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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank u khwaishfan


Aapke hai kaun hum? Part 9

Suddenly Sameer and Naina heard Avni calling:Naina!

Naina:Jeeji...

She ran away.

Sameer:Oh no...

Sameer went to Harish Avantika’s room.

SAMEER:Hey dad…you were missing at the godbharai function.Why?

Harish:What to do beta?it’s ladies’ function.So how can I attend it?

Sameer:But you had attended mom’s godbharai function in disguise of a woman.Right?Then why not now?

Harish was embarrassed.

He looked at Avantika:Darling…you said that to our children and daughter in law.Right?

Avant:Yes,not only to them,but to all guests.

Harish was embarrassed.

H:It was too much darling.

Avan:O really?Feeling embarrassed now?But that time you were not at all embarrassed.

H:How would I be embarrassed when I was coming secretly to meet my darling wife?And don’t tell me that you did’nt want me to attend your godbharai function.You also expected me there.Right?

Avantika blushed.

Suddenly Avantika remembered Sameer’s presense and faked seriousness.

Avan:Today Neil and Sameer behaved just like you by attending the function in disguise of women.Shameless they were.It’s only because of you Harish.

Harish laughed.

Avan:Laughing and encouraging your children’s tantrums?How could you Harish?

She started punching him with pillows.Harish laughed.Avantika also burst into laughter.

Sameer moved away from the room smiling.

He thought: This is how dad and mom romance.Funny.

He giggled.

Avantika noticed Sameer’s absence.

Avan:Oh Sameer left.What would have he thought about us?

H:Nothing darling.He knows that our fight is our romance.

They giggled.

Neil kept his head on Avni's belly:Baby...my dear baby...are you able to hear me?

Avni smiled.

Avni:Neil,you are impatient to see the baby.Right?

NEIL:You are asking me as if you are not impatient to see our baby.

She smiled.

Suddenly Neil said:Avni,the baby just kicked and I could feel it.That means my baby touched me.

She smiled seeing his happiness.

They talked a lot about the baby and slept close to each other.

Sameer came back from office very late.

SAMEER:All must have slept.I will have to starve tonight.

Suddenly lights were on.He saw Naina.

SAMEER:Naina,you did'nt sleep yet?

NAINA:No.

SAMEER:why?

NAINA:I did'nt feel like sleeping.You had dinner?

SAMEER:No.

NAINA:Then have dinner.

SAMEER:You kept dinner for me?

NAINA:Yes.

SAMEER:That means you were waiting for me without sleeping?

Naina was silent.Sameer smiled.

Naina served him dinner.

After dinner Naina served him kheer.

SAMEER:Kheer!

He tasted it:Wah!So tasty.But who made this?

NAINA:I made it.

SAMEER:You made it?

He was surprised.

NAINA:I heard that kheer is your favourite.So I thought I should give it a try.

SAMEER:You made it specially for me?Why?

She was silent.

Sameer finished eating Kheer.

Sameer:It was yummy.I loved it.

Naina was very happy.

Naina:Then I will make it more for you.

He smiled.

He washed his hands and wiped them.

SAMEER:Naina...Why are you making my favourite dishes?

She was silent.

Sameer: Who am I to you? Aapke hain kaun hum?

She blushed.

Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai
Jan ke bhi anjana
Kaisa meraa yar hai…


SAMEER:Kheer tasted extra sweet.I doubt if its because you added your love in it.

Naina was stunned as he asked such a question frankly.

Naina became shy.

Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai
Usakee nazar


She tried to move away.He held her hand.

Naina was stunned.

NAINA:Sameer...what is this?Leave my hand.

SAMEER:You can't just go away without answering me Naina.

She stammered: I...I...

SAMEER:Ok.First I will answer your question.You asked me who you are to me.Right?I will tell you that now.

She smiled.

Sameer looked at her deeply:You are my beloved Naina.

She was surprised.

SAMEER:I love you Naina.It’s the first time I fell in love with a girl.

She blushed.

Palko kee chilman se mujhe dekhti
Uski nazar
Uski haya
Apani hi chahat kaa raj kholati
Uske haya
Chhup ke kare jo wafa
Aisa meraa yar hai


Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai

SAMEER:Now you answer my question Naina.

She was shy:You are my lover Sameer.I love you.

He smiled.

Woh hai nisha
Woh hee meri jindagi ki bhor hai
Woh hai nisha
Use hai pata
Uske hi hatho mein meri dor hai
Use hai pata
Sare jahan se juda
Aisa mera pyar hai

Sameer moved closer to her soft cheeks.She closed her eyes welcoming him.

Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai

Suddenly he moved backward.

Sameer:I am a sanskari.I won't do this before marriage.

Naina became shy.Sameer laughed seeing her shyness.

Naina hit him funnily and they got into a romantic embrace.

Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehali pehalee bar hai(HAHK).

Neil found Avni dull.

NEIL:What happened Avni?Why do you feel weak?

AVNI:I don't know why Neil.But I feel uneasy.

Suddenly she started having pain in her stomach:Ah!

Neil got scared:What happened Avni?

Neil screamed:Mom!

Avantika came.

Avan:What happened?Is everything alright?

NEIL:Avni is having stomach ache.

Avan:I guess her labor pain has started.Let's take her to the hospital.

Avni was taken to the hospital.

The doctor came out:Congrats Neil.Avni delivered a baby boy.

Neil was excited and all were very happy.

NEIL:I can't believe that I have become a father.

Naina:Wow! I have become an aunt.

Sameer:And I have become an Uncle.

In that moment of excitement Naina kissed Sameer's cheek.

Sameer and Naina embraced each other due to happiness.

Coming back to senses they moved away from each other shyly.

Harish-Avantika and Mohit Rano:We are grand parents now.

They all were very happy.

Neil went towards Avni who was caressing the baby.

Avni :Neil...our baby...

Neil caressed her:He will call us papa mumma.

Neil took the baby in his arms.All others came in and pampered the baby.

Avni and the baby got discharged from the hospital and came back home.

Naina brought a cake.

Naina:To celebrate this happiness I have baked a cake.

All were excited to see the cake.

Everyone had the share of the cake except Sameer.

Naina went near him.

Naina:Sameer..why did’nt you eat the cake I baked?

Sameer:Because I want to be fed by you.

She blushed.

Sameer:Did you eat it?

Naina:No.

Sameer:Why did’nt you eat your own cake?

She smiled:Because I want to eat it from your hand.

He smiled.

They cut the cake together and fed each other.

There was icing on her lips.

Sameer wiped it with his kerchief.She was blushing.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

The baby became the pet of the family.All including Sameer and Naina could'nt stop pampering their nephew.Sameer and Naina sang and danced to entertain the baby.

Dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana
Dhik, dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana
Bhabhi Tum Khushiyon Ka Khazana
Dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana
Pehli Kiran Jab Se Uge
Bhabhi Meri Tab Se Jage
Sabka Pura Dhyan Dhare Woh
Shaam Dhale Tak Kaam Kare
Kal Tak Raha, Is Chaon Se
Mera Bachpan Anjana ...

Naina took the baby in her arms.Sameer smiled.

Sameer:Naina...the baby is saying something.

Naina:what?

SAMEER:Don't be just my maasi...be my chachi.

Kahtha hai kya, munna suno
Mousi nahi, Chachi bano
hmm hmm

Naina blushed.

Munni yeh theri chachaji banna chala mousaji

They danced in happiness.

Tum na mili thoe nishchit hey mera jogi ban jana
Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana
Alakh Dhik - Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana(HAHK)

Neil:Avni....I have decided a name for our baby.

Avni:Me too.

NEIL:What?

AVNI:You tell your selection.

NEIL:Vivaan.

Avni was surprised:Vivaan?This is the name which I selected.How come its your selection too?

NEIL:Your selection becomes mine too.Right?

AVNI:Neil...?

NEIL:I had seen you call our baby Vivaan while pampering him.That time itself I had decided that he should have no other name.

AVNI:Thank you so much Neil.You are so sweet.

NEIL:You are sweet.You are sweet.So I have to be sweet.Right?

They both smiled.

Neil:Ok Avni..you sleep.Te whole day you are looking after the baby.At night I will look after the baby.

Avni:But Neil…

Neil:Sleep Avni.

He made her lie down.After Avni slept Neil was taking care of the baby.

In the morning when Avni woke up she saw both Neil and the baby sleeping.She smiled.

She caressed both.

She kissed both Neil and Vivaan.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

thanks for the pm!

awesome update! Naina and Sameer get closer.

Avni has a baby boy.

everyone is happy.

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#53

Part 8


Fabulous Part


Beautiful song choice

Both Sameer and Naina are really

infected by each other

Edited by taahir004 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#54

Naina embarrassed by Sameer's bare physique was funny

Earring scene was passionate

Avni saying that they are romancing shamelessly in front of their baby was funny

Neil saying that baby will be very happy to have such romantic parents was nice

Why does Avni has this strange feeling?

Sameer and Neil dressed up in female attire, Naina making fun of Sameer was funny

Avni also realized its Neil

SamAina dance was nice

Avni faking anger was funny

Naina asked hum aapke hain kaun?

