AkdhaOS -Anniversary & their 50th celebration -page 13 -27/aug/2020 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for lovely comments ..thank u so much..

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Part 2

Hospital

Cop waiting for Jalal and ishaan.. ishaan confront cop & hand shake with him..

Ishaan: sir, where she is..

Jalal:she is alright with panic voice.

Cop:yeah young man, she is alright and she in room no 40 at first floor.

Ishaan: thank u sir .

Ishaan, Jalal enter room no :40 while baby held Jalal finger .

Jalal eyes fallen centre of room , one girl layed in bed ,may be her age will be 21 to 23 yrs .she look like cute doll omg god why mind thinking about girl.

Jalal mindthought distract from Ishaan voice.

Ishaan shocked face : omg , I am dreaming or I am in real world .

Jalal:ishaan, why u shouting this is hospital .

Ishaan: Jalal, u know who she is with shocked face.

Jalal nods her head : yes, mishika ka mother .

Ishaan rolled his eyes : she is my favourite , young, energetic writer , Ms sharma .

Jalal: really ,but I don't know anything about her ..

Ishaan:u did not read any novel right ..so u don't know about her.many times I tried take her single interview , she did not give appointment anyone for interview.

Jalal and ishaan engaged in their talk , already mishi take her finger from Jalal held and reach to her mom .

Shet ried step up to bed , but hospital bed height higher than her level .she tried reach her with help of stool..her little feet slip before she reached to ground four arms held her tightly ..

Jalal noticed baby tried claim to bed with help of stool , her leg slip, Jalal run to held her same time Ms.sharma open her eyes, smile crept on her lip seeing her baby infront of sight. She also noticed her leg going to slip.she jerkup from bed ,held her in sitting position..

Jalal eyes locked with Ms.sharma eyes . without blinking eyes both were starring while their hand mingled insake of both held baby in their arms .

Ishaan voice both came back from imaginary world .

Jalal pickup baby in his arms and her shivering hand raise to pickup baby from Jalal.. her hand atching held her baby.

Jalal give baby to Ms.sharma., she kissed all over face vice versa baby also did same.

Both almond eyes tears flowing in their cheeks .Ms.sharma held baby like her cheeks touched baby cheeks .

Ms.sharma:I thought that I lose forever ..time god nothing happened with u with cryingface.

Jalalstunned seeing their bonding , its seems like both cannot live without with each other.

Mishi:mummaa, why u left me.. I scared .its dark so much with sobbing voice.

Ms.sharma kissed her crown head : I never leave u bacha..u r my life .

Mishi touched her bandaged head : why u bandaged ur head with crying voice.

Ms.sharma hugged her tightly: shhh...nothing happened to ur mummaa..its little accidentwhile showing her finger in little with childish manner.

Mishi: sachi

Ms.sharmahit her nose: muchi

Jalal smiled her child antics mind thought: both r same to same.

Ishaan: mam..its u .i cannot trust myself with excited voice.

Ms.sharma know only noticed , her world not only her baby and two more person also in her room.

Ms.sharma:you ..with confused face.

Ishaan:Ms.sharma, iam ur big fan ..today really great day for me. Finally I met u straightly with excited voice.

Ms.sharma smiled lightly and her eyes shifted to handsome man stand next with ishaan.

Mishi turn her face to her side : mummaa, daddy only bring me

Ms.sharma confused face: daddy..

Mishi hit her forehead :o-hoo , u forgot daddy ..(pointed to Jalal) he is my daddy.

Three eyes pairs of eyes popped hearing baby confession.

Ms.sharma:what with shocked face and angry glare to Jalal ..

Jalal look at her like what I did it .

Ishaan(mind): when in our world history , first time baby introduce her daddy to her mumaaa..with popped eyes.

Ms.sharma(mind);what the hell, who is he..why mishi saying he is her daddy..why he stand like statue with angry glare to Jalal.

Jalal(mind): what I did it , why she angry glaze with me..she only said to doll.. Iam her daddy then now why she angry with me with fuming face.

Mishi: mumaaa...

Ms.sharma:yes baby ..

Mishi: mummaa, I am hungry with pout face.

Ms.sharma: oh my baby hungry , she cursing her fate , she is in hospital, she cannot make her favourite dish..tears flicked thinking her state.

