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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 4

The next day they reached the Goayal and sons by 9:45 am. It was , arround 11:30 am when their meeting got over. Paridhi recived a call from her home. “ Hello maa!” She spoke into the phone moving away. “ Beta tu ghar nahi ayegi.” Her mother said from the other side. “Nahi maa, Kaal Bhi kaam hoga aur mere boss bhi mere sath hai.” She answered. “ Thik hai agar waqt mile to ana.” Her mother answered.

Rajat was waiting for her near the hired car. “So what do we do for the rest of the day.” Rajat asked “ My mom wanted me to come home.” Paridhi said. “ You can go after tommrow's meeting.” Rajat said “ Ive seem Delhi but I haven’t been to Agra. You have been there I suppose.” Rajat asked. “ No I never got a chance.” She said. “ Then lets go.” Rajat said “ We can have lunch there", Paridhi nodded. They started for Agra immediately and reached Agra by 2:15 pm “So, where do you want to go first.”Rajat asked “ Agre ka lal killa.” Paridhi said in a daze. “ Ok Lets go.” Rajat anwered .

They reached the Agra fort. Paridhi stopped in her track looking up at the door. She felt dazed. Rajat pulled her hand “Lets go, what are you waiting for.” He said. They approached the gate's ticket counter, bought their tickets and went in. They stopped at the second entrance where the guide started explaining. As they stood at the gate Paridhi looked arround, she had a sense of dejavu. Suddenly she had a flash, she saw herself standing at the first gate surrounded bu people in royal atire , she herself was wearing baby pink lehenga and choli. She was staring at someone next to he , when she turned her face to see who it was she, the image faded, there was music in the background rajeshani folk song Samhar, Samhar Pag Daro

Padharo mangal dware

O dulhin rani.....

Music stopped when someone touched her shoulder. She snapped out of her stupor and looked up to see Rajat giving her a questioning look. “ What is it? You seem to be lost.” “ Nothing I feel like I’ve bern here before.” Paridhi said. “ But you just said you have never been to Agra .” Rajat asked surprised. “ I really don’t know what is happening.” She said. “ Forget it lets go in.” Rajat said. They went in the whole fort was made of red sand stone and marble. They were at the diwan e khas she was clicking pictures, Paridhi looked out saw people all around her everyone enjoying when the guide led them out to an opening. Paridhi stopped she couldnot move. “ Hey whats the matter Y did you stop Pari.” Rajat asked. She kept starting at the open parapet. “ Hey!!!”Rajat touched her cheeks lightly “ What’s the matter you look scared, Come on lets go.” He said. “ No!”Paridhi said “ How can Shehenshah kill him like that. So cruel. So much blood , no I don’t want to see it.” She closed her eyes and turns away.

“ Kill whom Paridhi?” Rajat asks. “ Ji sahab ! Sehenshah Akbar ne yenhi se phek ke Adham Khan ko mara tha.” The guide stated. “ kaha jata hai ki Adham Khan ne Sehenshah ke atalik aur sabse khas Shamshuddin Atgah ko mara tha isiliye sehenshah ne unhe yeha se phenka aur tab tak penka jab tak woh mar nahi gaya.” The guide explained. Rajat was surprised “ Ok so why are you so scared. And how do you know this from before.” He asked Paridhi. “ I ...I don’t know.” She answered “ It feels like Ive seen it. There was so much blood on Sehenshah.” Then she turned to Rajat looked deep into his eyes and said “ Aap ne us din humin dara hi diyatha.” Rajat looks at her and gives her a weird look “ Humne.” He asks. Paridhi snaps out of her thought again. “Can we go to the angoori bag.” She says. They go down. They stand outside the angoori bag. Paridhi looks at the central platform. Suddenly she has flashes, She sees her self sitting there with some one there backs are turned to her. She runs in before the guide can stop her. She goes to the front. What she sees surprises her, she sees herself and rajat sitting there. “ kya hua aap to humse dher saari batein kaarna chaahten the, kuch bol nahi rahen.” She asks “ bolna to bahut kuch chaahten hai par kambakht yeh aankhen humein dhoka de rahi, yeh kah rahi hai ki hum aapko dekhte hi rahein kuch bolen na.” The man in mughal attir says. She closes her eyes then she hears voices “ aap itni khoobsoorat hai ki koi bhi rang aap se lag ke aur bhi khoobsoorat ho jata hai.” Paridhi starts to feel dizzy and blacks out, before she blacks out she here's Rajat calling out to her.