Will read next to know the answer

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#55

Harish and Avantika's fight was funny

AvNeil sleeping close to each other was romantic

Good that SamaIna accepted each other as lovers

They hugged as well

So now Avni delivered a baby boy

Sameer and Naina making each other eat cake was sweet

Sameer and Naina singing to entertain the baby was awesome

Sameer said that baby is asking Naina to not just be his maasi but also chachi was romantic, sweetest proposal ever

So now the baby is named as Vivaan

Avni caressing Neil and the baby was cute

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Part 9


Fabulous Update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Thank u so much friends 4 the lovely comments


Aapke hai kaun hum? Part 10

Dedicated to Shesha485 as she gave a jodi name to Harish Avantika-HarAv

Neil and Avni's baby's naming ceremony ….

Neil:We decided to name him Vivaan.

Everyone smiled.

Harish:What a lovely name!

Avantika:Let us have some entertainment now to make this ceremony more colourful.Why not Naina's dance?She is an excellent dancer.

Sameer:Yes Naina...you dance. Naina smiled.

She started dancing beautifully.

Sameer could'nt take his eyes off her.

Maye ni maye mundher pe teri, bol raha hain kaaga
Jogan ho gayi teri dulari, man jogi sang laaga


Maye ni maye mundher pe teri, bol raha hain kaaga
Jogan ho gayi teri dulari, man jogi sang laaga
Chan mahiya chan mahiya mere dol sapaiya
Chand ki tarah camak rahi thi us jogi ki kaya,
Mere dyare aakar usne pyar ka alag jagaaya,
Apne tan par bhasma ramaage
Sari rain woh jaaga


Sameer showed actions that her dance is superb.She smiled at him while dancing.


Jogan ho gayi teri dulari, man jogi sang laaga
Sun hiriye nach hiriye, Nagke rang jama,
Sun hiriye nach hiriye, Nagke dhum macha


Mannat maangi thi tune, ek roz main jaayo bihaayi,
Us jogi ke sang meri tu karde ab kudmayi,
In haathon mein laga de mehendi,
Baandh shagun ka dhagaa,
Jogan ho gayi teri dulari, man jogi sang laaga(HAHK).

Avni:Now you also dance my devarji Sameer.Without your performance the function is incomplete.

Sameer:Bhabhi…I will dance.But I need a partner.

Avni:Naina is there.Right?Naina..you dance with Sameer.

Naina smiled at Sameer.

Sameer-Naina danced together.

Ta thaiya ta thaiya ho o

Ta thaiya ta thaiya ho o..

Nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajna

Sajna pe dil aa gaya

Kyun sajna pe dil aa gaya

Nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajna

Sajna pe dil aa gaya

Kyun sajna pe dil aa gaya

Kayi albele dekhe

Jawani ke rele dekhe

Hasino ke mele dekhe, dil pe ho o..

Tu hi chha gaya..

Tu hi chha gaya..

Are nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajni

Sajni pe dil aa gaya

Ke sajni pe dil aa gaya

Ta thaiya ta thaiya ho o

Ta thaiya ta thaiya ho o..

Naa mila koi bhi tujhsa

Maine dekhi har gali..

Maine chhoda zamaana saara

Main tere sang chali

Tann tera khila khila chaman

Tu jawaani ki kali

Teri khushbu hi meri saanson mein

Pal pal hai pali

Baahon ka sahara mila

Tera jo ishara mila

Mujhe jag saara mila, main toh ho o..

Tujhe paa gaya, tujhe paa gaya..

Nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajna

Sajna pe dil aa gaya

Kyun sajna pe dil aa gaya

Sun zara anaadi sun zara

Kahe kya meri choodiyaan

Naagin ban ban ke

Dasti hai mujhko ab ye dooriyaan

Dooriyan ye majbooriyan

Hai bas kuch hi saal ki

Le ke aaunga tere ghar main toh

Ek din paalki

Neela gagan hoga, sachha bandhan hoga

Apna milan hoga, mann ko ho o..

Tu hi bha gaya, tu hi bha gaya

Nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajna

Sajna pe dil aa gaya

Kyun sajna pe dil aa gaya

Are nainon mein sapna, sapno mein sajni

Sajni pe dil aa gaya,

Ke sajni pe dil aa gaya...(Himmatwala)

After the function got over...

Rano:We are taking Naina back.

Sameer and Naina became dull.

Avantika:So fast?

Rano:So fast?She stayed here for months.

Harish said emotionally:We don't feel like letting Naina go.She has become a part of our family.

Avantika smiled:Yes.

Mohit and Rano are really lucky to have daughters like Avni and Naina.We got Avni.But Naina...

Mohit:You are right.Our daughters are our blessing.

Avni and Naina smiled.

(Thank u so much my dear Reena for this edit).

Avantika:Naina...whenever you feel like coming here come here and stay.We will miss you.

Sameer and Naina smiled.

Rano:Naina...get ready to come with us.

NAINA:Yes mom.

Naina was packing.

Sameer held her hand and pecked her palm.

.

She looked at him.

He pulled her in a sweet embrace.

Sameer looked at her painfully:Naina,you are going?

Naina was upset.