Jalal sensed her mind thought and pickup mishi in her arms .

Jalal: doll, we go canteen and eat ur favourite food and then come back to ur mumaa..

Mishi: ok daddy .. mummaa , I go to daddy ..

Ms.sharma hestitate how to allow her baby to unknown person and Jalal look at her

Jalal: Ms. Sharma, I take care of her.. baby hungry , plz understand .

She nods her head lightly and Jalal left with baby while saying ishaan take care of ms.sharma

Ishaan: ms.sharma , I understand what u thinking, whom am I and who is he..

Ishaan:I am ishaan and he is my friend, Jalal Mohammed Khan

Ishaan narrated everything to mishi mother .

Ms.sharma:thank u so much,u save my life ..

Ishaan:u say thank u to my friend not with me, he was only take care mishi darling but I am confused why baby said Jalal was her daddy and baby said , u only said to her with confused face.

She also confused .while same time Jalal return to room with baby..mishi babysipping cool drinks .

Ms.sharma fake glare to baby : mishika,why u drinking cool drinks with little angry voice.

Mishika pout face: I did not asked mummaa, daddy only bought for me with innocent face.

Jalal eyes popped : baby , don't lie ..u asked it so I bought for u with pout face.

Ms.sharma: Mr.Mohammed, she is baby not u, she asked so u bought for her anything..its not good for health while how wife angry with her husband

Jalal: ms.sharma, see, I know what good for baby health..first I checked drinks integrident properly even I checked internet also .after full satisfied only , I bought for baby with defending tone while husband defending his own acts infront of his wife.

Ishaan mouth open widely (mind thought) : what going on ?

Mishi sipping her drinks while tucked ishaan pants : uncle ..

Ishaankneel down in front of baby: uncle, why mumaaa and daddy fighting like ruhi parents fighting with scratching her head with one hand and other hand held her drink .

Ishaan: hmm..i don't know darling .by the way who is Ruhi parent.

Mishi: my neighbor ..everyday they were fighting like them pointed Jalal and ms.sharma.

Ishaan: see , we confused but they were fighting seriously .

Mishi:when they finish their fighting..with pout face.

Ishaan:why baby..

Mishi:my drink finished, we go buy one more drink for me , u also buy one for u , In ever say to daddy with smiling face.

Ishaan: they both mad with for this drinking only but u want one more drink.. first I stopped them..then I come with u.

Ishaan placed his hand to Jalal shoulder : Jalal..

Jalal snapped his hand from shoulder while sincerely argue with Ms.sharma .

Ishaan shout Jalal.. Jalal turn back to ishaan : why u shouting , u shut ur mouth.and once again engaged with argue .

Ishaan(mind) : its waste talk with Jalal .. I tried to stop Ms.sharma .

Ishaan come to infront of ms.sharma : mam, plz stop it with pleading tone.

Ms.sharma: mr.ishaan don't support ur friend .. move away ..with fuming face.

Jalalpushed ishaan one side , he fallen to ground insake of in balance & sudden push

Ishaan rubbed his back while standing in his own feet with help himself :duffer..fuming eye to Jalal.

Ishaan shout : will u stop it ..

Jalal& Ms.sharma look at ishaan with confused face

Jalal:what ishaan with angry voice.

Ishaan:u shut ur mouth, I am not talk with u .. Ms.sharma plz stop ur silly fight..we get boring ..see baby already finished her drink even its digest also then whyu both fighting for silly things like husband and wife..

Jalal& Ms.sharma embrassed hearing word Husband & wife ..

Ishaan: Mishi darling and me going outside , we come later before we return back, we both finish ur fighting with fuming face. Left the room with baby..

Jalal& Ms.sharma look at each other later both blasted their laughter.

Jalal:sorry, Ms.sharma ..

Ms.sharma:Jodha..

Jalal: what..

Jodha: My name is Jodha Sharma ..call me Jodha ,Mr.Mohammed

Jalal whishper : Jodha , ur name also sweet like u ..with smiling face..

Jodha: ji..u said anything , Mr.Mohammed

Jalal:Ms.Jodha , My name also Jalal not Mohammed.. Mohammed only surname not my namewith teasing tone.

