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Hi guyyyys. It's been a long time I couldn't find time to write but I do remember I have to write an os one of you demanded. I am working on it. Till the time, please bear this. It's more like a scene. Thank youuu alll for all the love.


Dance :


"2 din bad sangeet h, aap logo ne kuch dance practice ki h ya nahi" Devraj aka Kabir asked everyone. Vansh looked at him from above the stairs

"Kesi practice, Hume to dance ata he nhi, haan Vansh acha dance krta h, Haina Vansh" Anupriya said

"No mom, I have lots of work, mjhe isme part nhi Lena" Vansh replied as he walked downstairs.

"Ok no problem, Jise ata h well and good, Jise nahi ata use Mai hu na sikhane k ly, Mr. Rai Singhania to interested nhi h, Ridhhima ji aap meri help krengi Dadi and rest of the family ki choreography m?" Kabir smiled looking at Riddhima and narrowing his eyes at Vansh to see his reaction.

Vansh instantly moved his eyes from his phone to his wife.

She nodded in yes and smiled at the wedding planner.

"Don't you have better things to do, itta kaam pada h wo Kon krega" Vansh asked Ridhima

"Par Mai to wese b koi kaam nahi krti" Ridhima Innocently replied.

"Arey Vansh, tujhe nhi krna h mt kr, use Kyu rok raha h" Dadi said sensing the jealousy in Vansh.

"Exactly, may I" Kabir moved towards her and asked for her hand. Ridhima looked at Vansh and then hesistantly held his extended hand.

"So first, one hand on the waist and other holding your partner's, girls yours on the shoulder" He held her hand and Vansh Frowned. His frown deepened when his other hand went on her waist. He clenched his teeth and moved from there.

"Vansh beta ruk to ja" Dadi stopped him

"Nahi Dadi, mjhe kaam h" he passed dead glares to his wife and left for his room.


In the room :

"Boss, were you being jealous?" Angre who was following him asked.

"What no"

"Boss but, I felt.. you know you can share anything with me" Angre said

"I.. I was not jealous but.. I realized I.. I minded" Vansh confessed finally.

"It's obvious, any husband would" he smiled at his boss and said.

"Anyway, not like she cares"

"She's naive"

"Really why are you taking her side?"

"I think I should leave" Angre sighed and left from there


30 min later

Scent laga ke tera partiyon mein jana

Aashiq fasaane ka tarika hai purana


Vansh can hear the song and the laughter coming from downstairs and it was driving him mad. He can very well identify his wife's voice.

"Mere sath to har baat pr kaatne ko daudti h, or abhi dekho" He spoke under his breath as he looked at the scene from upstairs.

"Ridhima, Ridhima" He shouted.

Ridhima looked up at him and curled her fingers in what-do-you-want as she continued dancing and laughing with rest of the family

"Mera wallet, mere sunglasses kaha h sab" he was irked

"Whi honge kahi Vansh" Dadi interfered

"Nhi h waha dadi, Ridhima dhoond k do" he held her hand desperatly making her attend to him

In the room :

"Vansh chote Bache ho Kya tum" Ridhima said angrily as she opened the drawer

"Oh I am so sorry I disturbed your little dance night with the wedding planner" Vansh taunted her

"Excuse me" Ridhima turned to face him

"What?" Vansh rolled his eyes

"You're impossible, khud dhundho apni cheeze" Ridhima stomped her foot on the floor and started to leave when Vansh caught hold of her dupatta and pulled her towards himself. She twirled and landed on his strong chest.

"Mere sath dance krlo" he said as he moved the strands of hair behind her ear

"Tum to bhot busy ho" she looked down.

"Tum bhi busy ho jao.. mere sath" Vansh smirked.

"Vansh chodo mjhe koi aa jaega, darwaza khula h"

"To problem darwaze ki h?" He grinned.

"No I mean, chodo mjhe" she stammered

"Acha Chalo mere teen sawalo ka jawab dedo or tm azaad" Vansh pulled her closer

"Ok pucho"

"Pehla sawaal, tumhe yaad h hmara dance, so who's the better dancer, me or that chomu you were dancing with" Vansh asked

"Obviously him" Ridhima sighed

"Really.." "yes" she smirked

"Dusra sawal.. ye Jo tumne abhi answer Kia Kya wo Sach tha?" Vansh raised his eyebrow

"Bilkul" Ridhima giggled.

"Okay then, last question.. if it would have been me dancing with someone else like you were, would you still be giggling" Vansh looked into her eyes as he noticed her smile disappeared. She gulped and looked at him trying to breathe normally.

"Ye kesa sawal h"

"Itta soch Kyu rahi ho"

"Okay fine, I won't dance with anyone." She looked here and there

"That's not the answer to my question sweetheart"

"I won't feel bad about it, but I won't giggle either" she replied

"I see" Vansh smirked as he left her free

"Ab chodo mjhe'" she said

"Come out of Vansh land sweetheart, I already left you" He snapped

"Fine" she blushed as she turned around and closed her eyes tightly embarrassed at the turn of events.


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wow,superb 😳

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Awwww! bahut cute hai! šŸ˜‰

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Amazing. Love šŸ’ž it.

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Haaye... Jalkukda Vansh and Riddhima...

Yeh Kabir ne apni shamat bulayi hai...

Ah haan!!!

Patidev manenge nahi but he is jealous and finding ways to keep his wifey near him on the pretext of finding his wallet,watch,sunglasses... Awww!!!!

Waah!!! Angre caught his Boss feeling jealous..

