Aashiq...The Lover...RiKara SS- Page 3

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Aashiq..The Lover...Part 4

All the students in the college looked at the poster and laughed.

It was written "Gauri loves Omkara".

Gauri was shattered.Ajay went near her with a smirk:So you rejected me for this guy?

Gauri got angry:This is done by you.Right?

Gauri raised her hand to slap him.Suddenly Ajay held her hand.

Ajay:Before slapping me think well who can write this.

Ajay left her hand.

Ajay:We all longed for you.But you rejected us.But Omkara used an indirect method to make you accept him.Omkara wants you.So he stuck such posters here hoping that you will accept him.

Gauri was shocked.She fumed with anger.Ajay smirked thinking:Now Omkara and Gauri will split up forever.

Gauri waited for Omkara to arrive.Finally Omkara reached the college.

Seeing Gauri,he smiled:Hi Gauri...Good morning.

Gauri glared at him:Bad morning Omkara.

Om:Bad morning?Why?

Gauri grabbed her hand and walked towards the posters.

Gauri:Look at this.

Om read it:Gauri loves Omkara.

Omkara smiled.

Gauri:You feel like laughing?Because you wrote this and stuck them all over the college.Right?

Omkara:No Gauri.I did'nt.Why should I do this?I smiled because I thought that you wrote this as it is your crazy way of confessing your love to me.

Gauri:What?You thought that I am crazy to fall in love with you?What made you think so?

Omkara:Because I love you and I expected you to love me back.

Gauri was shocked.

Gauri:What did you say?

Omkara:I love you Gauri.

Gauri could not believe it as Omkara was always teasing her.

Gauri:But unlike other boys you were only teasing me.

Omkara:Just because I did not praise your beauty you can't believe that I love you?I did'nt praise your beauty but it's not your beauty which won my heart.Then if you ask me what attracted me towards you..to be frank I don't know.I fell for you when I saw you at first sight itself.

Gauri:Oh please ...stop this Omkara.Your so called love is stupid.Love happens only after understanding a person.

Om:Understanding a person...then thinking whether to love that person or not...this is not love,but an agreement.Love should not decided in prior.It should come out naturally.Love should come automatically.

Gauri:Whatever you say,I don't love you.

Om:Till now most of the boys in our college proposed you and you rejected all of them.But I am sure that I will not face rejection from you.

Gauri:Hello..I already rejected you.

Om:But before the college ends you will fall in love and confess your love to me.

Gauri:Never!You will not win this challenge.

Om:Let us see.

Gauri:Let us see.

Omkara pulled Ajay to the Principal's room.

Om:Sir...it's Ajay who wrote rubbish about me and Gauri and stuck such posters on the walls.

Ajay:Nonsense!Why should I do that?

Om:Only you will do that.When I saw the poster itself I was sure that it was done by you.Because only you will do cheap things.Just because Gauri rejected you,you brought your Don brother here to kidnap Gauri and marry her forcefully.Still I gave you a chance.But you don't deserve it.

Ajay started sweating.

Ajay looked at the Principal:Sir,he is lying.

Ajay looked at Om:What proof do you have?

Om:I have proof.

The watch men of the college came inside the room.

One watch man:Ajay threatened us with a knife to let him inside.

Another watch man:Ajay is a goon like his brother Don Kali Thakur.He is very dangerous.

Principal:How can you do such a cheap thing Ajay?This is a college.Not any local street.You are not needed in this college.

Ajay:Sir..please...

Principal:Take the TC and leave.You are dismissed.

Before leaving,Gauri slapped Ajay.

Gauri:My doubt was right.You only created such cheap posters.Shamelessly you tried to put the blame on Omkara.Chee.

Gauri walked away while Ajay left the college in shame.

Gauri collided with Omkara.

Gauri:Sorry Omkara.

Om:It's ok.When we walk fast we will hit others by mistake.

Gauri:Not for that.For scolding you regarding those posters.

Om:I don't need your sorry Gauri.I need only your love.

Omkara smiled.

Gauri:You will never get that from me Omkara.

Omkara wore his sun glasses and said with full confidence:I will get it.

Gauri:You cannot force me.

Om:No Gauri.I am not forcing you.Because we can never get love from anyone forcefully.But I am sure that you will start loving me automatically.Because I love you.

Omkara walked away smiling.

