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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 17


Wow this Update was truly Awesome


and so Fantastic

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Thanks a lot friends


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 18

Kabir takes out a rose.
Kabir:This is for you.
Asha smiles:For me?

He nods his head with a smile.
She takes it from him.
Asha:What is this?

He closes his eyes due to tension.

Kabir:I..I...I got this rose from a girl.
Asha bursts into laughter.
Asha:You were like this in college also.Girls used to be after you with roses.But you were so tensed that you used to give all the roses to me.


He tells in his mind:Those roses were always for you Asha.But I never got the courage to tell you that.

Omkara,Shlok and Gauri go to Nainital.


GAURI:It's such a beautiful place!
OMKARA:Yes..really beautiful.

Shlok:It’s a heavenly place.There should have been Asha also with us.



Gauri:Right.

Shlok keeps walking around enjoying the beauty of the place giving privacy to Omkara and Gauri.

Omkara pulls Gauri closer and looks at her romantically:This cool weather..atmosphere....so romantic Gauri...

She blushes,

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai

Omkara caresses Gauri's face romantically.

Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Gauri embraces him shyly.

Tum se hi din hota hai

Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Omkara:We will book rooms in the hotel and go out.

Gauri:Ok.

They call Shlok and go to the hotel.

They took rooms in the hotel and go out.


They walk enjoying the beauty of Nainital.
Omkara dances cheerfully around Gauri and Gauri also enjoys dancing wth Omkara.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai

Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Tum se hi din hota hai

Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi


Shlok sees Asha standing behind the tree.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai


Shlok can't believe his eyes.Asha is also stunned to see him.

Shlok:Asha!

Asha:Shlok!

Tum se hi din hota hai

Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Feeling guilty and emotional Asha tries to walk away.Shlok holds her hand.

She stares at him unbelievingly.

Shlok:Why are you going away without even talking to me?

Asha:Because I don't deserve you and you hate me.

Shlok:No Asha.Let us forget the past and move on.

She can't believe it:What?

Shlok:In your absence I realized your love.I missed you a lot Asha.

She is stunned.

Shlok:Come back to me Asha.I love you.I can't live without you.

Asha becomes very emotional:I love you too Shlok.

They embraced each other emotionally.



Asha:Please don't leave me again.

Shlok:Never.



Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi



They both are lost in each other.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai... (Jab we met).

Omkara and Gauri look at Shlok.
OMKARA:What happened to Shlok?Whom is he talking to?
GAURI:That is what I can't understand.
OMKARA:Shlok is not in this world.He has been surrounded by Asha's memories.Poor guy.
GAURI:Oh!
OMKARA:Shlok!
Suddenly Shlok realizes that it's only a dream.
SHLOK:Yes Omkara.
OMKARA:What are you doing there?

SHLOK:Asha…she was here...

OMKARA:You are dreaming Shlok...

He is embarrassed.



At night…

Omkara:Gauri…you look tired.You did’nt enjoy our outing?

Gauri:I really enjoyed a lot.Holding your hands and walking is always beautiful for me.

They smiled at each other.

Omkara:But it’s true that you are really tired of walking during side seeing.So don’t walk anymore.

He carries her in his arms.

Gauri:Omkara…why are you doing so?

Omkara:Why?I can’t carry my Gauri even when she is tired?

She smiled.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Saathiya…saathiya

Saathiya…saathiya(IB).

Gauri keeps her face on his chest.

Gauri:I’m so lucky to get a husband like you.You value even the silly part of mine.

Omkara:You are my treasure Gauri.Nothing of you is silly.You are completely precious.

She becomes emotional.

Omkara places her on the bed and does oil massage on her legs.



She smiles.

Omkara:How do you feel now Gauri?

Gauri:When yo touched me itself my legs became fine.

Omkara:Really?Then can I touch all your parts to make you completely fine?

Gauri:You naughty…I am going to sleep now.

