FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 43

Part 2 of Chapter 20 updated :)

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Love,

Sabi

I loved the update ..

The things I loved the most :-

1.Arnav takes khufia pleasure whenever Khushi says something about her hesitation in leaving the job..He hopes that Khushi is also getting affected by him…

2.He wants her to stay NEAR him but encourages her to go ahead with her plans..

3.He appreciates her with honest words n tells her what is the most essential thing to do anything on her own !!!

Sabi….

This Arnav of yours is definitely one of my most favorite Arnavs in Fanfiction world ..

I m sick of Ruthless ASR… Womaniser ASR … Rude n Heartless ASR … even The Super Sexy,Shirtless Arnav ..

Being a die-hard Khushi fan,I always love that Arnav who treats my Khushi like a princess ..

I know ur Arnav will love her like she deserves ..

Hi!!

Beautiful updates, both the parts.

Thanks to the conversation khushi has cleared her mind on many misgivings that has been haunting her.

Atleast she would be less impulsive to the triggers her parents or even shyam would present her with.

Totally in love with this Arnav......he seems so sorted .also the happiness that he felt when khushi said that there was something that is keeping her from leaving was adorable.

I am sure both are feeling that they would not be able to meet each other on a daily basis but then Arnav would surely find a way....after all he being the mentor for khushi 😁 Or else Nani and Anjali are also there isn't?

Waiting for the next chapter and the next.......

Cheers!!!!!

Thank you for updating the chapter quickly. This chapter was a continuation of the breakfast meet between Arnav and kushi .

After listening to all that kushi had to say Arnav’s simple and clear cut advice to kushi came as a relief to her because she was standing at the cross roads and was confused about what path should she take . Arnav proved that he is not her boss only but her friend philosopher and guide. In spite of the fact that he did not want her to resign from the company because she has made a place in his heart also he would miss seeing her at office he asked her to go ahead and resign from the company and pursue her dream as he felt it was necessary for her rather than working in the company. He asked her to be sure of her goals and take all decisions based on her years’ work experience and most important he asked her to close all the doors to her past or else it can come and haunt her he said he would always be in the background for her .

All her life kushi knew she wanted to be a business woman but entangled relationships unsympathetic parents were coming in her way to pursue her goal also did not have anyone to guide her ,here Arnav has come forward and extended a helping hand to guide her and move forward in life. With his support and encouragement hopefully we can see a new kushi slowly climbing the ladder to become a successful business woman.

His advice was sound. She does need to stop reacting and plan rationally. Looks like he has signed up to be a mentor almost for her.

OMg!!! OMG!!! So much content i don’t know where to start.. right okay. Lets start with chapter 20 PART 1!!!!! Also sorry for the late comment. I am honestly taking liberties now 😂 I read the updates.. go into total fan mode where I day dream and then tell myself I’ll come back later to comment LOL. I need to stop!! Also omg i swear this is going to sound so weird but i get a feeling when you update!!! Haha i thought you updated the fic and i checked and you didn’t.. but then it was updated the next day. I was so gassed !!!! :DDDD .. also btw hope you are doing well 🤗

Right.. okay. Did i mention how soft Arnav is? *Arnav calling* .. my god. I love him. I love him so much with all the fibres in my being (okay hyperbole but I LOVE HIS CHARACTER HERE😭😭)!! He just always knows what to say and do. The way he requests Khushi to drink some water and the way he consoles her saying we’ll talk tomorrow. It is just so soft! Also Lavanya, oh my sweet and lovely and brave and kickass Lavanya! I love her with all my heart (i really hope she gets with Akaash LOL. Give my baby some happiness) - i love how supportive she is of Khushi and i’m 100% with her on this one. Reading her perspective makes me think if i would ever have enough patience and tact to not curse or cry @ Khushi’s parents given the moment!! Although Lavanya’s surprise/concern over Arnav was interesting.. given I thought she knew something was going on. Maybe it’s the fact that this sutuation made whatever is happening between ArHi more legit in her eyes? Or maybe La isn’t aware of just how much Arnav knows now.. again @ this stage, he knows but he doesn’t know know, you know? LOL. Anyway, I love La. Such a wonderful friend!!

