KTHL : FF - Part 8 Pg11 + 1st Promo

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kuch Toh Hone Laga

This is my first time writing a FF, don't know if it will be good
it will be in English and Hindi [ my hindi is not so good ]


Ranbir Nanda : Hot, Sexy, Nice and Caring. Everything you could ever want in a man. He loves his family very much. He isn't married nor is he planning to get married anytime soon, he enjoys living his life the fast way

Kanya Godbole : Ayaan and Ranbir's childhood friend. Her parents live in Delhi, Kanya lives in Mumbai with the Nanda family. Her parents had send her to Mumbai for education and Nanda's & Godbole are very good friends that why she is staying there. She is very laid back girl who loves everything and is always smiling. She secretly loves Ranbir

Ayaan Nanda : Naughty boy, the nephew of ranbir. He is married to to shanaya but secretly he loves Kanya since childhood. he is a very funny guy and laidback

Mallika Nanda : Ranbir's mom, who want her son to get married and settle his life. She loves kanya alot and wishes that she and ranbir get married

Shanaya Nanda : Ayaan's wife, she thinks that kanya wants to steal ayaan away from her. she cries and whines alot

Anjali Thappar : She wants to ruin ranbir and get nanda properties. she is faking that she is in love with ranbir.

Sameer Kapoor: Ayaan's friend and Business partner. He fell in love with Kanya the day he saw her

Will add the other characters later as the story continues






It's raining, A girl dressed in red comes out and starts running in the rain, having fun and just letting the rain take over her.
A car stops and is honking at the girl. She doesn't respond, he keeps honking. The girl turns around and screams at him, he gets out and when she looks closely she sees that it's Ranbir. Ranbir stands in the rain and is smiling, finally he tells her to get in the car.

** In The Car **

Ran: Have you gone mad? you could have gotten sick kanya
Kan: Tum Bhi na, such a funspoiler
Ran: Funspoiler, tum mujhe funspoiler kehre ho?
Kan: yes, koi aur hain ghari mein?
The car stops and Ranbir and kanya come out running and go to the house.
Ranbir sees Shanaya
Ran: Shanaya, mom aur Ayaan kahan hain?
Shan: Apne Kamre mein, I'll get him.
Kan: Shanaya, leave it, mein leker ati hoon.
Shan: Kyun? Woh mera pati hein, tumhari nahi.
Kan: Come on shanaya, just stop it, mein Ayaan bachpan se jaanti hoon, there's nothing between us.
Shan: I don't care.
Kanya walks away and goes to Ayaan's room
Kan: Ayaan, are you awake?
Ayaan: No, i'm sleeping
Kan: Stop joking, mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baath karni hai.
Ayaan: oh really? Kya baath?
Kan: Woh.....
Just as she was starting to tell her story, shanaya comes in
Shan: Ayaan, mujhe shopping le chalo na.
Ayaan: Shanaya, can't you see? mein busy hoon.
Shan: Ayaan * Starts Crying & Whining *
Ayaan: O god, Shanaya rona band karo, i'll take you you shopping, sorry Kanya, can we talk later?
Kan: Yeah sure

Kanya leaves, without looking where she is walking, she slips and almost falls down the stairs but ranbir comes and catches her. they stare at eachother, just then Anjali comes and is shocked to see Ranbir and Kanya like that
** Ends On Her Shocked Face **

Precap : Who is Anjali? Will Kanya confess her love for Ranbir?


Tell me what you think, this is my first time writing a FF...if you like it i will continue 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continue soon.. It is wonderful!!! love it 5 Stars! ⭐️
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itsss veryyyyy cuteeeeee 👏
u shud deff continue soon 😃
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Its sweet and awesome
U have to continue soon
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great FF! ur a great writer...plzz continue soon 😊
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😊 Encore. I want more 😆 😆 😆
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i loved it... a great first part... pls do continue soon
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hey tat was sooo nice..its a rilli gud start....n pls pls pls pls pls pls pls cont sooooooon!!!!! 😛 😉
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thx for the comments guys 😊 😊
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Part 2

Anjali: *screams in anger* Ranbir
Ranbir and Kanya look at anjali
Ran: Anjali, it's not what you think, she slipped.
Anjali: You were supposed to meet me a hour ago, but instead your with her.
Ran: Sorry Anju, i was coming to meet you, but i had to help her.
Anajali: is baar chor diya
Ran: thank you, looks let's go out to dinner, kanya mom ko kehdo ki mein aaj dinner per nahi a sakti
Kan: Ok
Ranbir and Anjali leave and Kanya just stands there looking at ranbir until he leaves

** Dinner Time **

Mallika: Kanya beta, Ranbir kaha hain?
Kanya: Woh Anjali ke saath......
Mallika: No need to sayaything else, i know
Ayaan: You know what, i just don't get it, what does he see in her?
Mallika: Only Ranbir knows
After dinner Kanya goes to her room and is standing by the window looking outside, she's lost in her thoughts, just then Ranbir comes and and knocks on her door.
Ranbir: Kanya, i'm sorry.
Kanya: Sorry? Kyun?
Ran: Woh Anjali ne aaj jo kuch bhi kaha , i'm sorry for that.
Kan: it's ok, waise tumhse ek sawal poocho tho?
Ran: Kya?
Kan: Tum Anjali se pyaar karte ho
Ranbir Starts Laughing
Ran: Mein aur Anjali, how can you even think that, woh sirf mera dost hain.
Kan: Ok, aggar Anjali nahi, toh kaun?
Ran: Hai koi, very beautiful, brown eyes, smile of a angel.
Kanya has tears in her eyes but hides it
Kan: Uska naam kya hain?
Ran: Naam? woh to mein nahi batane wali, leking meri paas ek photo hain.
Kan: Photo? usi ladki ki?
Ranbir nodes his head
Kan: Kya mein ushe dekh sakti ho
Ran: Aggar tum mujhe pakar sakti ho
Ranbir runs outside with the photo and Kanya runs after him. Ranbis tries to run around the sofa but after a few rounds he gets tired. Kanya sees him resting and tries to take the photo but Ranbir grabs her hand
Kan: Ranbir, haath chodo
Ran: Leave the photo first
Kan: No
Ranbir Twists her hand
Kan: Ow, ok fine chod diya.
She lets go of the photo and it falls. Kanya sees it.
** Ends on Kanya's face **


Precap : Who's photo was it? who is Anjali and what does she want?

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