Omkara:Ok.I’m letting you sleep now only because you are tired.Don’t think all nights you will be permitted to sleep.

She blushes.


Asha gives milk to Arush who is resting on the bed.

Arush:Please say a story mumma…

Asha:But Arush..it's time to sleep.

Arush:Mumma...please...tell a nice story na...



Asha:Ok dear.

Asha starts telling him a story.



Arush falls asleep.

Asha covers him with a duvet and kisses his forehead.

She freshens up and goes to the dining room to eat something.Kabir sits near her.
KABIR:Asha..can I ask you something?
Asha:Ya.Ask Kabir.


KABIR:You did'nt feel jealous when I received rose from that girl?

Asha:What rubbish!Are you crazy?Why should I be jealous?You are always kiddish.
He laughs.She also bursts into laughter.

Asha:You always make me laugh through your stupid jokes.

They laugh again.

Shlok looks at the moon and smiles.

Shlok:i wish you were here with me Asha.

He goes to the dream world.He imagines dancing with Asha romantically in the moonlight.

Sajna Ve...


Chupke se aahista

(Silently and slowly)


Ho raha hu laapata

(I am loosing my self)


Uljha sawaloon mein

(Entangled in question)


Ab tere hi khayaloon mein

(Now in your imagination)


Kaise yeh chahat hain

(What kind of love is this)


Roke hi na ruke

(Can't stop even if tried)


Ikpal na raahat hain

(There is no escape for once)


Dhadkan gawa chuke

(I have lost my heartbeat)


Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon

(What shall I name this love?)


Kohe hain kuch alfaz kyun

( why some phrases are lost?)


Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon

(What shall I name this love)


Kya naam doon..kya naam doon


Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon


Iss marz ko kaise sahu

(How can I bear this pain)


Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon(IPKKND EBF).

Omkara wakes up Gauri at 4.30 A.M.

Gauri:Omkara...what happened?

Omkara:Gauri..it's early morning though the sky is still dark.

Freshen up and ....

Omkara gives a cover to Gauri.

Omkara:Wear this attire.

She is very happy to see it.

Gauri:It is so pretty.

Omkara:I will only gift pretty things to my Gauri.

She smiles.

She wears it.

Seeing her his face blossoms.

Gauri:Why are you staring at me Omkara as if you are seeing me for the first time?

Omkara turns off his face blushing.Seeing that Gauri smirks.

Gauri:Is Omkara Singh Oberoi blushing?

He is shy.



He chuckles to hide his blush:No no...I am not you to blush..

Gauri:Really?

Omkara holds her hand and walks towards the window.

Omkara oints his hand towards the sky:Are you seeing those twinkling stars and shining moon?

Gauri smiles:Yes.They look so beautiful.

He looks at her deeply.

Omkara:My Gauri looks more beautiful than them.

Gauri blushes.

They both smile romantically.

Gauri:Omkara..I am getting bored.

Omkara;Then we will play cards.

Gauri:Oh no..

Omkara:Please Gauri.

Gauri:Ok.

Omkara took cards from his box and they play.



Omkara and Gauri get tired after playing cards.

Gauri:Now we will go for break fast.

Om:Ok.
Omkara knocks at Shlok's door.
OMKARA:Shlok!
Shlok opens the door.
OMKARA:Come..let us go for breakfast.
SHLOK:You both carry on.
OMKARA:You are not coming?
SHLOK:No Omkara.I don't feel like eating anything.
GAURI:Why?
Omkara smiles:Shlok is really excited to see Asha.He will eat only if he finds out Asha.
Shlok is shy.
OMKARA:Don't starve.You eat breakfast.
SHLOK:You both go.I will take bath now.After that I will have my breakfast.




OMKARA:Ok.
Omkara and Gauri go and have breakfast.
After breakfast they gave order for sweets.
Omkara feeds her sweet.
Gauri smiles and feeds him the sweet.