Jodha smiled: Ok, Mr.Jalal ..thank u so much, u saved my life ..i never forgot ur help in my life time.

Jalal: pleasure is mine ,mam with flirty tone.

Jodha:are u flirting with me with raise eye brow ..

Jalal:not all, I flirt only with beautiful lady..with teasing tone while suppressing his smile

Jodha mouth open widely : what u mean , iam not beautiful ..with angry face.

Jalal: u more beautiful , Jodha ..opps sorry Ms.Jodha.

Jodha smiled : no , Jodha enough , Mr.Jalal.

Jalal: then Jalal also enough ..i think with smirked face.

Jodha:I am sorry , Jalal..i don't know why mishika calling u daddy ..dont worry I tried stop her calling to daddy ..

Jalal smiled weakly : its not big issues .. where is ur husband

Jodhaface change to pale : oh ..he is not with us with stammering tone.

Jalal cursing himself why making her uneasy : I am sorry Jodha.

Jodha:its ok ..

Akdha chatting with each other and ishaan come back to room with baby.

Ishaan: time god , u both mu finished right.

Mishika: daddy see, ishaan uncle bought more chocolate for me ..with innocent face.

Akdha eyes glaring to ishaan..and ishaan nod his head negatively ..

Ishaan(mind):escape or u will face both sher and sherni ..

Ishaan: Jalal, I need go .. ,come later bye..he almost ran out from room.

Akdha laugh loudly : he is crazy ..

Jodha:thank u , Jalal..u carry on..i will take care mishika ..

Jalal:but who will take care u and baby with worried tone.

Jodha: don't worry , my neighbor aunty come soon to hospital ..she will take care me and baby .

Jalal:until she come to hospital and I am with u..

Jodha: why u strain ur self, u already did me so much.

Jalal:I thought, u r my friend . I hope I am ur friend..

Jodha:of course u r my friend..

Mishika: mummaa, he is my daddy not ur friend with possessive voice.

Jodha: mishi come to mummaa..

Mishi come to Jodha side while Jalal help her sit next with Jodha

Jodha: mishi baby, why u calling Jalal uncle to daddy ..

Jalal heart have pain hearing uncle word while his heart screaming I am her dad not uncle and same time his mind u r uncle for her not her real dad.

Mishi: oh -foo ..mummaa , u only said na, he is my daddy..

Jodha:when I said dear ..

Mishi: nowdays u forgot everything soon. ..if doctor uncle come , I will say give big injection for u.

Jodhaopen widely : big injection..with shocking face.

Mishika:ok ok..small injection. With giggling tone

Jodhapout face: ok , u say when I said , he is ur daddy..

Mishika:two days back , I asked daddy photo right ..

Jodha:yes , I remembered

Mishika: that day, what u said , ishika aunty sent ur daddy photo na..she only sent daddy photos.

Jodha sheepish face (mind): ishika what u did it..why u sent Mr.Mohammed phototo baby even without seeing photos , I am also said he is her daddy..hey bhagwan , what I did it.

Jodha whisper sorry to Jalal and Jalal nod his head lightly .

***********

Jodha neighbor reached hospital ..

Jodha: come Sarah aunty ..

Sarah Neighbour of Jodha , sweet person and treat Jodha as her own daughter.

Sarah: Jodha dear, u alright ., just only I got ur message .where is Mishi ,cop found her or not with worried tone.

Jodha smiled :yes, aunty she is with Jalal.

Sarah: jal..

Jodha:aunty ,his name was Jalal.

Sarah: oh , Indian names always make me weird feel

Mishi shout : sarah..

Sarah turn back and smiled and pickup sarah in her arms : baby , I miss u so much.

Mishi:I miss u too sarah..

Jodha:mishi, how many times, I told u calling her to granny not with her name with harsh voice.mishi pout face to sarah.

Sarah: Jodha , why u scold my baby..i don't mind , what ur problem. Mishi show her tongue to Jodha.

Sarah: Jodha dear, how u got accident .

Jodha: yesterday , me and mishi come to shopping , I missed my purse in shop , I did mistake , aunty . I made mishi sitting on bench in foundation area .unfortunately I got accident while crossing road . after I got unconscious ,time god Jalal took mishi with him otherwise I lose my baby forever. After I wake up , I am in hospital and I informed police about mishi.police informed Jalal as Jalal bring mishi to hospital .

