~Mar Jaaniya~ A Musical Romantic MishBir OS - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhi19

beautifully written... i specially liked the way u described the colors and mishbir relation...


Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it <3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tumhiho

I loved it as per usual

You just have a way of writing which takes the reader on a whole journey! And also have to say you’re a versatile writer, each story has had its own charm and freshness in it.

This one is beyond beautiful ❤️ The way you incorporated the colors and described it with their love haaayeee. Seriously a beautiful and colorful write-up, I thoroughly enjoyed it💕🥰

Thank you for writing in such a way that we feel that it is Mishti and Abir. You’ve made them come alive 🎈🥳

You understand both of their characters so well that it’s truly commendable. 😳



Thank you so very much for always reading and leaving such encouraging comments for me <3 I have always obsessed over the idea of Mishti being in Abir's shirt and them painting together <3 <3 When I started writing, the idea of using color to define their relationship suddenly striked <3 I will be honest I wasnt sure if I would be pull through this story but I am just very glad with the response.


Thank you once again for always being such an avid reader!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey Shonaaaa,


Abir's description was super HOT 🔥🔥🙈🙈

The colors and significance of their love story very nicely written.

Loved it. Keep em coming


Love n hugs

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Hey Shonaaaa,


Abir's description was super HOT 🔥🔥🙈🙈

The colors and significance of their love story very nicely written.

Loved it. Keep em coming


Love n hugs


Heyyaa di!!!! <3 <3


Hahah!! I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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❤️🤗🤩😍🔥🔥🔥🔥 couldn't help find words....the significance of colors in the life of #MishBir was described so awesomely dear....as usual🙏

The perfect harmony in their thoughts n relationship with all the hurdles thruout is too relatable n endearing to read...thanxs again for newer perspective on their own the thoughts which we really want to see onscreen

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnkitaPritu

❤️🤗🤩😍🔥🔥🔥🔥 couldn't help find words....the significance of colors in the life of #MishBir was described so awesomely dear....as usual🙏

The perfect harmony in their thoughts n relationship with all the hurdles thruout is too relatable n endearing to read...thanxs again for newer perspective on their own the thoughts which we really want to see onscreen


Awww!! Thanks Ankita for your lovely comment <3 <3 I always wanted a coloring session for MishBir and I guess I finally managed to pen it down. Glad to know that you liked it!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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First of all i don't know how come i missed this one. Really really sorry. See it's the lockdown effect.😆


Again beautifully written. I don't know what to say..I just loved reading it. Must say you understand MishBir's characters so well.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jayu_Bangalore

First of all i don't know how come i missed this one. Really really sorry. See it's the lockdown effect.😆


Again beautifully written. I don't know what to say..I just loved reading it. Must say you understand MishBir's characters so well.


Hahah!! Please dont worry and apologize. It happens <3 But I am glad to know you got a chance to read.


And thank you so much for your compliment. I am glad to know that you feel that way.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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OMG ...How did I miss this ???


Awwww.....Damn damn damn good & Amazingly written piece that glides like an pleasant music . Probably its one of the best shot I have read recently .👏


Looking forward to your writing 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: riya27

OMG ...How did I miss this ???


Awwww.....Damn damn damn good & Amazingly written piece that glides like an pleasant music . Probably its one of the best shot I have read recently .👏


Looking forward to your writing 🤗


Thank you so much for the compliment. I have one ongoing story: Bygones that I am currently writing.


And if you are interested in reading any of my previous works, I can definitely share the links with you.


Let me know. Thank you once again

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