Ye Jawaani Hai Deewani: ManAn,MayRa,RagLak,AvNeil SS - Page 4

Surprising and Beautiful Update

Maya will get married soon if Rudra doesn't speak up.

Sad story of Neil 😭 was this ff originally written for GoHem instead of AvNeil?

Why can't Rudra just tell Maya that he loves her?

RagLak falling scene and dance was romantic

Hey, do u know why Jennifer and Karan broke up in real life?

Hahah Navya and Cabir is so funny

Wondering what the funny truth is

I miss KYY reading ur MaNan ffs which were unexpected as u refused to me earlier but u surprised me by writing on this couple again and again 😊

Waiting for next

Thanks a lot.Yes,Gohem played Avneil's roles in the original version.

What i read is Karan left Jennifer for Bipasha.

Did u ask me to write a manan ff before?I remember asking u to convert ur manan mehbeer ff on Zaya.

I converted this SS as my wattpad friend asked me to write a manan ff on the movie Ye jawani hai deewani

Originally posted by: salley145

Sad story of Neil 😭 was this ff originally written for GoHem instead of AvNeil?

Why can't Rudra just tell Maya that he loves her?

RagLak falling scene and dance was romantic

Hey, do u know why Jennifer and Karan broke up in real life?

Hahah Navya and Cabir is so funny

Wondering what the funny truth is

I miss KYY reading ur MaNan ffs which were unexpected as u refused to me earlier but u surprised me by writing on this couple again and again 😊

Waiting for next

Part 7

Manik:Ragini used to be a big flirt.But now she is not.She flirts only with one person now.
Nandini:What?

Flash back....

On the last day of college...

While all were parting...Laksh went near her.
L:Ragini...I want to tell you something.
Ragini:What?
L:As usual I am telling you to stop flirting with other guys and flirt only with me.
Ragini:Why?
L:Because I enjoy you flirting with me.
Ragini smiled:Why you like me flirting with you?
L:Because I love you.
She smiled happily.
But she pretended to be serious.
Ragini:I will think about it.You go.
Laksh became dull:Ok...bye Ragini.

Sadly Laksh tried to go.Suddenly Ragini held his hand:How dare you try to go just because I asked you to go?
Laksh was confused:Ragini..
Ragini smiled:Will you permit me to flirt with you till the end of my life?Because I am bored of flirting with other guys and I like to flirt only with you.
Laksh was surprised:Ragini..

Ragini:I love you Laksh...
Laksh was excited:You are telling the truth.Right?
Ragini:Yes.I really love you Laksh.

Laksh was so happy that he embraced her.

Present...

Manik:Laksh and Ragini got engaged also.
Nandini was surprised:Laksh and Ragini?I can't believe it.Just because she danced with me it won't be flirting.If that is the case then we both too danced with each other.Were we flirting with each other?
Nandini was embarrassed:I am sorry Manik.
Manik:It's ok.Can i tell you some thing?You really look different now.An unexpected make over.
Nandini:With time it happened gradually.
Manik:That time also you were very beautiful.Now also you look very beautiful .
Nandini blushed:But those days only you admired my look.
Manik:Because I am intelligent enough to see your beauty.
They both giggled.
Manik:I am surprised about your look.
Nandini:But I am not surprised about your look as I see you every now and then on TV.You are a famous singer now.All are your fans including me.

Manik:I am happy that you are my fan.Among all my fans you are my favourite.

She blushed.
Manik:Shall we go out tomorrow..just for fun.
Nandini:Why not?
He smiled.

Neil brought Avni near the swimming pool.

Avni was surprised to see lit candles there.

Avni:So beautiful.

Neil:I thought we will have a special evening today.That’s why I decorated it.

Avni smiled:So romantic.

Neil pulled Avni closer:Am I that romantic?

Avni became shy.

Neil:Can I get more romantic ?

Avni was shy:Neil...no please…

Neil laughed.

AVNI:Why are you laughing?

Neil:I meant a romantic dance.But guess you misunderstood me.

Avni was embarrassed:I thought…

Neil smiled naughtily:What did you think?

Avni became shy.

Neil:I know what you thought.But I will do it later.Now you will have a romantic dance with me?

Avni blushed nodding her head.

Neil held her hand and started dancing romantically …

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usse tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima
Jo tere ishq mein behka pehle se hi
Kya usse behkana o zaalima, o zaalima (x2)

Aankhen marhaba, baatein marhaba
Main sau martaba deewana hua
Mera na raha jab se dil mera
Tere husn ka nishana hua

Jiski har dhadkan tu ho aise
Dil ko kya dhadkana
O zaalima o zalima

They were so engrossed in dance that they did’nt realize that they were stepping towards the pool.

Both fell into the swimming pool.

Avni:Ah…

Neil:Avni..chill…don’t scream.