Gauri just ignored it.

Meenamma and Vaiga were preparing dinner together.

Meenamma:You look really different and charming these days.There is a different glow on your face.

Vaiga:Akka...

Meenamma:Tell me what the secret is.Did you fall in love?

Vaiga blushed.

Meenamma:Say.

Vaiga was shy:Yes Akka. I am in love.

Meenamma was surprised:My sister is in love.I can't believe it.You have gown so big Vaiga.He also loves you?

Vaiga:He did not say so.But i feel that he also loves me.

Meenamma:Ok.Be sure about his feeling first.

Vaiga:Ok akka.

A girl was wearing ear phone and walking on the road.She was listening to the music and enjoying it.She did not know that a vehicle was coming behind her.But before the vehicle hit her Omkara pulled her away.They both fell down rolling over each other.Gauri who passed by watched it with a shock.

Gauri:Cheee...Omkara is having open romance with a girl.

Omkara and the girl got up from the floor.

The girl smiled at Omkara smiling.But Om got angry.

Om:How can you be so careless?That vehicle would have hit you.Are you mad to walk carelessly on the road listening to music?

Gauri was relieved:Oh..so Omkara was not romancing her.He is scolding her.Let her get scoldings from Omkara.She deserves it.

She:I am sorry.And thank you very much for saving my life.

Om:No mention.But be careful from next time onwards.

She:Sure.I learnt a good lesson.

Om:Good.

Om walked away.

Gauri also walked away smiling.

The next day....

In the college the same girl came towards Omkara.

She:Hi Omkara.

He looked at her with a surprise:You?You are a student of this college?I did'nt know that.How do you know my name?

She:Who does'nt know a charming guy like you?I have always noticed you.

Om smiled:Oh really?

Gauri who passed by, saw this with a shock.

Gauri:This girl studies here?Guess like the typical film heroine she is attracted towards Omkara who saved her.

Om:What's your sweet name?

She:My name is Dhara.

Om:Cool name.I have not heard such an interesting name.

Dhara:Really?

Gauri got irritated:How dare he say like that?

Om-Dhara were chatting and laughing.

Gauri thought:Dhara looks very beautiful.Like Omkara said will he find his college beauty?Will Om consider Dhara as his college beauty and fall for her?

Raju's eyes fell on Gauri.His face blossomed unknowingly.He blinked his eyes continously.

Gauri who saw this accidentally walked towards him.

Gauri:What?Why are you blinking your eyes at me?

Raju:In this orange dress you look like a glowing Orange.

Gauri:How can an orange glow?

Raju:Anything can happen in imagination.

Gauri:Imagination?Crazy..

Raju:When you are in orange dress you like an Orange and carrot..When you are in pink dress you look beautiful like strawberry milk.

Gauri:Beautiful like Strawberry milk?What a weird comparison!Who looks at the beauty of strawberry milk?

Raju:When you wear red dress you look like an Apple and cherry. When you wear blue you look cute like blue berry.When you wear green dress you look beautiful like fresh grass.

Gauri:Fresh grass?This guy will make me crazy.

Raju:Sometimes you look beautiful like lady finger too.

Gauri:Stop this.Did'nt I warn you not to come near me with your stupidity?

Suddenly Raju remembered getting scolded by Gauri.

He thought:Oh God!Why do I forget everything when I see her beauty?I can see only her good looks..good looks and good looks.

Gauri:If you like fruits and vegetables this much why don't you stay in a grocery shop and eat all the vegetables and fruits over there?Or you marry a grocery shop owner.Why are you coming to me and irritating with your fruits and vegetable dialogues?Don't come before me with your stupid illogical fruits vegetables dialogues.Understand you maddy?

Raju nodded fearfully.

Gauri murmured:Here I am irritated with Omkara Dhara live flirting and this maddy is eating my head.Oh..

Gauri walked away angrily.

Raju:I wonder with what hot product did God make her?She is so hot tempered.If we have to heat something we just have to keep it on her head.Because of her hotness it will get boiled.

Days passed...

Unknowingly Gauri was becoming insecure with Om-Dhara friendship.

Gauri was in the canteen.Dhara came and sat near her.

Dhara:Hi Gauri..I am Dhara from home science.

Gauri thought:Oh she is from home science.That's why I did'nt notice her.Guess she will cook yummy food to attract Omkara.

