IPKKND Bitter sweet 2: An acquired taste C11 p28 23rd May ! - Page 21

The kids were hoping for more. The formality still remains between Khushi and Arnav.

Thank you for the update. Aditi and Aarav were excited and happy to be in their mansion again . Aarav got an opportunity to talk to his father so he mentioned to him that he was diabetic

Both Aditi and Aarav want their family to be together as before they were trying very hard they tried to play games as before so that their mom stays aback at RM. Kushi even though sat the dining table to eat pizza she remained aloof and formal at the dining table. Arnav followed her to the kitchen to ask her to stay but she didn’t budge .she asked Arnav to tell Mohan to drop her at Aman’s house.

Arnav has to understand this time kushi is not going to forgive him easily.

Originally posted by: abivicky86

Thank you for the update. Aditi and Aarav were excited and happy to be in their mansion again . Aarav got an opportunity to talk to his father so he mentioned to him that he was diabetic

Thanks- in all this I actually really the little snippets around Aarav and aditi.

Even the moment Aarav finds out about his diabetes and the way khushi consoles him and now as he shares his news with his father.

Both Aditi and Aarav want their family to be together as before they were trying very hard they tried to play games as before so that their mom stays aback at RM. Kushi even though sat the dining table to eat pizza she remained aloof and formal at the dining table. Arnav followed her to the kitchen to ask her to stay but she didn’t budge .she asked Arnav to tell Mohan to drop her at Aman’s house.

I think you have to guard your own heart and it’s human instinct to want to keep it away from what hurts.

Arnav has to understand this time kushi is not going to forgive him easily.

Even I don’t know what it will take to unlock the heart right now for her ..

Originally posted by: ManKiBaath

Aarav and Aditi have to up their game to get Khushi to move in with Arnav so they can all stay together as one happy family. Nevertheless liked their attempts in throwing hints at their mom as to what she is and could be missing by staying away.

although khushi thinks they are broken if you zoom out and stand where we are they’re quiet resolute. Khushi still holds her stand for her husband when required and for children when she needs to same for Arnav.

Arnav on his part is also trying hard and has shed his stubbornness when it comes to Khushi. I just wish for Khushi to also see forgive and forget at the same time making sure she gets the respect she deserves.

let’s see hope you’ll like what is to come

Hope you’re well, stay safe.

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/5164345/ipkknd-os-returning-raizada-28th-may-new

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Hi Jagruti,

I joined India Forums again after so many years just to visit and check on what I missed in the last so many years. This lockdown period gave me the necessary break to catch up on many things that I missed doing like reading especially ippknd fan fictions. It was my favorite past time in this lockdown period to read my favorite fictions again and that's how I came across Bittersweet Season 2. I have read most of your earlier fan fictions like Lessons in love, Bittersweet Season 1, Misconstrued, Colors of Compulsion, etc. and also commented in detail on most of them under my previous username which unfortunately I cant use now. Its my first post under new username and probably the last one also because as the nation has started to get unlocked I don't know whether I will come back again or not.

I was happy to see Bittersweet Season 2 and really interested to know what is going on in the lives of raizada's. I liked few things here and there but overall I was disappointed to see that nothing major has changed in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. Arnav is still dominating and Khushi is still that submissive ideal wife which I am fed up with now seeing in most your stories. I was really angry to see Arnav still behaving like a jerk and Khushi putting up with his crap. Her passive ways of resisting or protesting doesn't affect Arnav much and every time Arnav wins and Khushi keeps her pride aside and make peace with his nonsense and everything becomes normal like nothing happened!

In season 1 also Khushi put up with most of Arnav's crap behavior and ruthlessness but Arnav easily got away with his wrong doings without having any remorse or repentance in the end! Neither Arnav realized Khushi's worth on his own if its wasn't due to Sheetal's remark and Khushi's pregnancy! I want to see how this story will end but I don't expect it to be different than the past because I know this time too Arnav will not have to do much to melt Khushi's anger and soon things will be normal. AND I JUST HATE IT!

I also checked your latest fictions and I felt sad because in the last few years nothing significant has changed in your writing style and you still write the same way , same characters with same characterization. I was surprised to see your Arnav is still a dominating Alpha while Khushi is still submissive, shy, traditional type! Its really disappointing Jagruti! Because there is no growth in you and you are simply repeating the same things! Its 2020 and I feel surprised to see how can this characters be even relevant in today's time specially Khushi when even the original show IPKKND had bolder, stronger and smarter Khushi and sensitive, emotional Arnav as compared to yours? Even the Desi village girls are much bolder nowadays when it comes to life and relationships!

I also read your past stories again which I had liked when I read them for the first time. But my opinion has changed and I don't feel the same now and I think so many things were wrong with them and I wish I could change it given a chance! Like I would have loved to see Khushi leaving ASR In Lessons in love, providence and maid mistress and Mrs. and probably in bittersweet too! Its sad to see a submissive, shy and meek Khushi every time who is always POLITE AND VERY WIFELY, (always saying Ji... Ji...) who is ALWAYS A VIRGIN, sexually shy and always needs a man called ASR to transform her from a girl into a woman, a traditional Khushi who is supposed to be the ONE who sacrifice her own joy and self respect for pleasing Arnav's EGO, a confused Khushi who ALWAYS NEEDS ARNAV to become a confident and successful person in life, a simple Khushi who always needs ARNAV'S PERMISSION to do anything in her life and make her own decisions! Its really frustrating because I strongly feel its outdated now and we need to change for better with time! I don't have nay intention to bash you, its just that we grow with time and our perspectives, views changes everything! I did not want to comment earlier and to stop reading what you don't like is always the best option but as I had been your admirer since a long time and loved your stories I couldn't help but comment and express what I felt! I still love your stories but I just feel you are stuck in the same cycle where nothing is growing ...neither your characters nor you as a writer!

