FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 2020 Chapter 42 Part1 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Jahnu you want long answer or short one?😉

Long: Next update please.

Short: Loved it. Period!❤️

Long: 🤬🤬🤬🤬

Short: 😡

🤣Go.. Adi is waiting

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Jahnu di🤗🤗 absolutely loveeed it❤️❤️ that stupid grin during HBAS days is back on my face .

>> Hello Cookie... PM me your name if you have no objections.

Finally Jalal's birthday was celebrated !! And it's sure is his best birthday .. .yet😆I have no words to explain how happy I am seeing them together that MARRY ME ufff...didn't expect it at all☺️...how beautiful the confession,the assurance ,the promise was ❤️ without saying much...Jodha's plight and all those negative vibes ,her fearing to even receive the call was very painful to read... Those what ifs..if Gautam and her parents were alive...things that she missed and will never get to see😭

>> Yes... quite an emotional part it was... took a long time to get it right!

Jalal is worried what will be her reaction if she finds out someone is after her life...He wanted to clear that but stopped...hope it gets clear soon this 🤬 is messing with their behavior and relationship...his confession that he wants her right over him more than she does and that rose and thorn analogy

>> I think I'm too much obsessed with roses and thorns since the time I wrote a short story with that title. It keeps popping up someway or the other.

Prithvi seems to have gotten a very strong lead...did he read that boy's name Kiran who's marriage proposal was brought by Jo's father's friend (sorry forgetting,will read that part😛)

>> you who name it is😆

Once again thankyou for not giving up taking us again on this dreamland...we loved it. Period❤️🤗

Can't believe will get next update in couple of days🥳

>> 😆

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Yeah 2 days... my 2 days anyway... 🤣

Beneath the icy depths that stared stoic, beneath the misty layer that sheened bright, beneath the hope the black orbs carried, there flickered flashes of fear – a dread so gut wrenching that her heart hurt as if crushed by a vulture’s claw.

>> Cannot even imagine her state, and to think, her misery only began.. that she yet to start out on analysis on inner demons, coming face to face with them.🥺

Her fantasies.. brought tears to my eyes. Don't we all do that? To visualise, fantasize , all that is never going to happen, but we find comfort in it, so we happily indulge into it.

Visualizing Jalal in them, NOOO! She cannot even go there, cannot even think of him in same line of thought. 🥺

I am as drained of energy as her, parched and clogged throat as her, in this moment.

Somewhere remotely in his heart, he even took pride and credit for rubbing off a piece of him on her.

>>True, but its more so the other way round. Jo has rubbed off her outrageous ways of reaction on Jalal !! Ofcourse, it's only for each other that these opposite-from-their-usual-reactions are seen, because only they can evoke them in each other. They lose rationality when it comes to each other's safety, going insane. ❤️

Well… it’s only fair that if her impulsiveness becomes of him, then his cool collectedness became of her. And boy... what a combination they make! Complementing each other at times when the other one is lacking…

>>EXACTLY.

That last step that she had respected not to cross! That one step, which she’d have easily perambulated and came searching for him and he couldn’t even had held it against her given the circumstance, but she didn’t… respecting his ordain of safety.

>> ❤️ Hellish state she was drowning into, yet she knew she just cannot give Jalal another panic-attack and send him on another insane fear-frenzy praying for her safety, if she was to go out... God! And Jalal witnessed this first-hand. ❤️

“No rose in the world can hold a candle to mine.”

>> ☺️ He loves her in any and every form of hers.

Jo's monologue of her inner-most fears, insecurities...

>>My favourite part of the update.❤️ Painful, throat-clogging, teary. 💔

Cannot imagine how much tough it would have been for you to pen that!!

She has always stuck to her strong outward personality, always with her guard-on, not letting her inner fears/pain to show on face.

And for someone like her, to strip her soul naked.. to the only man she will ever love. WHAT A BEAUTIFUL PAINFUL POIGNANT moment.. ❤️❤️ Finally she feels liberated, after keeping all that buried for so long. I think this is what makes Jalal fall in love with her all the more. Her honesty, her courage, her no-filter feelings. ❤️

Jalal's dealing with her post her emotional outbreak...

>>Jalal, my man Just please stop being so so so charming, amazing, and just being this gentle-man of the highest order. Do you know how lucky Jo is to have you, even if in a fictional world!! In Jo's words, he is the true anchor and support she will ever need. He himself becomes the shield and solution to anything that troubles her. GOD !!!❤️ His assurances, his breath-taking way of reviving his lady back to her glory.. my my !!❤️

And it's not only Jo's longing for belongingness he is dealing with here.. stunning realisation of himself too longing for the same, to belong to Jo, strikes him hard !! GOD !!❤️

“You told me to come home,” he whispered right into her ear. “So did I.”