AVNI:Neil..we fell into the swimming pool.I am scared.

Neil:Why should you be scared?This is only a small swimming pool..not an ocean.And I am there with you.Why are you getting scared?

Avni smiled at him.

They shared a romantic passionate eye lock.

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usse tadpana o zaalima, o zalima

He caressed her softly.

She closed her eyes.

Saanson mein teri nazdeekiyon ka
Ittr tu ghol de.. ghol de

He moved towards her pinky cheeks with her lips.

Main hi kyun ishq zahir karun
Tu bhi kManik bol de.. bol de (x2)

Avni moved her face from him blushing.

Leke jaan hi jaayega meri
Kaatil har tera bahaana hua

She splashed water at him.

They both giggle.

Tujhse hi shuru tujhpe hi khatam
Mere pyaar ka fasaana hua

Neil:You can’t defeat me.

He pulled her closer into a passionate embrace in the pool.

Tu shama hai toh yaad rakhna
Main bhi hoon parwana
O zaalima o zalima(Raees).

Manik and Nandini went out.Nandini saw kulfi in the shop and got excited.
Nandini:Wow kulfi..
Manik:You are a doctor.Still want to eat cold things?
Nandini:Why not?Once in a while we can have cold sweet.And life is to enjoy.Right?
Manik smiled:I am happy that unlike before you started enjoying life.
Nandini smiled:From you only I learnt to enjoy life.
He smiled.

They shared a cute eye lock.

Ooh.. Aah..
Ooh.. Aah..

Shaame Malang Si
Raate Surang Si
Baaghi Udaan Pe Hi Na Jaane Kyun
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye

They bought kulfi and ate together.

Da Da Dan Dan Dung Dung Dang...

Kal Pe Sawaal Hai Jeena Filhaal Hai
Khaanabadoshiyon Pe Hi Jaane Kyun
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye
Brrrooom...

Manik:Shall we go boating?
Nandini:Wow...fine.We will go.
They went boating.
Manik Nandini sat close to each other.Nandini blushed secretly.
Nandini:Nature is so beautiful Manik.We are surrounded by water and beautiful plants and flowers.

Manik:You are right.Nature is beautiful.looking at the beauty of the nature and boating with you is amazing.Because I like spending time with you.
Nandini became very happy.

Da da dan dan dung dung dang...

Mera Falsafaa Kandhe Pe Mera Basta
Chala Main Jahaan Le Chala Mujhe Rasta
Boondon Pe Nahin
Boondon Ke samandar Pe Woh Oo Woh ...


Manik got out of boat and extended the hand.She held his hand and he pulled her out of the boat.

Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye Ho...
Ho.. Na Na Na....

She fell on his chest when he pulled her.She felt shy being on his chest and slowly looked at his eyes.They shared a romantic eye lock.

Shaamein Malang Si
Raatein Surang Si
Baaghi Udaan Pe Hi Na Jaane Kyun
Ilahi Mera jee Aaye Aaye
Ilahi Mera Jee Aaye Aaye

O... Woh..
O... Woh..

Ilahii.. Ilahi.. Ilahi..! - yeh-jawaani-hai-deewani

They broke the eye lock and walked.
Manik:How is everyone at home?
Nandini:Maa is very happy that i fulfilled her dream by becoming a doctor.As you know Navya is married to Cabir Sir.
Manik:Why did'nt you get married?You are older than Navya.
Nandini:Everybody asks me this question and I am fed up of answering this question to all.Actually while settling my career I did'nt get time to get married.And when are you getting married?
Manik:Not decided yet.Waiting to meet my girl.
Nandini smiled.
Nandini:How is everyone at your home?
Manik:All are fine.There is a new member also in our family.Neil Bhai and Avni Bhabhi have a daughter.My best buddy is my niece now.Meera.
Nandini smiled:That's so sweet.You addressed your brother bhai now.I am surprised.
Manik:Like you wished I patched up with Neil bhai.
Nandini was very happy:Really?
Manik:Ya.Actually I had misunderstood Neil bhai.
He told her the truth.Nandini was shocked.
Nandini:Anyways good that everything is clear now.
Manik:Ya right.

After some time they went back to Maya's guest house where they stay.
Nandini blushed thinking of her outing with Manik.
Suddenly Nandini became dull.
Nandini:This is one sided love.Manik has no feelings for me.I have to control myself by keeping away from Manik.

Navya got ready for Maya's haldi function.
Cabir was lost in her beauty.
Cabir:Wow...if you glow like this you need not have to apply haldi on your face.
Navya smiled.
Navya:But Cabir..it's Maya who is going to apply haldi.Not me.
Suddenly Cabir pulled her closer:But seeing how beautifully you dressed I felt it was our haldi function.
Navya:Cabir...
Cabir:Wish those days had come back.If those days come back I will never avoid you Navya.I regret ignoring you and wasting time when you were after me.
Navya smiled:Then what would you do?
Cabir:Many times you secretly you even tried to touch me..hug me like a bold girl.But I pushed you.But if those days come back when you try to hug me I will...
Navya:You will..?