Originally posted by: aditiraher77

Hi Jagruti,

I joined India Forums again after so many years just to visit and check on what I missed in the last so many years. This lockdown period gave me the necessary break to catch up on many things that I missed doing like reading especially ippknd fan fictions. It was my favorite past time in this lockdown period to read my favorite fictions again and that's how I came across Bittersweet Season 2. I have read most of your earlier fan fictions like Lessons in love, Bittersweet Season 1, Misconstrued, Colors of Compulsion, etc. and also commented in detail on most of them under my previous username which unfortunately I cant use now. Its my first post under new username and probably the last one also because as the nation has started to get unlocked I don't know whether I will come back again or not.

I was happy to see Bittersweet Season 2 and really interested to know what is going on in the lives of raizada's. I liked few things here and there but overall I was disappointed to see that nothing major has changed in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. Arnav is still dominating and Khushi is still that submissive ideal wife which I am fed up with now seeing in most your stories. I was really angry to see Arnav still behaving like a jerk and Khushi putting up with his crap. Her passive ways of resisting or protesting doesn't affect Arnav much and every time Arnav wins and Khushi keeps her pride aside and make peace with his nonsense and everything becomes normal like nothing happened!

In season 1 also Khushi put up with most of Arnav's crap behavior and ruthlessness but Arnav easily got away with his wrong doings without having any remorse or repentance in the end! Neither Arnav realized Khushi's worth on his own if its wasn't due to Sheetal's remark and Khushi's pregnancy! I want to see how this story will end but I don't expect it to be different than the past because I know this time too Arnav will not have to do much to melt Khushi's anger and soon things will be normal. AND I JUST HATE IT!

I also checked your latest fictions and I felt sad because in the last few years nothing significant has changed in your writing style and you still write the same way , same characters with same characterization. I was surprised to see your Arnav is still a dominating Alpha while Khushi is still submissive, shy, traditional type! Its really disappointing Jagruti! Because there is no growth in you and you are simply repeating the same things! Its 2020 and I feel surprised to see how can this characters be even relevant in today's time specially Khushi when even the original show IPKKND had bolder, stronger and smarter Khushi and sensitive, emotional Arnav as compared to yours? Even the Desi village girls are much bolder nowadays when it comes to life and relationships!

I also read your past stories again which I had liked when I read them for the first time. But my opinion has changed and I don't feel the same now and I think so many things were wrong with them and I wish I could change it given a chance! Like I would have loved to see Khushi leaving ASR In Lessons in love, providence and maid mistress and Mrs. and probably in bittersweet too! Its sad to see a submissive, shy and meek Khushi every time who is always POLITE AND VERY WIFELY, (always saying Ji... Ji...) who is ALWAYS A VIRGIN, sexually shy and always needs a man called ASR to transform her from a girl into a woman, a traditional Khushi who is supposed to be the ONE who sacrifice her own joy and self respect for pleasing Arnav's EGO, a confused Khushi who ALWAYS NEEDS ARNAV to become a confident and successful person in life, a simple Khushi who always needs ARNAV'S PERMISSION to do anything in her life and make her own decisions! Its really frustrating because I strongly feel its outdated now and we need to change for better with time! I don't have nay intention to bash you, its just that we grow with time and our perspectives, views changes everything! I did not want to comment earlier and to stop reading what you don't like is always the best option but as I had been your admirer since a long time and loved your stories I couldn't help but comment and express what I felt! I still love your stories but I just feel you are stuck in the same cycle where nothing is growing ...neither your characters nor you as a writer!

Thank you for re-visiting my stories. Of course I remember you too :) nice to see you again.

I’m sorry to hear you expected more . There’s some wonderful writers on i.f and beyond that do a far greater job than I do so Im sure you’ll find many stories far better than what I have written.
You mentioned you once liked my stories I’m glad to have been the writer at that time. Even if you now see them in a different light.

My focus has been my life over the last few years as one would expect similar to yourself so I’ve never taken writing too seriously.

I do however respect and admire the numerous readers over the years who still wish to read and for them I continue to write. (Very little now and this is probably the very last for these characters.) My stories are not out to change the world.

Each of them talks about something intricate if you read deep enough and I admit they all have the cliche stereotypes..but all of them also have something special about them too.

I’m not a professional author if I was all your comments towards my writing would be justified.

At last something led you to revisit my stories so I’ll take that as the silver lining and be happy with that.

Hope you are well - stay safe happy and healthy during these unprecedented times

Their relationship was always abrupt, now it has become more detached. It will take time to heal if they try very hard .. At this moment Khushi is not trying and it was her who was making this relationship work .. Let’s see If ASR try this but if you won’t mind me saying your ASR in every story is chauvinist pig.

Originally posted by: ranogill

Their relationship was always abrupt, now it has become more detached. It will take time to heal if they try very hard .. At this moment Khushi is not trying and it was her who was making this relationship work .. Let’s see If ASR try this but if you won’t mind me saying your ASR in every story is chauvinist pig.

Thanks - it is certainly one from Khushi and a totally different way from Arnav.

Last few chapters and that will be it from this and any other other ff from me.

I hope you’ll like the close to this, keep well and stay safe.

"Their relationship was always abrupt, now it has become more detached. It will take time to heal if they try very hard .. At this moment Khushi is not trying and it was her who was making this relationship work .. Let’s see If ASR try this but if you won’t mind me saying your ASR in every story is chauvinist pig."

I couldn't have said this in better words like you did! 😊