TrollBaaaz Corner#42(Invites Only) - Page 67

Originally posted by: AreYaar

Oh nice song yaar....and the lyrics would suit Shravan a lot. Kahaan se dhoond ke le aati ho itne hatke songs😆.....seriously you're finding great songs for them these days! Kar lo yeh wala mix....I'd love to watch it :)

The credit for this goes to the autoplay feature on the app which is new so it keeps playing and mostly that's where am finding the stuff otherwise I'd never click upon also I had no idea yeh troll commentaries karne wala on bollywood events is actually a singer and a rather good one at that. This guy usually adds those extremely hilarious bg dialogues to red carpet events na so I was pleasantly surprised. Haan I will start work on this soon 😛

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

This one I'll watch baad mein abhi mann nahi ho raha mera as am too floored by EDKV hehe bahahah kusum bajaooing those losers will be a sight to watch out for i am sure .

Word on KT and the thing is his bhashans aren't even moving in anyway they are pretentious and come across exactly like that it's not making his character standout or make him look like some philosopher or bada hi gyaani insAn instead he looks silly saying that stuff ainvayein but yeh pakka HS ki hi writing hai ab kya kare woh fitrat nahi badal sakti apni but har koi shivaay bhi nahi hota jo cover up kar le most of your lameness and khokli idealistic soch🤣

THIS....matlab ab toh hum log door se sniff kar lete hain Harneet ka likha hua maal😆.....so much deja vu of her thakeli pretentious writing for Omkara and later with that Dhinku....she has some grand delusions about writing "philosophical characters" but they all come across as pretentious and khokhle....Om ke character ki yehi problem thi that always left me mehh. She basically sucks at writing 'good-hearted' characters without making them look pretentious.

OG Shivaay ke case mein he had the NKK backdrop to save his character initially but baad mein she tried to stuff bhaashans into his character too with the social issues track.....and it ended up becoming OTT there too. And ofcourse bad/"dark" characters toh she sucks at writing even more cuz she ends up writing depraved psychotic shit.

She's going to end up dragging this show down as usual too...smh.....bas Kusum-Preeti are saving it for now. I feel bad for Manav....he deserves better than to be stunted by Harneet ki shitty writing.

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

Btw *inserts* hasrshad chopda wala yahan sabhi gyani hain gif my fav🤣🤣

All time classic 🤣

Originally posted by: AreYaar

THIS....matlab ab toh hum log door se sniff kar lete hain Harneet ka likha hua maal😆.....so much deja vu of her thakeli pretentious writing for Omkara and later with that Dhinku....she has some grand delusions about writing "philosophical characters" but they all come across as pretentious and khokhle....Om ke character ki yehi problem thi that always left me mehh. She basically sucks at writing 'good-hearted' characters without making them look pretentious.

OG Shivaay ke case mein he had the NKK backdrop to save his character initially but baad mein she tried to stuff bhaashans into his character too with the social issues track.....and it ended up becoming OTT there too. And ofcourse bad/"dark" characters toh she sucks at writing even more cuz she ends up writing depraved psychotic shit.

She's going to end up dragging this show down as usual too...smh.....bas Kusum-Preeti are saving it for now. I feel bad for Manav....he deserves better than to be stunted by Harneet ki shitty writing.

Oh no doubt shivaay became too blah in those bhashans mode too i toh am khair not a fond of the social tracks anyways they phase pissed me off so much that's where my connect started breaking real hard but yeah even sso couldn't pull that part off i was generally speaking from those track end lectures on family and bhaichara he used to had. NkK wasn't annoying for me😆

Kya karein harneet ka sasta Nasha kiya writing dikh hi jaati hai😆

And yup same i feel bad for manav he deservez so much better and he's genuinly trying and jo thoda bohat KT worked initially it was only because of him the thing is they haven't progressed and shown anything beyond that he's an actor bas 1 word brief deke chod dia hai usko

Originally posted by: AreYaar

All time classic 🤣

🤣🤣 works in every situation 👌 haha I love how we have some of these gifs working as the best emojis and are kinda embedded in our lingo🤣

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

Oh no doubt shivaay became too blah in those bhashans mode too i toh am khair not a fond of the social tracks anyways they phase pissed me off so much that's where my connect started breaking real hard but yeah even sso couldn't pull that part off i was generally speaking from those track end lectures on family and bhaichara he used to had. NkK wasn't annoying for me😆

Kya karein harneet ka sasta Nasha kiya writing dikh hi jaati hai😆

And yup same i feel bad for manav he deservez so much better and he's genuinly trying and jo thoda bohat KT worked initially it was only because of him the thing is they haven't progressed and shown anything beyond that he's an actor bas 1 word brief deke chod dia hai usko

Ekdum SAACHI baat, as Kusum Kothari would say😆.......we've seen the full "range" of her writing in IB so it's easy to spot patterns now.

Honestly the show right now is mainly working cuz of Preeti's story and scenes with Kusum.....KT ka jo bhi dikhaya hai so far, especially this week has been quite blahh. Initial epis mein his dialogue-baazi seemed ok but ab toh ekdum stagnate ho gaya hai. Maybe things will be better when he interacts with Preeti directly again? I mean we did like the initial scenes like the almaari scene and the one when he came to her house.

But yeah itna toh hai that we were right to be wary after seeing Harneet ka name under screenplay....it's in the back of my mind now whenever I see shitty scenes ki she is writing this😆.....naa, I'm not going to give her any credit for Kusum...that is all mainly coming out nicely cuz of Rajeshwari's excellent performance and the dialogue writer's awesome dialogues.

Originally posted by: AreYaar

Ekdum SAACHI baat, as Kusum Kothari would say😆.......we've seen the full "range" of her writing in IB so it's easy to spot patterns now.