>> She is his home, He is her safe-haven !! ❤️

“Actually, I want to hear your reasons first and then decide if you deserve an entry into home or not.”

“Sleep with your better half.”

>> 🤣 She is already the best wife ever!!!

“I very much planned to sleep with my best half tonight.”

>>Always the charmer !!☺️

“You like strawberries?”

>> Their straw-berry session!! Bloody-hell. ☺️☺️☺️ Are they going to kill me with their soul-scorching passion or what !!☺️

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thank you....

- Jahnavi

>>Thanks to you didu !! Even divine forces had to intervene & enforce a lockdown on Earth to bring Jahnu-the-devil-author out.😆 Honestly, Thank you will never do justice. But still, THANKS for coming back and continuing it. PBD is your baby, your gift to us... so much of your efforts, ideas, energy, time... have gone into it. ❤️And this masterpiece of yours deserves the proper climax, ending and completion. (though I know we all wish.. it could go on and on forever) LOVE YOU for coming back and re-starting the journey. ❤️🤗 You brought us all back too.❤️

Oh mi gosh......I wasn't intending on becoming active on IF not till I get over with my exams but here I am writing this post after breaking every resolve I've been constraining. When I saw that PBD is really getting an update, at first a wave of relief passed over me like hush...an update finally. Then after sometime I was like, why not read it a lil bit? Then after reading a lil bit then a lil bit more then a lil bit more till the time I finally completed the chapter, I was like to hell with my resolve. I should definitely write a thank you. I know many of you may not be knowing me.....I've been a silent reader after all ( except for HBAS, it was the first ever story to break my silent reader tapasya). Till the time I discovered that JA actually has a forum with lots of awesome stories in it, it was already too late because the forum was on the verge of extinction after five years of JA. Nonetheless, I read all the stories ( NJAPA, HBAS and PBD being my most fav) and I was so stunned that the forum is hiding such rare gems like You and Lashy di behind it's covers. After reading your story I was like, whoa, why on earth would she give up on such a wonderful story whose every chapter seemed to be written and appreciated with lots of love. Anyway, talking about your latest chapter, It took me half an hour read it, fifteen mins to simply read it and fifteen mins to gwak at some epic lines and wonder how could you play with words so perfectly. Most of all, I wonder why are some Jalas even more perfect than I could've ever imagined in my dreams or how come you find such spellbounding dialogues for Jalal as if the lines were not from you but the real better to say surreal Jalal himself. And that kiss moment, gosh, just gotta say that "way to describe a kiss in the best possible way". Cutting short my blabbering, I just wanna thank you for continuing your story.......I really really like really love it❤️

And one more thing made me very delighted, which was to see all the most Beautiful and lovely members of HBAS family gathered once again after Lashy Didi left this forum😭. Oh Kal di, Bindu di, Selvi di, Lavanya di, Kuki di, Nam's di.....you have no idea how much I've loved you all and missed you lovelies. I hope you might be remembering me😆. But still Lashy di, Rose di, Sandy di, Rekha di, patti, Vathsy di are missing.....I hope to catch a glimpse of them, I mean catch a glimpse of their post again.🤗

Off to read. Just now saw that you updated😃

Originally posted by: Jeryl

Stomach did!??! Then “it”must be worshipped by Jalal for making the effort to get connected when he needed the most....hehe...😜

Devil’s incarnation 😜

Finally, the much awaited birthday celebrations and intimate moments between the lovely couple began in the porch😅

I was laughing throughout the part where the discussion regarding Jodha’s “knowledge” sources. 😮 Jahnu you nailed it. Please don’t SPOIL the ‘innocent’ souls like us😝

>>Rose Di... you're more dramatic and naughty than me !!! 🤣🤣

Hehe….Waiting for the “actual birthday celebrations in part 2"

>>🤣☺️

Uff….the first lesson of passion from the Master – how to devour a strawberry 🍓

>>She is already BoB in other matters... inn such passionate matters too she will become MoM (Master of master), after all she has the best teacher ☺️

Jahnu, I can’t control the mirth in the corner of my lips every time I munch a strawberry. Phew….you corrupted our minds so much !!

>> Rose di..🤣

Love

🌹

>>Wow. Loved how you wrote your name.☺️ 😆