Shravan's Letter- Note- Video Link added

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I'm sorry but I HAD TO make a separate post about Shravan's Letter for Suman.


PS- Video Link on pg 1


Meri Sumo,

iss waqt sun paati toh pata chalta ki tumhe apni Sumo kehte hi meri dhadhkane kitni tez ho jaati hain. hum toh apni mauj main chal rahe hotey hain, aur phir ek din.. apne aap, bina bataaye life badal jaati hain. ek nakchadi si ladki, apni unchi naak kay saath, mere peeche bhaagti hain.
Ji haan, tum bhaagi thi mere peeche... aur pata nahi kab, meri sab kuch ho gayi- padosi, classmate, buddy, friend, best friend aur ab ... Pyaar.
I know pehli meeting main mera bahut kharab impression pada tha, haina? Pata hain kyun? Kyunki tumne mera dashing face nahi, mera bike number aur ticket number dekh liya tha... aur phir uss ticket ney phailaya raita! aur mujhe seedha land karwa diya tumhaare Army School main.. aur hum dono ho gaye ek-doosre kay against.. full-on jaise, ek dum dushmani type!
Aur ab mujh lagta hain ki... yeh kismat hi toh thi, jo haath dhokar humare peeche padi hui thi. zabardasti buddy bana diya aur humari woh stupid si dushmani khatam.
Buddy banke itna khayal rakha tumne jisski koi zaroorat bhi nahi thi. par tum aur tumhara woh Sumo-factor! Ki buddy keh diya, toh nibhana bhi hain... aur finally hum real waale dost ban gaye;
isskey aagey ka toh mujhe kuch nahi pata! Arrey sacchi nahi pata... ki kab, kaise, kyun mein tumhe like karne laga... ya shayad kuch ek wajah nahi thi, balki tum poori ki poori mujhe achi lagne lagi...
Par jabse pyaar hua hain na Sumo, tumhaare alawa kuch soojta hi nahi hain; har baar lagta hain ki issey zyaada pyaar nahi ho sakta... par yeh rukta hi nahi... kitni baar tumhe dekhta hu, tumse baat karta hu, yeh aur badh jaata hain...
pata hain, meine ththaan liya tha ki tumhe bhi khudse pyaar karwa hi dunga, par tum... tum mujhe bas dost maanti ho... apna Best Friend Forever.. gham nahi hain par, phir bhi gham hain.
Duniya main kitni saari jagahein hain, kitni Army colonies, aur har Army colony main kitney saare ghar.. pas hum shift huye tumhaare pados main; acha khaasa bachpan sey ek hi school main padh raha tha, par nahi! achaanak school badla aur mein aaya tumhaare school; class kay sab sections main mujhe tumhaare waala section mila; aur itni saare bachon main Buddy bana bhi toh kiska.. tumhara; iss dosti ko mere alawa pata nahi kisne... par kisi aur ney bhi dhakka toh maara hain... kismat ney? shayad woh laayi hain mujhe tumhaare itne kareeb...
iska jawaab tum nahi de paaogi, kyunki iska jawaab tum dhoondh hi nahi rahi ho.. mein tumse pyaar karta hu, yeh meri problem hain, tumhaari khushi sey upar mere liye kuch nahi hain. issliye jo dosti tum mujhse chaahti ho, wahi dunga; bahut bolunga, par yeh nahi kahoonga; sab sunuga, par uss jawaab ka intezaar nahi karunga.
Aaj iss paper par likh raha hu, kyunki tumhe kabhi nahi baatunga.
I love you.
I love you meri Sumo.
I love you.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for the thread Tanya!

The letter was honestly so so good! It managed to capture the innocence, the naivety, the first love wale feels without making it come across as too childish or too proud! Just the right amount of everything and a dash of heartfelt!❤️


I'm in love with how simple it is yet so convincing. Like yeh padhke toh koi bhi pighal jayega

Edited by Bucky - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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I wish ye letter Sumo ka haath lag jata. Galti se. When she is exploring/snooping around his room. Agar dance nahi, yeh letter zaroor Sumo ke mann mein feelings jaga deta.

It's such a beauuutifully composed letter.

❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks a lot for this thread Tanya...

The letter captured Shravan's emotions, pehla pyaar so well...

Kudos to the writer!


This has to be the best one I have ever read!❤️

Edited by Pranushka_723 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Really thanks for the thread! I almost watch the scene more than 5 times for the amazing lines and tunes! I liked it so so much! It was so well written! The feelings were that real like I could feel it!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank q sooooo much for this... from the bottom of my heart!


That moment was captured but we needed it in writing 💗💗


happy weekend everyone... I cant stand weekend for obvious reason but we have this moment that we can relive again!



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Posted: 5 years ago
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beautifully written..tfs...its the best letter

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Note- Video link is here, you can click on the link & download it.. sorry, starting ka chotu sa edit out ho gaya...

link- Shravan's Letter

Edited by d3luver - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you for writing it here

it was such a beautiful, cute, honest, dil se letter

Mohit Kumar portrayed scene well👍🏼

the scene was awesome with heartwarming flashbacks, music and Shravan's words❤️

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