RiAnsh OS : O Saajna Mere

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I don't know what have I written. So please just bear it. I didn't even know what should be its title so apni marzi se kuch bhi likh diya 😆. So here it is -


Daadi,why Vansh is sorude all the time? Kabhi bhi seedhe tareeke se jawaab hi nahi deta.Aur jab bhi use koi baat karne jao toh toh baatein gol mol kar deta hai.Pyaar se baat karna toh door ki baat hai,kabhi bhi mujh par dhyaan hi nahi deta- Riddhima asks.

Aisa nahi hai beta.Mera Vansh toh bahut hi pyaara bacha hai. Who bilkul naariyal ki tarah hain,baahar se sakht aur andar se naram. Hum logon se bahut pyaar karta hai aur hume kabhi bhi kisi musibat mein nahi dekh sakta. Uske liye family sab kuch hai– Dadi replies.

Aisa lagta toh nahi hai dadi. Ab aap hi batayiye,meri vansh se shaadi huyi hai toh main bhi uski family hoon na,par who meri taraf toh bilkul dhyaan nahi deta. Bus saara din kaam kaam karta rehta hai. Main jab bhi kuch usey kuch bolna chahti hoo,yaan toh woh kisi meeting mein busy hota hai aur ya toh Angre ke saath mein business ki discussion karta rehta hai. Mere liye toh time hi nahi hai uske paas- Riddhima complains.

Achha aisi baat hai toh main Vansh se baat karti hoon beta. Aane do Vansh ko main khabar leti hoon uski-Dadi replies

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Meanwhile,Vansh comes back from office and sits with them. Riddhima doesn’t look at him and turns her face in the other direction. Vansh notices this and smiles a little.

Kya baatein ho rahi thi dadi? Kahin meri shikaayatein toh nahi ho rahi thi? – Vansh asks with a smirk on his face.

Haan teri hi baatein ho rahi thi. Pehle toh tum mujhe yeh batao ki tum Riddhima ko time kyun nahi dete ho? Abhi tumahri shaadi ko ek mahina bhi nahi hua aur tum kaam mein itne busy ho gaye ho ki Riddhima se baat karne ka time nahi hai tumahre paas? –Daadi questions.

Vansh looks at Riddhima and then turns his face towards dadi. Aisa kuch nahi hai dadi. Woh shaadi ki wajah se bahut saare kaam pending reh gaye the toh unhi ko khatam karne mein busy ho gaya tha. Waise mujhe nahi pata tha ki aapki bahu mujhe itna miss kar rahi hai ki seedha aapse complaint kar degi-Vansh replies.

Riddhima gives a look to Vansh. Daadi mujhe kitchen mein zaroori kaam hai. Main chalti hoon. Saying this Riddhima goes from there.

Vansh also makes an excuse in front of dadi and follows Riddhima to kitchen. Riddhima begins to work in kitchen but just then Vansh comes there, holds her waist from behind and gives a peck on her right cheek.

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Vansh yeh kya kar rahe ho tum? Chhodo mujhe,koi aa jaayega.

Sweetheart,tumahri hi complaints door kar raha hoon.Vansh tightens his hold on ridhima’s waist and pulls her more towards him.

Vansh,yeh kitchen hai,please chhodo,koi dekh lega hume. Koi nahi dekhega Sweetheart. Vansh continues to tease Riddhima with his kisses on her cheek and neck. Just then Anupriya comes to the kitchen and both get embarrassed.

Vansh,tum yahaan kitchen mein kya kar rahe ho?- Anupriya asks.

Mom,woh main paani peene aaya tha- He makes an excuse.

Ab paani pe liya na toh jao apne room mein aur Ridhima ko kaam karne do.

Okay Mom. Saying this he runs towards his room and starts waiting for Riddhima to come.

Its been an hour but Riddhima hasn’t come yet. Vansh falls asleep on the couch while waiting for her.

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After sometime,Riddhima comes back to her room and looks at Vansh who has fallen asleep on the couch. Smile adorning on his face. Riddhima goes near him and sits beside him. She takes his hand in hers and starts talking to him although he has been sleeping peacefully.

Vansh,tum nahi jaante ki main apne aapko kitna lucky feel karti hoon ki tum meri zindagi mein ho. I know that you never express your feelings in front of me but I know you care for me a lot.Thank you so much for coming to my life and marrying me. And you know what I think I have started to fall in love with you.

She goes near him and slowly whispers I love you in his ear that makes Vansh smile in his sleep. She gives a peck on his cheek which makes Vansh to wake up.

I love you too –Vansh replies while rubbing his eyes and takes Riddhima in his embrace. He places her on top of him and both sleep in that position by hugging each other tightly.


The End 😆


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh..such a lovely & sweet OS Dii...

Just loved it!!

Beautifully written...👏👍🏼

RiAnsh scene... hayee...☺️

Edited by Fa13 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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My only reaction to this...☺️


Also, I love your dialogues. It's like I can visualize the conversation in front of my eyes.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Haaye main marjavaan!!! ☺️

Cutie Riddhu complaining about Vansh to his Daadi because he isn't giving her time... Awww!!!


Vansh kya antaryami hai??? Pata kaise chala ki Riddhu uski complaint kar rahi thi??? *Thinking mode on*


Aww... That kitchen scene was ☺️☺️😳😳


That i love you part was awwwwwwlicious!!!

Do write more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fa13

Oh..such a lovely & sweet OS Dii...

Just loved it!!

Beautifully written...👏👍🏼

RiAnsh scene... hayee...☺️

Glad that you liked it Bushra 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

My only reaction to this...☺️


Also, I love your dialogues. It's like I can visualize the conversation in front of my eyes.

Thanks for your compliment dear. Glad that you liked it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Haaye main marjavaan!!! ☺️

Cutie Riddhu complaining about Vansh to his Daadi because he isn't giving her time... Awww!!!


Vansh kya antaryami hai??? Pata kaise chala ki Riddhu uski complaint kar rahi thi??? *Thinking mode on*


Aww... That kitchen scene was ☺️☺️😳😳


That i love you part was awwwwwwlicious!!!

Do write more.

Thank you so much dear for liking it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Kya yr OS FF TS se kaam chalana pad raha


Cvs execute this scene soon please

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww how beautiful it is!❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagpieArshu

Kya yr OS FF TS se kaam chalana pad raha


Cvs execute this scene soon please

Thanks for liking it😳

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