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Anjani9

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Posted: 5 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett
Did you get a chance to read Chapter 6? 😳

Now....yes....😊

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Anjani9

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Posted: 5 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett
Did you get a chance to read Chapter 6? 😳

Ashu is concerned he is not able to connect to Sara....looking forward to see how you will shape this story...

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Anjani9

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Posted: 5 years ago

#63

Nidhi is already connected to the story that is happening...🤗

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Lizzie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Nidhi is already connected to the story that is happening...🤗

Yes her POV chapters will be an important part of the narration to provide a third person perspective to Ryan and Sara!

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Anjani9

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Posted: 5 years ago

#65

So nobody knows why Sara is not connected to Ashu....🤔

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Lizzie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Anjani9
So nobody knows why Sara is not connected to Ashu....🤔

Yeah Sara is a very private person, she doesn’t discuss her feelings easily. Which is why her budding relationship with Ryan will become all important.

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Anjani9

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Posted: 5 years ago

#67

Nidhi is able to relate sadness of Sara to her relationship with Ian....how logical....yes when you are happy, it shows...

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Lizzie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Nidhi is able to relate sadness of Sara to her relationship with Ian....how logical....yes when you are happy, it shows...

I’m so glad you brought this up! You know that little thought of Nidhi’s wasn’t in my first draft of the chapter. I added it later. I’m so glad I did! It’s when I get comments like these on my writing that I feel truly fulfilled. Because i was able to bring in something that you could relate to. Thank you again for taking the time to comment on each chapter! It truly means a lot! I cannot tell you how much!

As far as Nidhi is concerned, yeah, she sees the world through her lens of love now. She wants everyone in love to be like her and Ashu and knowing how much he’s changed her, it’s unfathomable to her that Sara being in a relationship too, should feel differently. I know it’s like viewing the world through rose-tinted glasses because all relationships are not perfect. You can’t be happy all the time even when you’re in love. But right now Nidhi is riding high on that wave of euphoria so she sees everything from up there! And we do know that things are not great with Sara and Ian, so I daresay she’s right in this case!

Edited by LizzieBennett - 5 years ago