SuVan SS- Steal ur Gilfriend!!

So guys, without much further ado... I'm presenting you all my new SS-

SuVan SS- Steal ur Gilfriend!!

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Suman Tiwari: Sophia Coll's most favorite chick;

Shravan Malhotra: her silent lover since the day he met her;

Shravan-Kritesh-Bunty-Anish: brothers (Shravan-Anish are eldest- twins, Bunty the youngest & Kritesh is the middle one);

SuVan: normal friends;

Suman-Aashna-Devika-Kanchan: sisters (Suman-Devika are twins, Aashna is the youngest & Kanchan is middle kid)

Kanchan-Bunty, Kritesh-Aashna: Sophia Coll's most romantic couples...

Olive Green- Kashmera Shah *special appearance*

Index-
Chp 1 - pg 1
Chp 2 - pg 3

Chap 1-

All the people, barring Suman, chilling in the canteen. The couples are just doing "coupley stuff", Anish-Devika are busy in an assignment & humare Majnu Miyaan is plucking petals from a rose while walking to & fro.

Shravan: She knows I exist... she knows it not... she knows I exist... she knows it not... she knows I exist... *pause* SHE KNOWS IT NOT!!!!! NO YAAAR!!!!!!!

Kritesh: Arrey kya hua Shravan? Subah-subah itna drama queen kyun ban raha hain???

Bunty: Haan Miyaan! tujhe ho kya gaya hain?

Aashna: Issey na... LOUVE ki bimaari lag gayi hain guys LOUVE ki!

Kritesh: Love ki bimaari?

Kanchan *hitting Kritesh at the back*: Arrey Buddhu! Love nahi louve. As in, L.O.U.V.E!

Kritesh-Bunty: Ohhh... LOUVE!!!!!

Aashna-Kanchan: haan... *quoting it wid fingers* LOUVE...

Bunty: mmm hmmm... aur phir? Who’s the lucky chick???

Devika *sighs*: aur kaun ho sakti hain? Isski puraani crush, humari behen Sumo!

Boys: WHAT??? SUMAN???
Shravan *getting irritated*: Devika yaar!! tumhe pata hain na ki ussey yeh nickname meine diya tha! toh.. ussey "Sumo" bulaane ka haq sirf mujhe hain!

Kritesh-Bunty get a sense that Devika-Shravan-Anish mein phirse ho jaayegi fight so Bunty tries to calm Devika while Kritesh goes towards Shravan.

Kritesh: Shaant mere bhai shaant! Aur tu yeh bol... tu abhi bhi Suman sey....?

Shravan just blushes & smiles.

Bunty: yaar Miyaan! mujhe toh tujhe apna bhai kehte huye sharma aa rahi hain abhi!!

Kanchan: Awww!!! So sweet! This proves ki Shravan bro, tumhara pyaar na Suman dii ke liye sacha hain!! Haina Aashna?

Aashna: Bilkul… and waise, bhi *looking at the boys* tumhe KISI AIERE-GAIRE ko prove karne ki koi zarurat nahi hain ki tumhaari feelings Suman ke liye true hain ya nahi! N don't worry! mein aur Kanchan na tumhe tumhaari "ultimate destination" tak zarur pahunchayenge!

Kanchan: Bang on!

Ranbir *giving the girls a bear hug*: mujhe maloom tha, ki KOI *boys* mera saath de ya naa de... meri dono bhabhi's toh mera saath zarur dengi!!! Thank you girls...

Kanchan-Aashna *looking at each other*: BHABHIS???
Shravan: Aur nahi toh kya! Jab tum dono ki shaadi ho jaayegi ek doosre se... I mean, Kritesh ki Aashna se, aur Kancha-cheena ki Bunty se... toh ho gayi na tum dono meri Bhabhis..."
The couples blush at the mention of being each other’s life-partner of & share an eye-lock (H2L2).

Shravan, Devika, Anish ki nazar padti hain towards the couples & they face-palm in exasperation!

"Kaliyon ka chaman tab baanta hain...
Kaliyon ka chaman tab baanta hain...
Thoda resham lagta hain...
Thoda sheesha lagta hain..."

The song wakes up the couples up from their romantic moment aur Shravan sees the opportunty.

Shravan: Abbey love-birds! Yahaan meri love-life ki shuruwat hone se pehle hi "The End" hone jaa raha hain aur tum dono couples ek doosre ko goggle-waali look dey rahe ho!!

The couples diverted their gaze towards Shravan & try to appease him

Kritesh: Arrey nahi nahi yaar! Hum sab ko teri parwah hain! haina guys?

All: haan yaar!! We care for u!!
Kanchan: Aur jaha tak Suman ko tumhari girlfirend banane ki aati hain toh...

Shravan *goes into SuVan-land*: Sir gf nahi... mein na meri Sumo ko apna life-partner banana chahata hu... usske saath ek cute-si, pyaari-si, chchotti-si family start karna chahata hu... woh meri Sumo aur mein usska Shravan....

Anish *in a teasing tone*: Aur tumhaari iss "cute-si, pyaari-si,chchotti-si" family main kitne log honge?

Shravan*still in his land*: 4 log- mein, meri Sumo, humari cute-si princess jaisi beti & ek naughty-sa champ type beta!

Ashna-Kritesh, Bunty-Kancha: Haaye... nazar na lagey!

Anish-Devika: I think I'm gonna be sick now!!

Shravan *finally coming back to Earth after some time *: Woh sab chchodo! Pehle mujhe yeh batao ki kya tum log meri help karoge ki nahi??

Kanchan: Tumhaare in bhaiyo ka toh pata nahi *pointing towards Kritesh-Bunty-Anish* but hum girls apne iss Romeo ko uski Juliet dilwakar rahenge!

Kritesh: Haan toh phir, humbhi kisi se kam nahi! Hum sab bhi tere saath hain!
They all share a group hug.
Anish: ay! ay! ay! Shravan... bas ek request...

Shravan: kya?

Anish: jab tum aur Suman ek hojaaoge na, PLS PLS PLS...HUMAARE *as in bros* SAAMNE USSEY PHONE PE BAT MAT KARNA!

Kritesh: I agree! Aur hum dono bhi inn se *as in girls* phone pe baat nahikarge!

Girls: WHAT????

Bunty: Arrey! miyaan.. matlab ki Shravan aur hum sab ladkey tum ladkiyon ke saamne kisi aur ladki se baat nahi karenge! Par waise toh....

Couples again share a romantic look. Devika-Anish leave for class.

Shravan *face-palming himself*: Innka na kuch nahi ho sakta!!!

Shravan also leaves the canteen & goes to the Music Room to rehearse.

there... Chp 1 is done.
kaisa laga guys? i wanted to put our EDKV characters in a normal, happy college setting & this story is sweet, funny & crazy. please batana if you liked it & criticisms, suggestions all galore.

tanya

girl, its great! love that you made shravan + bunty;s friendship intact ...also shravan was like a secretive lover of suman & doing aage ki family planning 😆very good!

It's good ...continue soon

I really liked the setting Tanya!👍🏼 How fun it would be to have really seen these interesting characters having fun in college!

Please continue! I'd love to read what happens next and if Shravan does indeed get any help from the lot😆