FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 2020 Chapter 42 Part1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Jahnu you want long answer or short one?😉

Long: Next update please.

Short: Loved it. Period!❤️

Your hatke style of reviews...missed this ❤️

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thank you....

From the bottom of my heart, I'm deeply grateful to you all for your love for PBD. Three years is a long time to forget, to give up, to move on, to lose interest but you all surprised me time and again with consistent update requests, perseverant waits and constant encouragement.

I should be thanking name by name but my receding memory might forget some and I can't afford offending any one of you. In last three years, I tried and failed few times, to reignite the spark of magic the leads of this story originally caused in me. I almost believed I'm done with Jodha, Jalal and PBD but then something magical happened.

LOCK DOWN!! 🤣

The whole world went under lockdown giving some of my friends a lot of time and with nothing to do on hands they pestered me personally everyday till I reconsidered writing. I then received some very encouraging requests that reminded me of the characters I built, the journey I began. Those requests and poems duly motivated me to think afresh, to start afresh... and so here we are...

Resuming the journey that halted three years ago!

Hope you'll enjoy it as enthusiastically as you did back then... hoping to stay in touch...🤗🤗🤗

- Jahnavi

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

Ufff 😍A superb update of this kind makes us forget the world around us dear :) so the years that we've waited are forgotten. And I'm sure you know from experience that we never abandon our Jalal ❤️ And don't thanks us.. Thanks is all for you for continuing :) and yes some thanks to the lockdown too 😂

Hey Lavs... it feels so good seeing your posts, talking to you after a long time...🤗How are you? How's life? Still in Delhi?

Let's talk fair for a minute here... I ditch you all hundred times with false promises and yet you fervently message your requests and believe that I wouldn't ditch a hundred and oneth time...

so stop thanking me...

Will come back with reply to your comment

Originally posted by: jodhavani94

Di you’re too good too good coming right from my heart hope you understand it. 👍🏼

>> Hi Avani... How are you girl? Of course, I understand firsthand response is always genuine. Glad you found it good 🤗

Loved from pritvi’s thinking, from murderer pov, his guessing reasons part and everything. Love that guy.

>> Yeah... smart cop.. someday we'll make him hero of his own story 😉

Loved Jalal and Jodha s common senses, way thinking, how they see their life and value everyone in it. How she thought putting restrictions on Jalal and thought better of it. Though her fear, insecurities seems rational to me and of course to Jalal. And Jalal s way of handling those things in the form of marry me blew me off. Didn’t expect this coming. It was so natural, real and lovely. 😳☺️🥳

>> Happy that you liked the natural course of conversation... i was skeptical of reader's expectation of a grand/romantic/special proposal

Di love love love this story. I don’t know how much happy it makes me. And I m sure I am not only the one. We are really into this story. And strictly di with this , hope you don’t take offence for saying this, you officially, morally, ethically, politically you lost all the right in the world to make your loyal and lovely readers/fans to wait endlessly for next updates in future. (I hope everyone agrees with me). 😈

>> I too don't want to make you wait... I can only wish and pray though😊 I can't thank enough for you owning this story

Di pls update part 2 in 2 days or risk your fans die of heartache😒. Waiting eagerly for next part. Love you loads and god bless you and your family😊.

>> on it girl... see ya

Originally posted by: akdha98

Amazing jahnu di...The proposal in the simplest way but straight from the heart reaching straight to the heart.... The metaphor using the rose and thorn are even more amazing......The long answer was great.....And the birthday wishes where extra special.... Thank you so much di for this amazing work.. Thank you

Thank you akdha98... Happy to have you in the crew... Looking forward to knowing you more!

Swetiii and mamatha... I'll reply you when you post your reviews... I saw your one liners but I'm sure you're coming back with more🤗

Originally posted by: kruthik

Waw. You have updated. Thank you

Most welcome Kruthi... 🤗

His eyes opened with a jerk, and his fingers skimmed through the file in uninhibited excitement. His scanning glances stopped at the random trivia he scribbled during the initial days of investigation.

Investigation is fine, ACP Prithvi. What about your feelings towards Samyuktha?

Instead, a familiar fatigue seeped into her bones - exactly like the one that crept in right after the accident news twice in her past and the night in Delhi when she found Aliya in Jalal’s arms after all the running she did - leaving her mushy and inanimate.

Jodha’s insecurities and inner fears couldn’t have been described better than this....

“Yes… my stomach did! Um…” She gulped uncomfortably, the scorching throat telling her how parched she was. She paused, clearing it a few times, blessedly ignorant of the consequence her late response had caused. “…since stomachs don’t talk, it didn’t. And who is this someone who should hear you?”

Stomach did!??! Then “it”must be worshipped by Jalal for making the effort to get connected when he needed the most....hehe...😜

Wreathing her free arm around her knees in a hurting clasp, a physical reminder for her to stay sober and not say something she’d repent forever, she waited for Jalal to be done with. But, since he didn’t seem to be done any sooner, she had to interrupt before he blurted something he’d regret forever.