It’s so sweet how they both had a rough night and look so tired. Again, i love the little nuances you add to the story - the Delhi comment about the knee length coat.. it just comes out so natural and unique!! Arnav’s entry in his casual clothes and His lateness. LOL LOL LOL ADORABLE. Okay so I have to admit.. when I read this line: “Are we just that, though?” Arnav interrupted her, “Employer and employee?” - my jaw dropped and my eyes bulged LOL!!! I literally had to straighten myself because i was thinking OMG.. oMG LOL DID HE JUST SAY THAT and I was totally panic fangirling😆.. panic fangirling, more like excited! But still.. also the way Arnav recounts all their encounters to emphasise their friend status. SOFT.. the network service provider bit made me grin! I loved that chapter/update!!! It was so precious LOL.

Okay so reading this bit where Khushi opens up and tells Arnav everything was hard to read. I mean it was perfect, but it was so painful and numbing and I can only imagine how you managed to write it so perfectly. Like god damn, girl you can write LOL. Just so articulate and beautiful and i will never tire of praising you because you deserve it all. I think one of my favourite things about the way you write is how you mention the emotions and the situation.. for example you write how Khushi tells Arnav of her lonely nights and of what happened.. and then you further go on to say how “Neither tears, nor anger, nor grief crept into her voice as she visited her past with a remarkable sense of detachment” - it is just so perfect man!!! And then of course, Arnav’s reaction. His countenance, the colour.. his knuckles. Just so perfect (i cannot wait for these 2 to officially get together. Good God, i LOVE this fic)!! The bit where Khushi’s face fell and she asks “who did i have?” made me teary. It made me teary when I first read it and it’s made me teary as I re-read the update to comment. My baby :(((( i think what makes this bit even more heartbreaking is the fact that Arnav realised Khushi went through all this whilst he was there. I’m a bit confused here.. not confused here but torn. I don’t want to make this about Arnav because it isn’t and shouldn’t be about him but I think it was a very important scene to read about because there were signs potentially about Khushi’s abuse? Even if they were extremely subtle and even if she would deny it? I mean.. i don’t know if that’s okay to say actually but surely Arnav could have asked or enquired about Khushi’s lateness a bit more? Ahhhh, i feel guilty saying this as well because it’s not his fault either?? I just think there needs to be more awareness or education about this matter? Maybe some more support.. ahh i don’t know. It is just hard and sad @ the same time and i think Arnav’s realisation just had me thinking this.

The question in physical abuse and the “don’t answer that” - again, done perfectly with such subtlety and brilliance. I can’t elaborate otherwise i will literally cry LOL.

I just have to say I am so happy for Khushi. Finally having someone she can share all her burdens (whatever she feels comfortable with) and just being able to talk about her hopes and dreams with. It makes me so happy and hopeful. She deserves the world and more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Btw so sorry to hear of your neighbours and acquaintances. I hope they are okay. And you and your family as well!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ (Just saw the note now. I must have missed it before).. hope you are well x

Okay so this update was so cool with Arnav being so supportive and being the perfect mentor hitting Khushi with great advice and facts. It literally made me love him more because he’s looking @ Khushi’s happiness, her desires above his need to want her with him (the head over heart comment. My god) !! I mean this could be good in terms of the future and realising how much of an asset they are both to each other.. on a personal and a professional basis tbh. I am a bit sad she is leaving.. but i am so happy and proud and can’t wait to see how the fic will progress. I am also a mad *go Khushi, do it girl* mood right now so heyy!! Haha.. also the age bit😆 - these 2 are so precious i can’t !!

ALSO WOW @ the scene where Arnav asks what’s been holding Khushi back and her “i don’t know” - soft, soft, soft. He knows.. of course he knows. “The flicker of happiness” on his countenance had me smileeeeee!!! That is my boy😆 i’m rooting on these 2 having a happy ending so bad !!

All the talk of missing people and leaving has me soft. I loved the little lessons and reminders that I find in the updates e.g. “You never know when you begin to grow fond of something” - soft!! I also love how you ended the update with the both of them smiling and being themselves.. i love how Khushi smiled a bright smile. It’s like the perfect ending or lets say.. an interlude. Cannot wait for the next update ❤️

Are we getting an update soon? 😬😬

Originally posted by: Dee_J

Are we getting an update soon? 😬😬

Dee blog check krti rehna i think she said something like wont be logging in IF but will update on blog

Originally posted by: Miss.Zaidi

Dee blog check krti rehna i think she said something like wont be logging in IF but will update on blog