Rajat’s POV

She had been in a Strange mood since the time she entered the Agra fort. At first she said she had never been there. Then she said she felt like she had been here before. Then when they went in he felt strange tooo. As if he had been there. When they reached Diwan e khas his feet automatically carried him to the throne. But the guide stopped him saying they are not allowed to touch. He had felt an unnatural anger towards the guide for stopping him. He had wanted to punish him. But then he controlled his temper. The guide told them to move out. He was going out but he saw that Paridhi had stopped. He saw that she was white with fear. He asked her why but she said something about someone being killed and the emperor being unfair. Then the guide explained the history. He was surprised he asked her how did she know. She said something strange, she said “Aap ne us din humin dara hi diya tha.”. Then she said she wanted to go to the angoori bag. When we went their she went in without permission then she fainted. At the moment he was in her room the doctor had just left. He had suggested that we see a psychiatrist.

When Paridhi opened her eyes she saw that it was evening. She looked arround to see Rajat sitting on a chair in her room. She tried getting up, Rajat heard her and got up and came to sit next to her. He touched her cheeks lightly, then asked her “ How are you feeling?” He asked softly “ better.” Paridhi answered. “ what had happened?” Rajat asked. “I kept having flashes.” Paridhi answered. “ Flashes what kind of flashes" Rajat asked. “ Like when I was standing at the second entrance I saw myself standing at the first gate, surrounded by people in mughal attir, I was also in a rajvanshi dress. When I turned to see who I was staring at the image disappeared. Then at the Diwan e khas I felt an unnatural fear. I dont know why it was like I had seen it all happen in front of my eyes.” She said closing her eyes. “ what happened at angoori bag, did you faint.” Rajat asked. “ I saw someone sitting at the central platform. “ shesaid looking down “ who did you see.”Rajat asked. Paridhi looked up at him with tears shining in her eyes. “ I saw you and me.”

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice one..

Interesting concept 😄

Continue soon..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice and beautiful chapter plzz continue it soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for all your hreat comments. Its really heartening to be a newbie wirter and get so much of encouragement.


Will update soon😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ipsitaray123

Thanks for all your hreat comments. Its really heartening to be a newbie wirter and get so much of encouragement.


Will update soon😘

Listen dear...I am Mahira...I think u should not write on parijat... write on akdha...it is not allowed to write on real ones... other wise ur thread will be closed by the team members....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 5

Rajat was shocked. “ Me ! You saw me, but Why me?” He asked in a incredulous voice. “I don’t know Rajat, but since the time I've met you these visions have increased.,I really don’t know what is the connection.” Paridhi said. “What did you see?” Rajat asked.

Paridhi couldn’t speak. She was too surprised herself. She was looking down at her hands. Rajat gently took her hand and caressed it with his finger “ tell me what you saw?” He asked gently. “ I saw you and me sitting their .You were dressed in mughal attire as if you were the emperor, you had a mughal turban on your head.” She said looking at him. “And I was in rajvanshi joda.” “ And” Rajat asked “I was asking you : kya hua aap to hum se dhersari baaten karna chahte the kya hua. To that you answered: baaten to hum abbhi karna chaahten hai par kabakht yeh aakhen humen dhoka de rahi hai. Humein majboor kar rahi hai ke hum kuch bol hi na paaye bus tumhein dekhte rahe." Paridhi had turned red. “ Is this your imagination or your feelings”Rajat asked. “ I don’t know .”Paridhi looked away. Then she got up in hurry and went to the window, “ I don’t know Rajat what I feel when I see you. Ive never felt like this before everytime I see you it feels like I know you from ages. I seem to know your face, your eyes, your smile, even your touch.I am so confused.” A lone tear rolled down her eyes. Rajat who was standing behind closed the distance beween them and hugged her from behind. Paridhi closed her eyes. “ Why Rajat why does this feel so right? I feel like Im home when ever you hold me. But I hardly know you" Paridhi sighs. “ To tell you the truth I've been haveing these strange feelings too. Its not just you.” Rajat said. Paridhi could feel his hot breath on her shoulder as he spoke. Rajat nuzzeled the crook of her neck with his nose, then she felt his lips touch her there. She moaned. Her moan was like a fiel to his fire. He deepend the kiss. She couldn’t take it anymore she turned arround and hid her face in his muscular chest. “ Dont worry we'll figure it out lets vist the psychiatrist tommrow, and lets see what he says.” Rajat said. Paridhi looked at him and they could see the same feeling reflected in their eyes. If things continued like this then they’d loose track. Rajat kissed her forehead. “I think you should rest.” He told Paridhi, but still not letting her go. Paridhi gently pushed him away “ yes its late go to sleep.” Rajat came near her again and pecked her cheeks and left for his room.