Suddenly a lady comes near them.
"Mrs Mittal!"
Gauri and Omkara look at her.
She:We thought you are a decent lady.You are cheating on your husband and romancing another man?
Omkara loses his control and bursts out.
OMKARA:Shut up.How dare you say such bad things about my wife?
She:Wife?How come she is your wife?She is our neighbour.Mr.Kabir Mittal's wife.
OMKARA:What nonsense!
GAURI:Omkara..calm down.What if she is talking about Asha?
Omkara comes to his senses.
OMKARA:Asha...Asha is Kabir Mittal's wife?
Gauri is also tensed about that.

Gauri:If it’s true,then what will be Shlok’s condition?

Omkara:Oh no…we will have to find out the truth now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Asha is married? They have to go find out the truth.

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Shlok disappointed and Omkara pacifying him was nice

So Asha gave birth to a baby boy

But Who's this kid? What is his real name?

Kavya thought Asha is Gauri

Now they know about Asha's whereabouts

Omg kabir is going to propose Asha

Waiting for next

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Sad that Shlok is fully captured by memories

Who wakes up at 4 am to romance and play cards 😏

The earlier scenes were nice

Asha is Kabir's wife? What will happen of Shlok?

Waiting for next

Hey I asked for yjhjk ff, but I read Saaya already and I need a fresh ff, but the ff should have Arhaan Behll as well along with Aman and Roshni...Arhaan is also a part of the show so I want an ff where there are two couples, one of Aman Roshni and some other girl with Arhaan, if u can then do tell

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks a lot.Asha's son is played by the boy who plays Saransh in YHC.He acted with Shrenu in EBSS.

Yes,i will write a roshan Arhaan FF.But next month



Originally posted by: salley145

Shlok disappointed and Omkara pacifying him was nice

So Asha gave birth to a baby boy

But Who's this kid? What is his real name?

Kavya thought Asha is Gauri

Now they know about Asha's whereabouts

Omg kabir is going to propose Asha

Waiting for next

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hi...intense update... thanks for the pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 18


Awesome Update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank u very much friends


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 19

Omkara and Gauri go and have breakfast.
After breakfast they gave order for sweets.
Omkara feeds her sweet.
Gauri smiles and feeds him the sweet.

Suddenly a lady comes near them.
"Mrs Mittal!"
Gauri and Omkara look at her.
She:We thought you are a decent lady.You are cheating on your husband and romancing another man?
Omkara loses his control and bursts out.
OMKARA:Shut up.How dare you say such bad things about my wife?
She:Wife?How come she is your wife?She is our neighbour.Mr.Kabir Mittal's wife.
OMKARA:What nonsense!
GAURI:Omkara..calm down.What if she is talking about Asha?
Omkara comes to his senses.
OMKARA:Asha...Asha is Kabir Mittal's wife?
Gauri is also tensed about that.

Gauri:If it’s true,then what will be Shlok’s condition?

Omkara:Oh no…we will have to find out the truth now.

OMKARA to the lady:Are you talking about Asha?
She:Yes.
GAURI:Asha is my twin sister.I'm Omkara Singh Oberoi's wife Gauri.
She:Oh!I'm sorry.
GAURI:It's ok.
She:But Asha did'nt tell us about having a twin sister.
GAURI:Actually due to some problems she left our home town.We were not in touch with her for the last few years.We came here in search of her.
She:Oh!Her husband Kabir Mittal had told us their story.
GAURI:What did he say?
She:He said that they both were in love.Asha's family opposed their marriage.So they eloped and got married.After that they got settled in Nainital.They have no contact with their family.Good thing that atleast now you all came in search of them.

Gauri and Omkara are shocked.
GAURI:Your good name please?
She:Ragini Mehta.
GAURI:Can you please give us their address?
OMKARA:Sure.
She gives them the address.
Ragini:Visit them as soon as possible.They will be really happy.Now there is one more member in that family.Arush.Asha and Kabir's son.
Omkara and Gauri are shocked.