What an understanding attitude portrayed by these two even before they become one!

Returning from work every day by Seven.

No late night parties.

No liquor outside home.

No more than two shots at client parties.

Even then, no self-driving back to home.

Calling her once every three hours during the day to update on where he is, what he…

“What do you want to start me with?”

Jahnu….All married PBDians love you for these suggestions 🥰 Let’s at least dream these….☺️

That last step that she had respected not to cross!

Mutual respect for each other which is a rare entity nowadays🥰

“No rose in the world can hold a candle to mine.”

Perfect verdict!

Jahnu…you really found an “innovative place” to bare Jodha’s heart 💓 to Jalal and Jalal’s proposal. What a master piece! It is indeed a “long answer” – 50 years. I am sure this is a jaw dropping moment for not only Jodha but for us too….

Long answer - Marry me?!

Short answer - “I Love You. Period.”

I am confused with my arithmetic and comprehension skills now thanks to Jahnu.

“Starting when?” She prodded with wiggle of brow and he gladly shrugged.

“I’ll leave that to you.”

“Today?” She wickedly threw the dare and when Jalal didn’t respond soon enough, she jabbed him, not leaving the chance to tease.

“What? Second thoughts already?”

Jahnu…Have you ever thought of the reasons these PBDians wait for nearly 3 years for you to come back patiently?

Because we don’t get to see conversations like this in the middle of a marriage proposal elsewhere 😂. You mesmerise us through your writing style and dialogue delivery👏

“You told me to come home,” he whispered right into her ear. “So did I.”

The best part of the update for me – summarises everything about the couple💐

“Ah… don’t worry. It won’t be that bad.” His palm slithered farther down. “May I offer a sample for you to try so that you make an informed decision?”

Devil’s incarnation 😜

Finally, the much awaited birthday celebrations and intimate moments between the lovely couple began in the porch😅

I was laughing throughout the part where the discussion regarding Jodha’s “knowledge” sources. 😮 Jahnu you nailed it. Please don’t SPOIL the ‘innocent’ souls like us😝

“I very much planned to sleep with my best half tonight.”

Hehe….Waiting for the “actual birthday celebrations in part 2”😜

“Happy Birthday to you...” Her lips warmly pressed against his and sealed the deal for a lifetime. “…and to us!”

So sweet 🥰

Uff….the first lesson of passion from the Master – how to devour a strawberry 🍓 till his amateur student graduated in flying colors.

Jahnu, I can’t control the mirth in the corner of my lips every time I munch a strawberry. Phew….you corrupted our minds so much 😛.

Eagerly waiting for the second part of the chapter and the birthday celebrations 🎊.

I must admit that it was worth the long wait for this emotional plus romantic mix. I loved all the flavours offered via this update.

You are amazing as always, Jahnu 😉.

👀 We need Part 2 of the update immediately.

Love

🌹

What an irony!

Should we now thank the lockdown??
Phew...life and its bundle of surprises both good and bad...

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thank you....

From the bottom of my heart, I'm deeply grateful to you all for your love for PBD. Three years is a long time to forget, to give up, to move on, to lose interest but you all surprised me time and again with consistent update requests, perseverant waits and constant encouragement.

I should be thanking name by name but my receding memory might forget some and I can't afford offending any one of you. In last three years, I tried and failed few times, to reignite the spark of magic the leads of this story originally caused in me. I almost believed I'm done with Jodha, Jalal and PBD but then something magical happened.

LOCK DOWN!! 🤣

The whole world went under lockdown giving some of my friends a lot of time and with nothing to do on hands they pestered me personally everyday till I reconsidered writing. I then received some very encouraging requests that reminded me of the characters I built, the journey I began. Those requests and poems duly motivated me to think afresh, to start afresh... and so here we are...

Resuming the journey that halted three years ago!

Hope you'll enjoy it as enthusiastically as you did back then... hoping to stay in touch...🤗🤗🤗

- Jahnavi

Jahnu di🤗🤗 absolutely loveeed it❤️❤️ that stupid grin during HBAS days is back on my face .

Finally Jalal's birthday was celebrated !! And it's sure is his best birthday .. .yet😆I have no words to explain how happy I am seeing them together that MARRY ME ufff...didn't expect it at all☺️...how beautiful the confession,the assurance ,the promise was ❤️ without saying much...Jodha's plight and all those negative vibes ,her fearing to even receive the call was very painful to read... Those what ifs..if Gautam and her parents were alive...things that she missed and will never get to see😭

Jalal is worried what will be her reaction if she finds out someone is after her life...He wanted to clear that but stopped...hope it gets clear soon this 🤬 is messing with their behavior and relationship...his confession that he wants her right over him more than she does and that rose and thorn analogy

Prithvi seems to have gotten a very strong lead...did he read that boy's name Kiran who's marriage proposal was brought by Jo's father's friend (sorry forgetting,will read that part😛)

Once again thankyou for not giving up taking us again on this dreamland...we loved it. Period❤️🤗

Can't believe will get next update in couple of days🥳