Honestly the show right now is mainly working cuz of Preeti's story and scenes with Kusum.....KT ka jo bhi dikhaya hai so far, especially this week has been quite blahh. Initial epis mein his dialogue-baazi seemed ok but ab toh ekdum stagnate ho gaya hai. Maybe things will be better when he interacts with Preeti directly again? I mean we did like the initial scenes like the almaari scene and the one when he came to her house.

But yeah itna toh hai that we were right to be wary after seeing Harneet ka name under screenplay....it's in the back of my mind now whenever I see shitty scenes ki she is writing this😆.....naa, I'm not going to give her any credit for Kusum...that is all mainly coming out nicely cuz of Rajeshwari's excellent performance and the dialogue writer's awesome dialogues.

you are not alone in thinking this.. and same am not going to chadhao her in hawa for ikka dukka good scenes that she may not have even written iske bas ki baat hi nahi hai kuch bhi acha likhna on her own totally 😆 isko bas kiddish fanfic style likhna hi high fi writing lagti hai and yeah am like 200% sure KT is suufering rn caz she might be give the larger than life character to write and she's doing her typical mopping around or too hyper/childish dhinky redux with him😆 and wohi half baked rishte that feel so superficial i.e KT and his mother ittu sa kuch feel nahi hota mujhe for whatever they share

BTW i loved kusum and preeti ke scenes sooo Lovely they were and what nice advice kusum gave to her son too ke balance between us i really like preeti and kusum ki night tiem convo too them sharing very personal bits with each other and actually accepting each other as sahelis.

kya bajai kusum ne uss bahu ki waise toh they deserved more but i laughed so hard at Kusum saying apne plastic ke ansoo mat baha 🤣 that was New and hilarious for sure

I started from a blank slate in my head just focusing on lyrics and then it fell together quiet nicely i started from lyrics and by the time i finished i totally went black on what to add for the starting 15 secs music piece so i deleted it . hope you like it as much as i enjoyed making it

And yikes there are some.transition glitches that am noticing now 😳 😬 and it's breaking the flow yikes

That Panna part was my fav part in the lyrics and when I edited it I felt that high of getting it right but damn it in the final edit it looks kinda messed up in flow yikes. 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ it looked fine in Vegas . Ughhh am pissed now 😤 at this stupid program which doesn't run as smoothly in the preview thing and sometimes makes such errors 😭😔

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1j6kzXKh0BNHCShLMsHYHKBqiWq8bl90i/view?usp=drivesdk

FUNFACT: 2nd try at posting a drive link after deleting once and trying again e caz IF thinks it's an abuse as it contains letter F x M x L in the drive link

looking forward to your FB :))

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

you are not alone in thinking this.. and same am not going to chadhao her in hawa for ikka dukka good scenes that she may not have even written iske bas ki baat hi nahi hai kuch bhi acha likhna on her own totally 😆 isko bas kiddish fanfic style likhna hi high fi writing lagti hai and yeah am like 200% sure KT is suufering rn caz she might be give the larger than life character to write and she's doing her typical mopping around or too hyper/childish dhinky redux with him😆 and wohi half baked rishte that feel so superficial i.e KT and his mother ittu sa kuch feel nahi hota mujhe for whatever they share

BTW i loved kusum and preeti ke scenes sooo Lovely they were and what nice advice kusum gave to her son too ke balance between us i really like preeti and kusum ki night tiem convo too them sharing very personal bits with each other and actually accepting each other as sahelis.

kya bajai kusum ne uss bahu ki waise toh they deserved more but i laughed so hard at Kusum saying apne plastic ke ansoo mat baha 🤣 that was New and hilarious for sure

LOL oh yes, that was hilarious😆....and her constant eye rolls at Rati ke crocodile tears were hilarious too😆

Kusum-Preeti ka night scene was the best where Kusum talks to her about missing her late husband....bada natural sense of friendship developing came out in that scene :)

LOL@ kiddish fanfic style writing....perfect description of Harneet ki "abilities"😆.....wohi chal raha hai KT ke saath right now, bechara.

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

I started from a blank slate in my head just focusing on lyrics and then it fell together quiet nicely i started from lyrics and by the time i finished i totally went black on what to add for the starting 15 secs music piece so i deleted it . hope you like it as much as i enjoyed making it

And yikes there are some.transition glitches that am noticing now 😳 😬 and it's breaking the flow yikes

That Panna part was my fav part in the lyrics and when I edited it I felt that high of getting it right but damn it in the final edit it looks kinda messed up in flow yikes. 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ it looked fine in Vegas . Ughhh am pissed now 😤 at this stupid program which doesn't run as smoothly in the preview thing and sometimes makes such errors 😭😔

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1j6kzXKh0BNHCShLMsHYHKBqiWq8bl90i/view?usp=drivesdk

FUNFACT: 2nd try at posting a drive link after deleting once and trying again e caz IF thinks it's an abuse as it contains letter F x M x L in the drive link

looking forward to your FB :))

Aww sorry you had to struggle so much with the VM yaar....I hate it when that happens :/.

But it's come out really well! The panna part was my fav. too....I actually think it still came out pretty well in your timing yaar and with the scene choice about the burnt letter.....mujhe itna notice nahin hua woh glitch. Haan thode other transition glitches the but honestly no big deal....my transition glitches in most VMs are way worse😆.

I also liked the scene you put in for the "jaana hai toh jaa" bit....that terrace scene from yesterday worked nicely on it :)

The lyrics are actually the main good point about this song otherwise thoda melody gets a little dragged out in the "tuuuuuu" bit - that's where you can see he's a bit of an amateur singer😆.