RiAnsh moment was out of the world... ā˜ŗļø

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Aww...such a cute lovely OS!

Loved it!

Jealous Vansh..🤣

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Very nice story... Please do write more such jealousy stories...

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Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Hi guyyyys. It's been a long time I couldn't find time to write but I do remember I have to write an os one of you demanded. I am working on it. Till the time, please bear this. It's more like a scene. Thank youuu alll for all the love.


Dance :


"2 din bad sangeet h, aap logo ne kuch dance practice ki h ya nahi" Devraj aka Kabir asked everyone. Vansh looked at him from above the stairs

"Kesi practice, Hume to dance ata he nhi, haan Vansh acha dance krta h, Haina Vansh" Anupriya said

"No mom, I have lots of work, mjhe isme part nhi Lena" Vansh replied as he walked downstairs.

"Ok no problem, Jise ata h well and good, Jise nahi ata use Mai hu na sikhane k ly, Mr. Rai Singhania to interested nhi h, Ridhhima ji aap meri help krengi Dadi and rest of the family ki choreography m?" Kabir smiled looking at Riddhima and narrowing his eyes at Vansh to see his reaction.

Vansh instantly moved his eyes from his phone to his wife.

She nodded in yes and smiled at the wedding planner.

"Don't you have better things to do, itta kaam pada h wo Kon krega" Vansh asked Ridhima

"Par Mai to wese b koi kaam nahi krti" Ridhima Innocently replied.

"Arey Vansh, tujhe nhi krna h mt kr, use Kyu rok raha h" Dadi said sensing the jealousy in Vansh.

"Exactly, may I" Kabir moved towards her and asked for her hand. Ridhima looked at Vansh and then hesistantly held his extended hand.

"So first, one hand on the waist and other holding your partner's, girls yours on the shoulder" He held her hand and Vansh Frowned. His frown deepened when his other hand went on her waist. He clenched his teeth and moved from there.

"Vansh beta ruk to ja" Dadi stopped him

"Nahi Dadi, mjhe kaam h" he passed dead glares to his wife and left for his room.


In the room :

"Boss, were you being jealous?" Angre who was following him asked.

"What no"

"Boss but, I felt.. you know you can share anything with me" Angre said

"I.. I was not jealous but.. I realized I.. I minded" Vansh confessed finally.

"It's obvious, any husband would" he smiled at his boss and said.

"Anyway, not like she cares"

"She's naive"

"Really why are you taking her side?"

"I think I should leave" Angre sighed and left from there


30 min later

Scent laga ke tera partiyon mein jana

Aashiq fasaane ka tarika hai purana


Vansh can hear the song and the laughter coming from downstairs and it was driving him mad. He can very well identify his wife's voice.

"Mere sath to har baat pr kaatne ko daudti h, or abhi dekho" He spoke under his breath as he looked at the scene from upstairs.

"Ridhima, Ridhima" He shouted.

Ridhima looked up at him and curled her fingers in what-do-you-want as she continued dancing and laughing with rest of the family

"Mera wallet, mere sunglasses kaha h sab" he was irked

"Whi honge kahi Vansh" Dadi interfered

"Nhi h waha dadi, Ridhima dhoond k do" he held her hand desperatly making her attend to him

In the room :

"Vansh chote Bache ho Kya tum" Ridhima said angrily as she opened the drawer

"Oh I am so sorry I disturbed your little dance night with the wedding planner" Vansh taunted her

"Excuse me" Ridhima turned to face him

"What?" Vansh rolled his eyes

"You're impossible, khud dhundho apni cheeze" Ridhima stomped her foot on the floor and started to leave when Vansh caught hold of her dupatta and pulled her towards himself. She twirled and landed on his strong chest.

"Mere sath dance krlo" he said as he moved the strands of hair behind her ear

"Tum to bhot busy ho" she looked down.

"Tum bhi busy ho jao.. mere sath" Vansh smirked.

"Vansh chodo mjhe koi aa jaega, darwaza khula h"

"To problem darwaze ki h?" He grinned.

"No I mean, chodo mjhe" she stammered

"Acha Chalo mere teen sawalo ka jawab dedo or tm azaad" Vansh pulled her closer

"Ok pucho"

"Pehla sawaal, tumhe yaad h hmara dance, so who's the better dancer, me or that chomu you were dancing with" Vansh asked

"Obviously him" Ridhima sighed

"Really.." "yes" she smirked

"Dusra sawal.. ye Jo tumne abhi answer Kia Kya wo Sach tha?" Vansh raised his eyebrow

"Bilkul" Ridhima giggled.

"Okay then, last question.. if it would have been me dancing with someone else like you were, would you still be giggling" Vansh looked into her eyes as he noticed her smile disappeared. She gulped and looked at him trying to breathe normally.

"Ye kesa sawal h"

"Itta soch Kyu rahi ho"

"Okay fine, I won't dance with anyone." She looked here and there

"That's not the answer to my question sweetheart"

"I won't feel bad about it, but I won't giggle either" she replied

"I see" Vansh smirked as he left her free

"Ab chodo mjhe'" she said

"Come out of Vansh land sweetheart, I already left you" He snapped

"Fine" she blushed as she turned around and closed her eyes tightly embarrassed at the turn of events.


Chomu...šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ i laughed soo hard ..my god..too goodšŸ˜€šŸ˜€šŸ˜

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Haye jealous Vansh aur jealous Riddhima dono ek baar mein dekhne ko mil gaye🤣

Amazingg šŸ”„

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wowwww...

Amazing OS

Mera jalkukda

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