Cabir held her closer:I will hug you back like this.
Navya blushes.
Cabir:I love you Navya.
Navya:I love you Cabir.
They got melted in each other's embrace.

They broke the embrace.
Navya:Let us go for Maya's haldi function.
Cabir:Ok.

Haldi function was going on.Since Armaan is from a far place he too had haldi in Maya's house.

Maya was sitting in her room.Suddenly Rudra entered the room with a cup of haldi.
Maya was surprised:Rudra!
Rudra started applying haldi on her .First he applied on her cheek...

Ang Laga De Re
Mohey Rang Lagaa Dey Rey

Then put it on her shoulder.She leaned towards the wall closing her eyes feeling shy to face him.

Ang Laga De Re
Mohey Rang Lagaa Dey Rey

She lay on the bed.He put haldi on her back passionately.She was lost in him.


Then he moved to her feet making her feel ticklish.

Main Toh Teri Joganiyaa
Tu Jog Lagaa Dey Rey

She put haldi on his face.

Jog Lagaa De Re
Prem Ka Rog Lagaa De Re

They shared an intense eye lock.

Ram Ratan Dhan
Lagan Magan Man

They both moved to each other's face with burning passion.

Tan Moraa Chandan Rey
Ujli Kori Preet Pyaasat



Rudra moved more and more closer to her.

Rang Lagaa Dey Rey




They rubbed each others nose romantically.

Ang Laga De Re
Mohey Rang Lagaa Dey Rey

They got lost in a passionate embrace.

Main Toh Teri Joganiyaa
Tu Jog Lagaa Dey Rey - goliyon-ki-raasleela-ram-leela

Suddenly she realized that it was only a dream and became upset.Jhanvi came:Maya..come for the haldi ceremony.
M:Yes Maa.

Maya went to the haldi ceremony hall.


Seeing her in yellow attire Rudra was lost in her beauty.
He thought:Why i failed to see your beauty before Maya?

All put haldi on Maya and Armaan separately.

Laksh moved closer to Ragini romantically.
Laksh:Very soon we will also have a romantic haldi.
She blushed.


Cabir put a drop of haldi on Navya's nose.
Navya:Cabir..you are very naughty.Years back I was naughty and you were calm.But now you are naughtier than me.
Cabir:We have taken role reversal Navya.When you became an ideal calm soft daughter in law I had to take up the role of the naughty spouse.
She laughed.
Cabir pulled her closer.Navya encircled her arms around Cabir's neck.They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

Suddenly Navya pushed him kicking his shoulder.
Cabir:Navya..what did you do?
Navya:You tried to be naughtier than me?This is the punishment for that.You can't beat me in naughtiness Cabir.
He smiled.Navya went out laughing.

Armaan got a phone call.
He went to another room and talked:Don't come inside.If others see you here it will be a problem..I will come out.
He went out.Navya who passed by over heard it accidently.She hid behind the curtain.
She thought:Why Armaan is looking tensed?Who has come to meet him?
Navya too went out to see what Armaan is upto.
A beautiful girl was standing there.
She:Armaan!
She embraced Armaan.Navya was shocked.

Mistake

Suddenly Nandini became dull.
Nandini:This is one Cabired love.Manik has no feelings for me.I have to control myself by keeping away from Manik.

(This is one sided love and not one Cabired love)

Cabir held her closer:I will hug you back like this.
Navya blushes.
Cabir:I love you Navya.
Navya:I love you Cabir.
They got melted in each other's embrace.

This is Navya's pic with baby bump, she was pregnant in the show, you should've cropped it

Sid played Cabir in the original version.So when I replaced Sid with Cabir sided became cabired.Ha ha.Thx 4 telling me.I edited it.

Regarding the Navya-Cabir pic since its a small pic the baby bump wasnt visible to me.Now when u told me only I understood it.

Originally posted by: salley145

Mistake

Suddenly Nandini became dull.
Nandini:This is one Cabired love.Manik has no feelings for me.I have to control myself by keeping away from Manik.

(This is one sided love and not one Cabired love)

terrific update... well written

MaNan falling scene was so cute

Now RagLak engaged and their proposal was so sweet

Maya imagining Rudra putting haldi on him was romantic

From this scene I m reminded of the season 1 scene when Arjun applied haldi to Maya, same song and same haldi sequence 😂

AvNeil scene was cute

What about that pics u put?

I thought its a night scene

If it is so, u should've edited the pic and changed the color