The next day after the meeting was over arround 12:30pm, they reached Dr Tiwari's office for their appointment. Paridhi looked very nervous, “ Don’t worry everything will be fine, we will find these answers.” Rajat said gently holding her hand. Paridhi gave him a weak smile. “ Next.” Said the receptionist. Rajat and Paridhi got up and knocked at the door. “ Come in.” Came a voice from inside. They went in. “Good Afternoon Doctor.”They greeted the doctor, “ Good afternoon, have a seat.” Said the doctor “ so who is the patien?” he asked. “ Me” answered Paridhi. “ Why don’t you get comfortable lie down and tell me what’s the problem.” Said the doctor. Paridhi looked at Rajat. He gave her a nod to assure her that everything would be ok. Paridhi went and laid down on the couch. “Ok, tell me whats the matter.” The doctor asked. “ I'm haveing flashes of visions, and hearing strange sounds.” Paridhi answered. “From when have these phenomena been taking place.” Doctor asked. “ I've been have bern having these dreams for a long time no ...but this time I was awake.” Paridhi answered. “ what kind of dreams.” Doc asked “ its always the same there is a lot of fog and I can make out a silhouette just beyond my reach then some one calls for Some Jodha." Paridhi answered. “ Ok! After that.” The Doctor asked. “ Well recently I’ve been haveing flashes even when I’m awake.”Paridhi answered “Recently meaning” the doctor asked. “ Since Rajat took over our company, I feel a weird connection to him. But this is the first time I've met him.” Paridhi answered

After the session with Paridhi the doctor adressed both Rajat and Paridhi together. “Look there may be some incedent hidden in the past which she cant reremember.” the doctor said. “ So is their a way to make her remember.” Rajat asked. “Yes their is, it is called hypnosis, I need your permission to do it.” The doctor asked. “ Ok.” Answered Paridhi as she wanted answered.

