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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pori

This chapter was the best!!!!

I’m crying. It’s soooo sweet, so simple but profound.


I like the idea of a Sneha being 3.
also, bajaj going to Veena for help— I really liked the idea of that. Yes he’s the great Rishab Bajaj who can do it all, but the thought that he also may need some help and finds that in Veena is all ♥️♥️😍 and makes me like him more. Definitely gives us a glimpse of his relation with his mother in law.

Thank you for the little things which makes these stories of yours such a great read


I also like the idea of Kuki and Sneha still being fairly little and they would have been in the phase they didnt show if she was found.

I wanted to write moment just as you say for these glimpses of things we've never seen because I think these moments are probably what makes the characters interesting. Agree that Veena and Mr Bajaj is interesting to see and why not like you say son and mother in law.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid


great to have you back and somewhere I think I knew you were still reading this ..

Ohh yeah I told you this had been one of my fav story threads. But I think I felt lost with Rishabh-Prerna's relationship as husband wife in last few updates. I couldn't make my mind about them hence, decided be a silent reader than being a questioning one. I had questioned once before and I honestly felt terrible though you were sweet in helping me with the explanation. But it's better to keep my doubts away from the thread.

However, Rishabh as father has always been a treat :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya


I guess you think I look like this when I say I will eat Kuki & sneha up Image


I imagined you as anything but this :)


PS.. I have no idea how to insert gifs. If I knew I could share a closest match of my imagination of you when you say you want to eat up cute characters

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Discolights

Ohh yeah I told you this had been one of my fav story threads. But I think I felt lost with Rishabh-Prerna's relationship as husband wife in last few updates. I couldn't make my mind about them hence, decided be a silent reader than being a questioning one. I had questioned once before and I honestly felt terrible though you were sweet in helping me with the explanation. But it's better to keep my doubts away from the thread.

However, Rishabh as father has always been a treat :)


To be honest I'm never all that sure when I write for Rishabh and Prerna as couple. I can happily write for them in the business environment or as parents or as Rishabh the mentor and Prerna wanting to strive to his style of business acumen or even as single individuals but even I'm blurry about them as a couple.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Discolights

I imagined you as anything but this :)


PS.. I have no idea how to insert gifs. If I knew I could share a closest match of my imagination of you when you say you want to eat up cute characters

it's quite confusing. But I will try.

See the image option beside bullet numbering? Tap on that, insert the link/url of the gif at the URL option (the image requires to have .gif at the end) and then tap the enter and wait till the image loads. Then you can post your comment.


And if you can't still, then just share the link of the gif 😅 I will quote it for ya ☺️



Meanwhile @author of this story Give me new update. That's it. Soon. Two days max.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

it's quite confusing. But I will try.

See the image option beside bullet numbering? Tap on that, insert the link/url of the gif at the URL option (the image requires to have .gif at the end) and then tap the enter and wait till the image loads. Then you can post your comment.


And if you can't still, then just share the link of the gif 😅 I will quote it for ya ☺️



Meanwhile @author of this story Give me new update. That's it. Soon. Two days max.

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yes boss

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Posted: 5 years ago

another great update. it hit all the right notes emotionally, angst, joy & happiness. you really potray all the facets of RB really well, from his businessman aura/side? to being a family man.

as a couple Prerna is the weaker link in terms of being relatable (to me but you've still managed to make her way more likeable then the reel version 👍🏼) but RB as a husband is just GOALS . i love that you managed to keep his personality intact whilst allowing his softer side to come out (something KZK completely lost the plot on) & the ease in which you transition him between these shades is really fantastic 👏. i loved that he confided in her mum & bought her along for moral support knowing Prerna would need her. it's how a mature & supportive husband would act. really can't say enough about your RB

love that you've kept Kukki young & Sneha small, their bonding will be great to see & their sibling rivalry & jealousy 😛.

can't wait for next. also i can't believe it but i miss your update every time 🤔it's just by chance i catch them at all.

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Posted: 5 years ago

After Da and Ma... Is it time for Di now?? 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

After Da and Ma... Is it time for Di now?? 😆


The thought did cross my mind!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: oa2019

another great update. it hit all the right notes emotionally, angst, joy & happiness. you really potray all the facets of RB really well, from his businessman aura/side? to being a family man.

as a couple Prerna is the weaker link in terms of being relatable (to me but you've still managed to make her way more likeable then the reel version 👍🏼) but RB as a husband is just GOALS . i love that you managed to keep his personality intact whilst allowing his softer side to come out (something KZK completely lost the plot on) & the ease in which you transition him between these shades is really fantastic 👏. i loved that he confided in her mum & bought her along for moral support knowing Prerna would need her. it's how a mature & supportive husband would act. really can't say enough about your RB

love that you've kept Kukki young & Sneha small, their bonding will be great to see & their sibling rivalry & jealousy 😛.

can't wait for next. also i can't believe it but i miss your update every time 🤔it's just by chance i catch them at all.


I know.. Prerna is a struggle I don't really know what to go off with her I've not really grasped her other than understanding her love for Sneha, and determination to to get her revenge on Anurag.

She's defo the one I'm not sure about either especially when it comes to Rishabh and Prerna. I'd like to be risky and dedicate some moments to her alone and then her and Rishabh to see if she can be worked out. I Definitely feel I understand RB more than I do Prerna she's confused me from day one to be honest In the show and you can see it come through here.

If you have anything thoughts on her please do let me know - but I have something in mind that explores her better in the next few moments.

Keep a eye out for the next one! and thank you

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