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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


“Maine aapko kya kahatha, apne past ko bulakar future mein khushi se jahiye. Lekin aap abhi bhi apne past main hi Jee rahi hai. Agar aapko itna difficult lagta hain aapney past ko bulhaneki toh aap Anmol se baat kijiye, Pooja se kijiye, apne dil ke har gham har khushi ko sab ke samne aane dijiye Anamika. Aapko bohut halka feel hoga.” I said before leaving the place to give the three of them space.

I was just looking at him with blank face. I couldn't feel what to say now. This man is clearly reading my mind, my all thoughts or should I say he was reading my heart as my brain is trying to convince me I have moved on.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Anamika jaa rahi haina?

Gayi nahi abhi tak?

Anmol chodh ne gaya hai kya?

Nahi main toh sone jaa rahi hoon.

Thak gayi hoon naach naach ke aaj.

Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Haan Adu bhi so gayi.

Bechaari woh bhi thak gayi.

Tu bhi thak gayi hogi na? Jaa jaake soja.

Kal baat karte hain

Goodu nightoo

"Nahi buaji ab mai chalti hoo baaton me hi waqt nikal gaya. Anmol ko kahi jane ki jarurat nhi wo Pooja ke sath ruke. Mai Abir Ji ke sath chali jaungi "

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

"Pooja aao mere sath." I dragged her outside with me.

"Dekho Pooja tum sahi ho. Haa mujhe taklif hogi. Par ye taklif to us taklif se behtar hai nah jo anjane me mujhe zindagi bhar milti. Ha jaanti hoo dard chupana asan nhi par dard dikhana v kyu Pooja. Mai ekdum se sabkuch bhul ke age nhi badh sakti par dhire dhire kosis karungi aur kar paungi. Waise v mera pyaar ek tarafa tha yun kahu ki sirf ek galatfahmi.

Mai yaha rahungi to sayad mujhe aur taklif pahuche aur jaane anjane meri wajah se tumlogo ko v taklif ho sakti hai. Isliye mera yaha se jana hi sahi hoga.

Aur sayad Anamika ke nasib me kisi ka pyaar hi nahi. Tum jab sab samajhti ho to itna v samajh rahi na ki mera yaha se jana hi sahi hai. To mera sath do Pooja. Anmol ko samjhao aur use samhal lena. Mai janti hoo mere jane ka us par kya asar hoga." I said to her with teary eyes.

" Main samaj sakti hoon aapki baat. Ek jatke mein sab Kuch badal jaana kitna ghatak hota hai. Apke yahan hone se hamein taklif kabhi nahi hoti Anamika Ji. Lekin main aapki taklif ko badhana nahi chahti. Yeh bilkul galat hai ke aapke naseeb mein pyar nahi hai kyunki main bhi saalon se aise sochti thi lekin kismat kab kis ka saath kis saath jhodh de yeh hamein nahi pata. Koi toh zarur hoga jo aapke liye bana hoga. Jisse aapke pyar ka intezar rahega..Main dua karungi upar wale se ke aapke naseeb ka pyar aur saath aap ko jaldi mil jaye. Jaa rahi haina aap jaiye nahi rakhungi main aapko. Balki apke faisle main saath dungi. Jaaiye aur khushi se laut ke aaiye. Intezaar rahega aapka hamein ".....!! I hugged her and bid her adieu.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

"Nahi buaji ab mai chalti hoo baaton me hi waqt nikal gaya. Anmol ko kahi jane ki jarurat nhi wo Pooja ke sath ruke. Mai Abir Ji ke sath chali jaungi "


“Main?” I asked, a little surprised at first.


“Oh. Okay. Let’s go.” I said to her.


“Bua, aaj Aditi ko apne paas hi rakhiyega.” I said hinting to her to let Anmol and Pooja talk. They still had a lot of things they need to clear up. Actually, everyone here with the exception of Bua and Aditi, had to clear their feelings out. There’s no way to come in terms with your feelings when you don’t even know what’s it is.


We sat in the car and I started driving. For the first few minutes, it was quiet. But later on, I decide to initiate a conversation.


“Forgetting a love is hard, isn’t it?” I sad to her.

Edited by AnonymouslyS - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Anamika jaa rahi haina?

Gayi nahi abhi tak?

Anmol chodh ne gaya hai kya?

Nahi main toh sone jaa rahi hoon.

Thak gayi hoon naach naach ke aaj.

Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Haan Adu bhi so gayi.

Bechaari woh bhi thak gayi.

Tu bhi thak gayi hogi na? Jaa jaake soja.

Kal baat karte hain

Goodu nightoo

" Ji.. Bua ji aap jaake so jaye. Aditi ko laaye mujhe dijiye. Main usse uske kamre mein le jaati hoon"...
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Posted: 5 years ago

Abir dropped me home. I spoke my heart out with him as I couldn't say anything to Anmol that will make him more guilty. I got some relief.

In morning I went to Anmol's house as last night all requested me to come.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Abir dropped me home. I spoke my heart out with him as I couldn't say anything to Anmol that will make him more guilty. I got some relief.

In morning I went to Anmol's house as last night all requested me to come.


I came back from my office in the morning. Yes, something urgent came up and I had to go right after dropping of Anamika.


I saw her in the door. She seemed way happier than last night.


“Hi,” I said while getting my keys out to open the door.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


“Main?” I asked, a little surprised at first.


“Oh. Okay. Let’s go.” I said to her.


“Bua, aaj Aditi ko apne paas hi rakhiyega.” I said hinting to her to let Anmol and Pooja talk. They still had a lot of things they need to clear up. Actually, everyone here with the exception of Bua and Aditi, had to clear their feelings out. There’s no way to come in terms with your feelings when you don’t even know what’s it is.


We sat in the car and I started driving. For the first few minutes, it was quiet. But later on, I decide to initiate a conversation.


“Forgetting a love is hard, isn’t it?” I sad to her.

Jab apko sab pata hi hai fir kyu pooch rahe hai aap. Ha it's too hard but do I have a choice. I have to forget him. I have to move on. Yeah it's not easy for me but still I have to Abir Ji. Mai ab aur yaha ruk ke apni aur dusro ki takleef badhana nhi chahti. Sayad Anamika doesn't deserve anyone's love.

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Posted: 5 years ago

It's night 12 am ... The reception night darkens as the sun sets in and happy faces vanished as the guests walked out. I am in the Aditi's room caressing her head with a smile and a glimpse of Anamika's tears flashing me. I couldn't revert but to compose myself for a change.. Yes, a change to the new beginning.!!


Without my knowledge I slept there in Aditi's room. When I opened my eyes, it's morning. I rushed to Airport to bid adieu to Anamika.

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


I came back from my office in the morning. Yes, something urgent came up and I had to go right after dropping of Anamika.


I saw her in the door. She seemed way happier than last night.


“Hi,” I said while getting my keys out to open the door.

I replied him with a hii. I was really feeling good after talking to him. Here all family members showered love on me and I told them I am going today I hided the fact from them. They gave me farewell gifts and all of them came to drop me at Airport. When I was going to check in I turned to them and smiled wholeheartedly seeing their love and bid bye.

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