The Doctor set up the room for the procedure. He made Paridhi sit on a chair in front of the screen. Rajat sat at the back of the room. “ When the screen will come on there will be a spiral light you have to keep looking at it. Do not blink.” Doctor instructed Paridhi. KiParidhi nodded. He clicked the switch the screen came on “ Please look at the spiral light.keep looking.” Paridhi kept looking. “ Your eye lids feel heavy, you want to sleep close your eyes.” Paridhi closed her eyes. “ Can you hear my voice.” The doctor asked. “Yes.” Paridhi answered. “ Ok you will go back in time. How old are you?”the doctor asked “I’m 20,” Paridhi “ What is your name?” the doctor asked “ Paridhi Singh" she answered “Tell me what do you see.” Doctor asked. “I'm running late for work,” Paridhi said slowly in a drowsy way “ I have reached the 10th floor, I have to run. I'm running oh no! The floor is slippery I'm falling.” Paridhi stopped “ What happened next?” The doctor asked “ He caught me .” she said. “Who caught you?” doctor asked. “ Rajat" she said “ who is Rajat” doctor asked “ My top boss.” She said “ He...he...I know him ....but how ....I just met him.... his eyes.... These eyes ....its like I can never forget....b...but ....I can’t remmber.” Paridhi fell silent. “ Lets go further back. How old are you?” He asked “I’m 16.” She answered. “ where are you?” the doctor asked. “ In my bed....Sehenshah...S...S...Sehenshah.....where are you ....I need you.....Sehenshah.” Paridhi kept mumbling “hmmm she seems to be in a dream.” Doctor adressed Rajat. Rajat was amazed at the going on. “ Lets go back ,” the doctor said . “ How old are you Paridhi.” The doctor asked “ Im 10.” She answered. “what are you doing “My brother has bought two toy swords, and we are dueling.” She said “ Who won.” He asked “ Me as usual. My brother never wins a fight with me.” She answered. “ Lets go further back.” He said. “ Paridhi how old are you.” ...there was no answer “Paridhi, can you hear me?” he asked again , Rajat looked worried. He got up and called her, “Paridhi!” The doctor stopped him “ Aap kya keh rahi hai hum samajh nahi parehe.” Paridhi replied. “ I asked where are you?” the doctor asked again. “ Kya yeh kaunsi bhasha hai.”she asked. “ This is strange?Thik hai tum kaha ho?” “Apne mahal mein.” She answered. “ yeh mahal kaha hai.” The doctor asked again. “Amer Rajesthan.” She answered. “Amer is the old name for Jaipur. Yeh kaun sa saal hai?” He asked “ 1562.” Paridhisaid.Rajat sat down surprised, the doctor was also surprise “She seems to have gone into another birth. Kya naam hai tumhara,” the doctor asked. “Hum Amer ki rajkumari Jodhabai hai."

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome chapter now they will know abt themselves plzz continue it soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 6

Rajat sat down in shock. The doctor was also shocked. “ Aap kya dekh rahe hai.” Asked Dr Tiwari, “ Hum Kali mata ke mandir main hai.” Paridhi says. “ What happensnext?” the doctor asked.

Flashback

(Paridhi continues in hindi). I was doing aarti at the temple suddenly I heard a caos out side. “Kya ho raha hai Raghuvir Singh?” I asked. Raghuvir Singh was our senapati. “Jake dekho!” I ordered. Suddenly one of our soilders arrived “ Kuwarisa... mughal sena ne mandir pe hamla kar diya hai.” In the mean time the mughal soilders entered the temple. They started plundering the temple. I asked Raghuvir “ Kaun hai inka sardar?” “ Mughalo ka bas ek hi sardar hai Jalaluddin Mohammad.” He answered. My soilders had surrounded me... I told them to go and portect the temple....but we were highly outnumbered. By the end of it all we had lost arround 20 soilders and they had taken all the jewellery of the goddess. I was angry and frustrated tears wouldn’t stop falling from my eyes. I went out of the temple, I couldn’t figure out what to do I went in and touched the godesses feet “ Hey devi maa aap ke charno ki kasam jisne aapke gehne utare hai hum uska sar aapke kadmon mein arpan karenge. Main itihas badloongi us Jalal ki jeevan badal ke rakh dungi. Yeh ek rajputani ka pran hai aspse.” I prmised.

Flashback ends

Rajat listen with apt attention he again had flashes of voice ....Mandir lootne pahunche the jahapanah..... woh raajkumari itni khubsoorat thi ke hum hosh kho baithe....uska badan itna lachila ke main khud ko bechke use kharid loon .... what were all these voices.

“ Ok next what happened.” Doctor asked.

Flashback

I was back at the palace. I was fuming. “ Jodha chod dijiye na kal se gangaur hai kiyun is vishay me soch kar apna ji jala rahi hai.”Moti requested for the tenth time “ kaise chod dun Moti, jab bhi main maa ki moorti ke baare mein sochti hun mera khoon khaulta hai.” “ To bhul jao na jodha, chalo so jao.” I went to sleep.

Flash back end

The doctor noted something. “ ok what happened after that.” He asked.

