the glass of lime water

"Pr Subah to chai peete h na" she pouted

"Normal log peete h, sharabi logo ka morning drink yhi hota h" He smiled

"Kya? Mai tumhe sharabi lgti hu?" she spat as she glared him

"Lagti hu? Tum ho, bhul gai Kya raat ki karamaat" he sat beside her

"Raat? Sharab? Mjhe kuch yaad Kyu ni Ara" she mumbled trying to think

"Koi baat nhi, ab Jo hona tha wo kabhi to hona he tha" Vansh sighed, his face straight and serious.

"Kya? Kya hua Vansh?" Ridhima gulped fearing what she might have said

"Ridhima tumne to sabko Jaga dia.. dance krri the tum.. smbhal he nahi rhi the.. or ye to chodo tumne sabke samne mjhe.. itta embarrassing h kese bolu" He looked down trying to control his laughter

"Btao na Vansh please Kya Kia mene" she looked tensed

"Tum pehle to mjhe jabardasti kiss krne ki koshish kr rahi the.. but tum choti si to ho.. jab pohch nhi payi to Dadi se complain krdi tumne ki Mai tumhe kiss nahi krta" He said seriously, biting his lips to suppress the smile

"Kyaaaaa? Esa Kia mene ?" She screamed hiding her face in her palms

"Han Ridhima"

"Fir? Fir Kya hua?" She inquired

"Fir m Kya krta, tumhe utha k room laya or.." he stopped looking at her, her doe eyes staring at him

"Bolo" her lips quivered

"Ridhima, Mai nahi chahta tha but tum maani he nhi.. infact tumne Meri favourite sherwani fad di"

"What?" She widened her eyes

"What do you mean?" She added

"Wahi Jo pati patni k beech hota h..m Kya krta.." He made a sad face

She kept quiet trying hard to think

"Kitta ajeeb h na, apni suhaahgrat to hmne ladne m bita di or dusro ki subhagrat k din.." he took a deep breath

She was staring at the wall in silence, when suddenly he noticed a tear welling up in her eyes.

"Ridhima" he quickly grabbed it and looked at her

"Listen I am sorry, I was Jo.."he couldn't complete when Ridhima burst out crying

"Vansh m kitti unlucky hu" She said in between her sobs

"Sshhh, listen to me" he tried calming her down

"Meri Zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat pal, or mjhe kabhi yaad he nahi rahega"She said while leaning on his shoulder and sobbing

Vansh narrowed his eyes at her and grinned. So she wasn't mad or upset about the whole thing but because she couldn't remember it.

"Suno Meri baat suno, Mai majak Kar raha tha esa kuch nahi hua" he said as he cupped her face and kissed her on the forehead.

"Kya? Ye kesa majak h, mjhe bilkul acha nhi laga Vansh I hate you" she frowned

"But I love you" he said as he came closer to her and brushed his fingers on her cheek. She looked up at him, their eyes locked. He eyed her lips and was about to take a chance when..

"Vansh Beta.." Dadi entered their room

"Ohfooo, kitti bar kaha h darwaza band nahi krte ye log" she turned after seeing the scene I'm front of her

"Sorry Dadi, ye Ridhima ki utri nahi h abhi Tak" he stoop up and said

"Nhi Dadi, ye, chup kro tum" She threw the pillow at him

Dadi giggled standing there, smiling because finally her rough and tough Grand kid found love, in a hopeless place.

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amritat thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is so beautifully written...I had a smile on my face while reading it...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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"Ridhima, Mai nahi chahta tha but tum maani he nhi.. infact tumne Meri favourite sherwani fad di"


This lime cracked me up really badly!!! 🤣🤣


Awww!!!! Vansh,you naughty brat!!! Biwi ko rula diya!!!


Vansh ne confess kia abt his feelings and was abt to kiss her,ki tabhi Daadi agayi...


This is such an amazing and light hearted story.. loved it a lot...


Do write more,Sneha.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awww this is awesome ....Vansh is so naughty the way he was reading Riddhu😆....poor bachi😆....she was sad as She couldnt remember her first nite with patidev ☺️😆


Finally he confessed his feelings ❤️❤️


Love it Sneha ....beautifully penned down


Do write more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Cute N Lovely 💞💞


Riddhima was upset coz she can't remember what happened .. not because it happened

^loved that part 🥰 🥰 love is in the air 🤭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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My first comment on this forum, have been a silent reader, don't want to get inveatednin a show and then watch the makers make a kabafa out of their own project as have been burned badly before also have no patience to watch ITv shows for years.

Have liked all the stories here liked this one too thank you for not going the ITv way.

I was really expecting her to get mad at him because she couldn't remember her first time and that too as it was with HIM.

Loved it could visualise the whole thing.

Oh seriously in ITv people need to lock their doors esp couples.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Haye

This is beautiful

I was imagining the whole thing while reading it and that's because of the wonderful writing

Thank you🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

This is so beautifully written...I had a smile on my face while reading it...

I am glad this could make you smile

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

"Ridhima, Mai nahi chahta tha but tum maani he nhi.. infact tumne Meri favourite sherwani fad di"


This lime cracked me up really badly!!! 🤣🤣


Awww!!!! Vansh,you naughty brat!!! Biwi ko rula diya!!!


Vansh ne confess kia abt his feelings and was abt to kiss her,ki tabhi Daadi agayi...


This is such an amazing and light hearted story.. loved it a lot...


Do write more,Sneha.


Thank you so much Anika (Is that your real name or you were a fan of Ishqbaaz? ) 😳

Your comments are really motivating. 🤗

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