Gauri gave her fake smile:Hi...

Dhara:Gauri..I wanted to ask you something.I had read some posters where it was written that you love Omkara.Is it true?

Gauri was embarrassed.

Gauri:Rubbish!Not at all true.That was done by Ajay and he got kicked out of the college because of that.

Dhara:So there is nothing between you and Omkara.Right?

Gauri:Yes.We are not a couple.

Dhara:Thank God.Now I am relieved.Now I can love Omkara peacefully.

Gauri was stunned.

She thought:I don't love Omkara and I rejected him.Then why do I feel bad about Dhara loving Omkara?

Dhara to Omkara:Omkara,I have seen your choreography which you did for Gauri's dance.It was fantastic.Can you please dance with me for the college function as my pair?

Om:Why not?Sure?

Dhara became very happy.

Dhara and Omkara were dancing together in the rehearsal room.Gauri and others were watching it.Gauri could not tolerate their closeness.Suddenly Dhara's leg got sprained:Aaahhh..

Om:What happened Dhara?

Dhara:My leg..

Om:Relax..relax...

Omkara made her sit there.

Om looked at Raju:Raju..bring the first aid box please.

Raju:Ok.

Omkara started massaging Dhara's leg.Dhara was lost in his touch.Gauri could not bear it.

Raju brought the first aid box.

Om took the ointment and applied it on her skin.

Dhara smiled:Thank you very much Omkara,You are so caring.Your girl friend will be lucky.

Om just smiled.

Gauri walked out angrily.

Gauri:I can't tolerate their cheesy romance.

After some days....

Dhara and Omkara were in the college garden.

Dhara:Omkara...I want to tell you something.

Om:Say Dhara...

Dhara:I have started feeling for you Omkara.I feel very happy with those beautiful feelings for you.I love you.

Omkara looked at her in disbelief.

Omkara was silent for a moment.

Dhara:Omkara...

Om:Dhara,you are really a sweet girl.I like you a lot.

She smiled happily.

Gauri's jealousies are surfacing. Om told Dhara he likes her. Will he clarify in what way?

Sad that Gauri rejected Om

Good that Om complained about Ajay n now he's kicked out

Good that Gauri apologized

But Om won't give up on Gauri 😄

Yaar I don't like this name Meenamma

Good that she asked Vaiga to confirm that Rudra too loves her

Now Gauri's jealous of Dhara

Raju again got scolded😝

Dhara proposed Om

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thanks a lot.to be frank even I don't like the name Meenamma as its an old fashioned name.but I chose this name as its Deepika's character from the movie Chennai Express.Here Deepika plays an uneducated traditional village Tamil girl.That's why I took her character from Chennai express

Originally posted by: salley145

Sad that Gauri rejected Om

Good that Om complained about Ajay n now he's kicked out

Good that Gauri apologized

But Om won't give up on Gauri 😄

Yaar I don't like this name Meenamma

Good that she asked Vaiga to confirm that Rudra too loves her

Now Gauri's jealous of Dhara

Raju again got scolded😝

Dhara proposed Om

Waiting for next

thank you for the pm and fabulous update

A Fabulous Update

Gauri rejects Omkara's proposal

Om then tells Dhara he likes her and Dhara also

proposes to Om

yes Gauri is now jealous

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Aashiq..The Lover...Part 5

Dhara:Omkara...I want to tell you something.

Om:Say Dhara...

Dhara:I have started feeling for you Omkara.I feel very happy with those beautiful feelings for you.I love you.

Omkara looked at her in disbelief.

Omkara was silent for a moment.

Dhara:Omkara...

Om:Dhara,you are really a sweet girl.I like you a lot.

She smiled.

Gauri who over heard this got irritated and walked away in frustration.

Om:But it's too late.I gave my heart to someone else.

Dhara was shocked and upset.

Dhara:Gauri?

Om:Yes,I love Gauri.

Dhara became emotional:I am sorry Omkara.I hurt you through my silly proposal.

Om:No Dhara.Loving someone is not hurting that person.You loved me,but you did'nt hurt me.But I hurt you,I am sorry.

Dhara:No Omkara.You hurt me for your true love.I am happy for that.I will pray for you to get your love.

Om smiled emotionally:Thank you Dhara.