Mujhse juda hokar,
Tumhe door jaana hai
Mujhse juda hokar
tumhe door jaana hai
Palbhar ki judaai,
Phir laut aana hai
Saathiya, sang rahega, tera pyar

SAMEER:How can I live without seeing you?

She was upset:Me too Sameer.I can't live without you.But I have to leave now.

Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa
Saathiya, rang layega, intezaar
Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa

Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey

SAMEER:Don't worry Naina.I will talk to bhaiyya bhabhi about our relation.They will talk to my parents and very soon they will come to your house with the proposal.After that i will come to take you home as your bride groom.After that we will be always together.This separation is short.

Tumse juda hokar,
Mujhe door jaana hai
Tumse juda hokar,
Mujhe door jaana hai
Palbhar ki judaai,
Phir laut aana hai

Naina embraced him from behind.

NAINA:I can't wait for that Sameer.

Sameer:Even I can’t wait.

Saathiya, sang rahega, tera pyar
Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa
Saathiya, rang layega, intezaar
Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa


Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey

Hey hey hey hey

Hey hey hey hey

They heard Rano call:Naina!

They looked at each other painfully.

Main hoon teri sajni,
Saajan hai tu mera
Tu baandh ke aaya,
Mere pyar ka sehra


Hey hey hey hey

NAINA:I am leaving Sameer.Bye.

SAMEER:Bye Naina.

Chehre se ab tere,
Hat ti nahin ankhiyan
Tera naam le lekar,
Chhede mujhe sakhiyan
Sakhiyon se ab mujhko,


Their eyes were full of tears.

Peechha chhudana hai
Sakhiyon se ab mujhko,
Peechha chhudana hai
Palbhar ki judaai,
Phir laut aana hai

Naina pecked his cheek and left.

Saathiya, sang rahega, tera pyar
Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa
Saathiya, rang layega, intezaar
Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa



Sameer imagined Naina before him and embracing him.His face blossomed.

Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey


Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey


Naina imagined Sameer in her room.She ran towards the imaginary Sameer

and held his hand happily.


Mere tasavvur mein,
Tum roz aati ho
Chupke se tum aakar,
Mera ghar sajati ho

Sameer imagined boating with Naina and pecking her palm.


Hey hey hey hey

Ooo sajni bada pyara,
Yeh roop hai tera
Gajre ki khushboo se,

Naina also imagined a romantic boating moment with Sameer.


Mehka hai ghar mera
Aankhon se ab teri,
Kajal churana hai
Aankhon se ab teri,

Sameer imagined themselves as married and Avantika-Avni

welcoming them home in the grah pravesh ceremony.


Kajal churana hai
Palbhar ki judaai,
Phir laut aana hai

Naina imagined herself as Sameer's wife in his arms and Sameer romancing her.

Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa


Aaaaa aaa aa aa aa

Sameer-Naina imagined themselves having cute kitchen moments

along with Neil-Avni.


Hey hey hey hey


Hey hey hey hey


Hey hey hey hey.


Sameer imagined travelling in a bus to go for their honeymoon.There was a chocolate piece in his mouth.

Naina started eating the chocolate which was there in his mouth.

Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey.

(HAHK)..

Avni put Vivaan to sleep.Neil came:Vivaan has slept?

Avni:Yes.

Romantically he walked close to her and held her closer.He caressed her face.She blushed.

NEIL:Life was so hectic that we could'nt get time really to spend with each other.Actually I am jealous of Vivaan.

AVNI:What?

NEIL:Because he is always with you.Wish I could be with you 24 hours like Vivaan.

She smiled.

NEIL:Anyways now I won't spare you.

She blushed.

They moved closer to each other.

Suddenly the Vivaan cried and Avni took him in his arms.

NEIL:Oh no.Vivaan is so possessive about you that he does'nt want to share you with me also.Guess I need to work hard for his approval to be with his mummy.

They both giggled.

Neil:Let me win his heart first.

Neil took over Vivaan and pampered him.

Avni smiled.

After playing with Vivaan for sometime

Neil-Avni lay on the bed hugging Vivaan.

Time started flying away.

Neil-Avni's life was surrounded by Vivaan.

They enjoyed a lot with Vivaan.

Neil,Harish and Avantika left to the office.Sameer went near Avni.

SAMEER:Bhabhi,I want to tell you something.

AVNI:To me?What?

SAMEER:I am in love.

She was surprised:Really?Who is that girl?

SAMEER:Naina.

Avni was shocked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Part 10

nice update.

lovely naming ceremony

Naina leaves

Sameer and Naina miss each other

Sameer tells Avni that he loves Naina

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Part 10


Beautiful and Colorful


Perfect song choice

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Hope u don't feel offensive when I point out mistakes


Avni put Vivaan to sleep.Neil came:Vivaan is slept?

Not slept but asleep

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