Jalal: Jodha

Sarah noticed one young man standing in door and give little smile to him.

Jalal: hello aunty , I am Jalal

Sarah: thanks , Jalal ..u saved our child .

Jalal: already Jodha said thousand of times ..now u also started, aunty.

Jodha:Jalal,u go back to ur home, aunty arrived , she take care us .

Jalal sad face: how she handle u and baby alone.i have idea, I will take mishi with me after freshup , we will come back to hospital.

Jodha:no need Jalal..

Jalal:so u did not trust me with hurt face

Jodha:its not about trust Jalal, mishi trouble u, she such a troublemaker

Jalal& Mishi unison :I am/ she is not troublemaker with same angry face.

Sarah chuckled seeing both same behavior : Jalal , u have take mishi with u ..

Jalal:thanks aunty with happy face, Jodha take care ..we will come back soon.. Jodha nods her head.. both left the place.

Sarah:he is good person.

Jodha: yes aunty

**********

Jodha calling ishika phone..

Jodha: ishika with angry voice..

Ishika:Jodha, why u shouting , I don't want deaf soon while remove her phone away fromher ear .

Jodha: if u infront of me.. I will kill u with angry face.

Ishika:arhhh.. boss , why behave like hyper ..

Jodha: u shut ur mouth, why u send Jalal photo to mishi

Ishika confused face: who Jalal..

Jodha:hey duffer , I said sent photo to mishi ..

Ishika: yes, I also send it ..why u got angry like that person come to infront of u .

Jodha:exactly , he came infront of mishi and me

Ishika shout : what ...with shocked face.

Jodha:yeah mishi calling him to daddy with horror face.

Ishika: omg what I did it

Jodhanarrate everything to ishika and ishika in shocked face hearing silently.

Ishika: Jodha , leave everything, he look like handsome right

Jodha imagined Jalal face:yes, he look like greek god ,very handsome with dreaming face.

Ishika: really ..with teasing tone

Jodha:ishu ..i will kill u ..

Ishika: don't worry ..i come to meet u and clear mishi mu

Jodha:that better for u..come soon.

Ishika: I am coming .. even I want meet ur Jalal..cut the call..

Jodha: my Jalal with blushing face.

************

Akdha spend more time with each other ofcourse with mishi in hospital .

Jalal talk about her carrier and random topic but never touch her husband matter evenJodha have uneasy share with Jalal. Akdha very close friend with in fewdays..

Today Jodha s discharge from hospital.

Jodha: Jalal, where is mishi ..

Jalal:she is with ishika ..

Jodha tried walk without stick , her legs slipped before she fallen to ground, Jalal held her waist .

Akdha eyes locked one again ,

Ishika banged to room : wow what romantic scene..

Mishi: ishu, romantic meaning with confused face.

Ishika: u see both of them right..without close their eyes, they were in dream world..it seem look like romantic.

Mishi:oh.. I see.. when they come back from dream world

Ishika: I think not now..let wake up first ..

Mishi:how to wake up them..

Ishika: just splash some water to them .. with evily face.

Mishi:ok.. I do with daddy and u do with mumma. With excited face

Ishika: done

Ishika placed baby in bed while give glass of water to her..

Ishika: mishi..are u ready .. baby nod her head

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Bothsplashed water to Jalaleet in same time .

Akdha jerk up from dream world..unison: what the hell..

Ishikaand mishi both laughed loudly while Akdha fuming face

Jalal give his kerchief to Jodha: clean ur face...

Jodha: no Jalal, first u wipes ur face.

Mishi: mummaa ,u wipe ur face through daddy kerchief and daddy, u wipes urface through mummaa saree pallo..

Akdha embrassed and Jodha angry glare to mishi: u shut ur mouth ..why u splashed water to Jalal with angry face.

Mishi eyes moist and Jalal feel bad for seeing her face.

Jalal:Jodha, she was baby..

Jodha:Jalal, don't support her naughtiness.. u spoiling her ..

Ishika: hello, its ur mistake not us..both r dream world so we wake up through water.

Jodha: ishika...with grinned teeth..

Ishika pick up mishika in her arms left out without reply them .