Flashback

Gangaur was supposed to start in a week Me and my friends went to mathura market which was cheaper than Amer. While returning there was a forest. I had always loved nature and special affection towards animals. I saw a rabbit and told my men to stop the palki. I ran behind the rabbit, my men kept calling me back but I dint listen. I was too engrossed in searching for the rabbit I didnot hear foot steps behind me when I heard the footsteps I tried to run but someone held my wrist. I turned arround and looked into a pair of eyes that took my breath away, dark mysterious as if it could look into my soul, shoulder length hair a lock of hair fell on his forehead, my eyes went to his lips a thin moustache adorned his upper lips. He kept looking at me “ Yeh kya aap mera haath kiyun pakar rahe hai, choriye hume.” I said. “ Kiyun na pakre, Aap ne humare shikar ko bhaga diya.” He said in a husky voice, his voice sent a shiver down my spine. “ Humne kya kiya. Hum to aap ko pehli baar dekh rahen hai.” I said, “ Haan aap ne kiya na. Aap ke payal ke surili awaz ne humare shikar ko bhagadiya. Waise aap hai kaun aur akele jungle mein kya kar rahi hai.”He asked with a smirk on his face ,his smirk was enough to kill someone. “ Aapse matlab hum aap ko kiyun batayen hum kaun hai. Aap kaun hai.” I answered. He pulled me towards him hard,I landed against his chest, I looked up at him in astonishment, he was so close “Aap jaisi khoobsoorat ladki ko akele jungel mein nahi hona chahiye kuch bhi ho sakta hai.” Before I could answer I heard Reva’s voice from behind me “Kuwarisa.” Then I heard Moti “Jodha.” I pulled my hand out of his grasp by force and ran while running I looked back he gave his killing smirk again. Oh God that smirk ...”

Flash back ends

The doctor took down some notes. Whereas Rajat felt a deep sense of dejavu but couldnt put his finger on it. He heard the sond of retreating anklets “chum chum chum.”

“ Then what happened." The doctor asked

Flashback

My parents are talking about my marriage to maharaj Suryabhan of Sujanpur. He was handsome brave and according to my father he had agreed to help us against th mughals. All that was good but I was not happy. Since the day in the forest I could not seem to get the face of the stranger out of my head. What was it about him that I couldnot forget him.

It was the last day of Gangaur and we were off to the bauli to flow the diya for the puja. I was in the paalquee I was trying my best to forget the day in the forest. It was not right to think about someone else. As I was to marry someone else. We went to the bauli my mother told me the rituals. First Sukanya put the diya in, then I sat down, maasa had told me that when we put the diya in I will be able to see my future for a few seconds. When I prayed the wind started to blow fast there was a thunderstorm approaching, then I saw him again there he stood looking at me those eyes I would know them anywhere. I looked back it had started to rain heavily he was not clearly visible but I could make out he was wearing a rajput attire. Then Maasa called me away To go back, I kept looking back ,he was sittingon the ground he had my anklet in his hand. I wanted to go and get it from him but maasa called again "Jodha chalo khare liyun ho." So I went away.

A few days later I came to know that the stranger was actually Jalal. Our spies had informed my father. I couldn’t decide what to do, on one side I just cant get him out of my head, yesterday night I had a dream that I was getting married to him. On the other side I hated him as well. No I hate him, he has harmed my people... but then why do I feel this strange pull I shouldn’t. God please help me. Why cant I forget the whole thing. Is he really my future?

Flashback ends

The doctor switched on the light and tells Paridhi “ Come back miss Singh, now you will wake up slowly."

Rajat and Paridhi were returning back to their hotel. Both were lost in their own world. Paridhi was still in shock to learn what she now seemed to remmember. She dint know how to react to Rajat. She had recognized him but still dint know the whole thing. In the other hand Rajat was confused he thought “ if she hated me the why do I feel this love between us what is going on. Me why did I say me , was it me.” Everything seemed to be confusing to him.

They reached their hotel. “ Tommrow we have an appointment. Don’t you think you should inform your parents.” Rajat asked. “ No they will simply worry.” Paridhi answered. “You should get some rest it has been a tiring day for you.”Rajat said “ Yes well goidnight.” Paridhi answered

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely story plsss continue soon

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