OMKARA:Ok bye..
GAURI:Bye.
Ragini goes.
OMKARA:I just can't believe this.Asha is remarried?
GAURI:I'm also shocked.Kabir was our college mate.He was Asha's best friend.But how did Asha marry Kabir?
OMKARA:How will i tell bro that Asha is married and has a son also?
Gauri is very upset.
GAURI:Omkara..we should find out the what the exact condition is.What if things we heard are not true?

OMKARA:We will find out.Till then we should not tell anything to Shlok.
GAURI:Yes.

Kabir's mother Suman sits near him.
SUMAN:Did you confess your love to Asha?
KABIR:No mom .
SUMAN:Since college days you have been trying to propose to Asha.Till now you could'nt confess.
KABIR:I get nervous when i try to propose.
SUMAN:You became late in proposing to her.So you lost her once.She got married.Again God has given you a chance.If you become late again...you may lose her again.



KABIR:But Mom..I am scared.What if she does’nt love me?



SUMAN:Tomorrow is your birthday.If she remembers your birthday and celebrates it, that means your birthday is important for her.That is… she loves you.

KABIR:Mom..

SUMAN:Don't worry.Everything will be fine.

The next morning….

Kabir comes out of his room.

Asha walks towards him saying “Happy birthday Kabir…”

He smiles.He thinks of his mother ’s words that if Asha remembers his birthday that means she loves him.

KABIR:I just can’t control my happiness Asha.You remember my birthday…you always forget my birthday.But this time you remember my birthday.

Asha:Yes…In college I really felt bad for forgetting your birthday always.So I marked today’s date in my calendar in advance.I did’nt want to forget it this time.

KABIR:Why you did’nt want to forget my birthday this year?Because you love me.Right?

Asha is stunned:Kabir!What did you say?

KABIR:Asha…I was sure that if you remember my birthday that means you love me.I was so tensed about it.But today I am so happy Asha.You remembered my birthday to make me happy.That shows you value my happiness.Because you love me.

Asha is shocked.

Asha remembers Kabir giving her rose and asking her if she gets jealous when girls give him roses.

She asks in her mind:Is Kabir in love with me?

KABIR:Do you know Asha…?Since college days I have been trying to propose to you.But I could never propose to you.No girl gave me roses Asha.Those roses were brought for you only.But I was scared whether you will reject them if you come to know my real feelings for you.But since I know that you also love me now I can tell you with courage that I love you.

Asha is shocked.

Asha thinks:Kabir has been loving me since college days? That is why he accepted Arush.That is why he tried to save my reputation by making the world believe that I am his wife and Arush is his son.

Asha feels upset.

Asha remembers her past.

Flash back...

Kabir saw Asha walking alone on the road like a mad woman.It was a hopeless sight. He confronts her.

Kabir:Asha!

Asha:Kabir!You are back to Mumbai?

Kabir:No,I came here on a business tour.Now I am returning to my home town.But leave it.What is this Asha?Why are you in this condition?

She cries:I’m suffering because of the sin I did.

She tells him everything.Kabir is shocked.

Kabir:Asha,i can't leave you alone.You come with me.

She cries:No.I can't.I don't want to be a burden for you.

Kabir:You are my best friend.You will never be a burden for me.I will not leave you and go.If I go,you will be with me.

Asha:Kabir...

He holds her hand:Come with me Asha.

Asha:No..I can't...

Kabir:You are still the same stubborn girl who used to be in college.I am also the same stubborn Kabir.I will not leave you like that.

He grabs her hand and takes her inside his car forcefully.

Asha:Kabir...what kind of behaviour is this?

Kabir:Close your mouth and sit.Understand?

Asha is irritated:Oh!

Kabir smirks and starts driving the car.

Kabir takes her to his house.

Kabir:Asha...consider this as your own home.You will be happy here.I promise.

Asha becomes emotional.

Kabir introduces Asha to his mother Suman and Suman also welcomes Asha wholeheartedly.

