Falling in love - 4 - PAGE 17!!!! NEW NEW

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yes yes!

I made falling in love 1.......I cracked up writing it when I 1st started

then I made falling in love 2..fell in love with Ranbir in the process

Then came falling in love 3....I am just trying to have fun with it and see where it goes.

**(hopefully Ekta would hire me someday)**

Now comes Falling in love 4

and here NO RULES APPLY.

if I never want to update this one then it's ok. If I take a year to update this it will also be okay. if I decide make my update only a line long then that will be okay too!!!!

It's midnight. I have to wake up early tomorrow. But I am in a good mood. So I will start even though I know no one is up at this time to read it!!

:::INTRO:::

:::::NY CITY::::

Kanya is outside a icecream shop with her ex-boyfirend (Nikhil) and a friend. (Jai)

Nikhil takes a cigerette out and puts it in his mouth.

K: Yuck. You are smoking? Maine kahana smoking chordo.

N: Kyon?? tumse kya. It's not like it matters to you.

K: [looks down] Nikhil you know it matters.

N: then come back to me.

K: Kitni baar kaho no. I don't love you.

N: but kyon??? Kanya I love you. Bohut pyar karti hoon. Jai usse batana!!

J: no man!! This is your jhagra not mine, Mujhe is lafra mein parne ka koi shaukh nahi hai! [goes back to his icecream]

They all go silent. Nikhil keeps smoking and it starts to irritate her. She tries to take the cigerette away from her. He raises his hand high she struggles to get it. She stumbles 2 step back and drops her icecream....on someone.....

K: Oh my god!!

Enters my Ranbir!!

R: Oh my god what??

Nikhil and Jai laugh.

Jai: chi Kanya yeh tumne kya kiya?

R: Yes!! [mad] Yehhh...tumne...KYA KIYA??

K: dekho! I am sorry. I am really sorry. Mujhe pata nahi tha...

R: Sorry??? You messed up my suit!! Sorry se kya hoga?

K: I will pay for the laundry. I am so sorry [nervous]

R: Does it look like I need your money???

K: no but....

R: Shut up!! Why are you on the road. Bohut dangerous ho. Tumhari haar taraf yellow color ki WARNING tape hona chahiye.

K: Dekho. Now you are just being rude. Ek ice cream hi to giraya naa. so what??

R: So what?? so what?? [he snatches the ice cream for Jai's hand and drops it on her chest]

K: [gasps] you!!

Nikhil gets mad and is about to punch Ranbir.

Kanya grabs his arm.

K: nikhil no. Jane do usse.

R: yea yea tumhari bodyguard ko kaho piche hathe. I don't have time to waste on you guys. [walks away]

N: Why did you stop me Kanya?

K: main tumhari tarah nahi hoon. Do shabd mein hatha pai mujhe bilkul pasand nahi.

N: but you let him go??

K: [nodds] kya pata? Agar kismat acchi hai to dobara mulakat nahi hoga. Aur nahi hai to....chalo choro!

TELL ME YOUR THOUGHTS TO SEE IF THEY MEET!! well obviously they meet. But what happens when they meet!!😉

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miss5stars thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
hahhahah all ur fanfics r nice
sachi they all r
but u NEVERRRRRR UPDATEEEEEE
😭
but ok continue wenever u feel lyk itttt 😆

i lyked itt!! itss niceee... u think of niceeeeeeee situations n stuff .... i lyk it 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just need an inspiration!!! 😉 This was inspired by my ex 😆 😆 😆 But Thank you. I will so update ff2 and 3 only I am kind of in a time crunch.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

I just need an inspiration!!! 😉 This was inspired by my ex 😆 😆 😆 But Thank you. I will so update ff2 and 3 only I am kind of in a time crunch.



Hey Fatima!!

Love all of your fan-fics.. Sara.. told me about u.. I love all your FFs and looking forward to reading this one.

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was awesome dear... loll another sleepless night huh??? i loved the scene =]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

that was awesome dear... loll another sleepless night huh??? i loved the scene =]

lmao!!😆😆lights are off. Mom visited my room 3 times already telling me I have to wake up early go to sleep. She came in to use my phone to check something and my dumbass friend called (my inspiration for Jai) She picked up. Gave me a lecture so I just yelled at my friend!!

before this I was happily working on my part 1. Ruined my mood😡

matwamango thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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So funny. Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was awesome
Update when u wasnt it probaly a strain now u have 4 ffs right?
Anywayz continue its really good
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
i love ur new FF...plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
awesome...where do u get such brilliant ideas from..it was very gud..do cont soon!

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