Jodha: sorry ,Jalal ..

**************

Jodha Apartment

Jalal: if u don't mind I ask u one thing ..

Jodha:yes, u can..

Jalal:Mishika need father love ..plz think about it and give one chance for .. Jalal phone ringed ..

Jalal attend his call , his face changed to pale ..

Jalal: Jodha , I need go back to india ..with tensed face

Jodhasad but worried for his pale face: what happened Jalal.why u tensed ..

Jalal whisphering: I hope nothing happened to her..

Jodha:who..Jalal

Jalal:girlfriend ..

Jodha face change to pale: don't worry, nothing happened to her..with stammering tone.

Jalal cupped her palm : bye.. I will call u later..

Jodha nod her head lightly.. Jalal left the place..

***********

Delhi

Jalalshout while entering in mansion : dadimaa...

Nakul:Jalal baba, u arrived .. maaji in her room.

Jalalrun to dadi room, one old lady layed in bed and her forehead wrapped in bandage.

Jalalsit next with dadi and held her palm and placed palm in his cheeks: I love u girlfriend..plz don't leave me.

Dadimaa open eyes lightly : Jalal ..

Jalal:dadimaa.

Dadi tried sit on bed and Jalal helped layed in bed

Jalal:don't move.. u need complete rest .

Dadi:I am alright Jalal..

Jalal: I hell worried about u..after nakul kaka called me, u slipped from stairs.. my heart beat stopped one sec..u r my world.. with tears eyes.

Dadi:don't cry like baby.. I never go away from u.. I already selected bride for u..this time u cannot reject her . she is perfect for u ..

Jalal mind flash Jodha face (mind): no I cannot say anything dadimaa..her health notgood..even I don't know how she react that Jodha have child also .

Dadi:Jalal, what u thinking ..

Jalal:nothing dadimaa.

After one week, dadimaa recovered completely ..Jalal not say anything about Jodha .

Jalal went to Mumbai for urgent meeting in twodays ..it is very urgent otherwise he never leave alone dadimaa..

Jalal called ishaan and ishaan attend Jalal call in single ring .

Jalal:ishaan, u went to Jodha home or not .

Ishaan:Jalal...with dragging tone.

Jalal:I missed her number insake only I said go check Jodha urself..if anything happen Jodha or mishika with worried tone.

Ishaan:oh Jalal, her landlord said she went meet for her daughter father with mishi and Jodha said, she never come back to this place..she stay with him only .

Jalal phone slipped from his hand : she went for her husband ..she not anymore mine.

*************

Delhi

Dadimaa selected some jewels in hall and Jalal enter in mansion with sad face.

Dadi:Jalal , time god u came.. first come select jewels for ur bride ..

Jalal:ji dadimaa.. for my bride..with shocked face

Dadi:next week , u r engagement ..

Jalal:dadimaa wih shocked face.

Dadi:plz Jalal, atleast this years u engaged but when u want marry ..u marry with her.. I never compelled u . marriage day ur choice only .

Jalal left the room without reply dadi ..

Jalal: kahan dhoodhan meri beti ka maa.. if I will find her also..she not mine, baby not mine.. why god play with my feeling ..

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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New updates


Kahan dhoodhan meri Beti Ki Maa -Part 2


Akdha Journey FF- Marriage at First sight - Part 60 A & B


Akdha SS - Main tumhaare bina Nahin Reh Sakata - Part 2 -updating - request open my thread after thread open i will update next part



so PM later

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

When you are going to give update of 'Marriage at first sight' dear???? We all are eagerly waiting for updates.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Umiko

When you are going to give update of 'Marriage at first sight' dear???? We all are eagerly waiting for updates.


updated 👍🏼

check MFS thread 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Loved it dear

Awesome part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Amazing chappy akka

Loved the chemistry

Misconceptions

Who is the so called bride

Is jo really a mother or any adopted thingy

Update soon akka

Thanks for Pm akka

Sorry for the late reply Akka

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Awesome chappy akka😍😍😍

Dadi ask ja to marry🤔

Plsss continue soon akka🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Lovely updatee akka😍😍

Finally mishi found her mom....

Ja jo silly fight...😂😂

Updatee soon akka🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Awesome update dear

continue soon

Thx 4r pm

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