Suman:You were always special to my son Kabir.Every day he talks about you.Through him I also started loving you unknowingly.I am happy that I got a daughter now.This is your home Asha.

Asha looks at her emotionally.

In Kabir's house...

Asha vomits.Kabir and Suman sees it.

Suman:Asha...are you ok?

She weeps:I am pregnant.

They are shocked.

Asha:I knew it before.But before I could surprise Shlok we got separated.My child will be fatherless.He will be ridiculed by the society.

She cries.

Kabir:No Asha.Your child will not face any insult.I will give my name to him.In public he will be known as my son.

Asha is stunned:Kabir...

Kabir:Don't oppose my decision.

Suman:Yes...Kabir said right.I'm proud of my Kabir beta now.

Asha weeps:Thank you so much Kabir.

Kabir smiles:No need of thanking me Asha.I am doing this for my best friend.

Asha looks at him emotionally.

Present...

Her mind says:When Shlok and my own family ditched me, only Kabir was there for me.If he was'nt there,I would not have had a safe life.My son would not have had an identity if he was'nt accepted by Kabir.So I should not break his heart.But I can’t accept him as my life partner.But if I tell him that he will be shattered.What will I do?Anyways I should not break his heart on his birthday.

She controls her tears.

Suddenly Kabir notices her serious face.

KABIR:What happened Asha? Are you not happy?

Asha:Why are you asking like that?

Kabir:Simply.So you are happy.Right?

Asha tries to change the topic.

Asha:Kabir…I have to do arrangements for the party.

Kabir:Asha…

Asha:What Kabir?

Kabir goes and brings a saree for her.

Kabir:I wish you wear this saree for the evening party.

Asha:Sure Kabir.

He smiles.

In the evening Kabir goes to Asha’s room.

He sees her wearing ornaments.He keeps looking at her beauty in the saree he gifted her.

She turns back and gets surprised to see Kabir.

Asha:Kabir!

Kabir:Asha…you look very beautiful in this saree.My selection was right.

She smiles.

Kabir's birthday celebration ...

Asha brings a cake.Kabir smiles seeing her bringing cake for him.

Suman :Kabir…you are lucky…Asha baked this cake specially for you.

Kabir looks at Asha happily.She smiles slightly.

KABIR:Yummy!

Kabir cuts the birthday cake and gives a piece of cake to Suman and Arush.

Then he turns his face towards Asha.He feeds her cake with his hand.

Asha feeds him back.

The Music is going on.

Arush:Kabir uncle and mumma..dance...

Asha:No..no..

KABIR:You love dancing.Right?In college we used to dance together for all functions.Then why are you not dancing with me now?

Asha has no answer.

Slowly Kabir holds her hands and dances.Asha can't refuse it in front of others.Kabir is deeply involved in the dance while Asha tries to cover up her discomfort.

Aap ki nazron ne samjha
Pyaar ki qaabil mujhe
Dil ki ayye dhadkan theher jaa
Milgayi manzil mujhe
Aap ki nazron ne samjhaa

Jee humein manzoor hai
Aap ka yeh faisla
Jee humein manzoor hai
Aap ka yeh faisla

Keh rahi hai
Har nazar banda parvar shukriya
Do jahaan ki aaj khushiyaan
Ho gayi haasil mujhe

Aap ki nazron ne samjhaa
Aap ki manzil hoon main
Meri manzil aap hain
Aap ki manzil hoon main
Meri manzil aap hain

Kyun main toofaan se daroon
Mera saahil aap hain
Koyi toofaanon se keh de
Mil gaya saahil mujhe

Aap ki nazron ne samjha
Pyaar ke qaabil mujhe
Aap ki nazron ne samjha

(Hindi Singles-Sung by Sanam Puri).

Omkara and Gauri reach their house.They are shocked to see Kabir and Asha dancing together.

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Kabir supported Asha when she was in need, but that doesn't always translate into love.

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