Gauri was walking in frustration.Raju stood before her.

Raju:Hi Gauri.

Gauri stared at him:You!If you talk about fruits and vegetables I will throw fruit juice on your face.

Raju got scared for a moment and smiled with tension.

Suddenly Gauri noticed that Raju has applied cosmetics on his face.

Gauri:Why have you put make up like a clown you fool?

Raju:What?Anyways do I look like a Prince Charming now?

Gauri:Prince charming?You?My Foot!First of all I am irritated.Don't make me more angry.

Gauri walked off.

Raju:Oh no...why all my attempts to impress are failing?

Rudra and Omkara came near him.Seeing the make up on his face they laughed.

Rudra:What is this Raju?Why did you apply make up on your face?

Raju:I thought if I wear make up I will look more handsome and can impress Gauri.

Omkara and Rudra laughed.

Om:Still are you after Gauri?Then leave her.Because I love her and she also loves me.

Raju and Rudra were surprised.

Rudra:Gauri loves you?Did she say like that to you?

Om:She did'nt admit it.But I know that she loves me.I am waiting for her to admit it.

Raju took a tissue paper and wiped his face.

Raju:I promise that now onwards I will never go after Gauri.Gauri is for you and you are the best for her.

The trio smiled.

Gauri started destroying her pillows in anger.

Gauri:Omkara said that he loves me.Then how can he love Dhara?

Shakti and Pinky came there.

Pinky:Oh my Mata!What did you do?Last time when Omkara did not praise your beauty you destroyed your pillows and many other things.We wasted a lot of money on buying new things.Now again you are destroying them?

Shakti:Now what made you violent Gauri?

Gauri:That fraud Omkara proposed me.

Shakti and Pinky were surprised.

Shakti:Really?Very nice.Only he can manage you.

Pinky:You won't get a better boy.

Gauri:But I rejected him as I don't love them.

Shakti-Pinky became dull.

Pinky:Oh my Mata!I lose a good son in law.

Shakti:Pinky...it's not lose,it's lost.

Gauri:Mumma,don't start your horrible English here.I am already violent.Don't make me more violent.

Pinky got scared:Ok.

Shakti:But tell us what happened.Did Omkara force you to accept him?

Gauri:No.But he is dating another girl now.How dare he accept another girl's proposal after proposing me?

Shakti:Oh,so that's the problem.When you don't love Omkara,whether he is with another girl or not what difference does it make to you?

Gauri became embarrassed.

Pinky:You rejected him.So he accepted another girl's proposal.So what?He has the right to move on.So don't destroy anything else.Understand?

Gauri became dull.She pouted.

Vaiga was walking in search of Rudra to know his feelings for her.

Rudra came and stood before Vaiga with his protein shake.

Vaiga:Rudra!

Rudra:Will you be with me for life long to share my protein shake with?

Gauri who passed by saw this with irritation.

Gauri:Everywhere proposal.Is this a proposal season?And this mad boy is always talking about sharing protein shake.Ridiculous!

Vaiga:Not only for life long,but in all the births I will be there with you to give you a company to drink the protein shake.

Rudra became very happy.

Gauri:What a horrible reply from Vaiga!Too cheesy and hilarious.

Gauri walked away.

Rudra-Vaiga drank protein shake from the same bottle with 2 straws sharing a sweet romantic eye lock.

As soon Vaiga entered her house she hugged Meenamma.

Vaiga:Akka I am so happy.

Meenamma:What's the matter Vaiga?

Vaiga:Rudra loves me.He told me that he loves me.

Meenamma:That's so nice.Tell me about the guy.Is he from Chennai?

Vaiga:No akka.He is from Mumbai itself.

Meenamma became dull:What are you saying Vaiga?He is not a tamilian?He is not even a south Indian.

Vaiga was shocked.

Vaiga:Akka,but you were happy about me in love.

Meenamma:Because I thought that he is also a tamilian like us.Your wedding is my biggest dream Vaiga.But I want your husband to be a tamilian,not any Mumbai man.

Vaiga was shattered.

The College show...

Omkara and Dhara danced together.

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab ham chale
Hogaya yeh dil deewana, hota hai pyar kya kisne jaana
Teri aankhon mein jannat basa ke chala, Teri zulfo ki chauv
mein chalta chala
Tere naino mein chain, tere lab pe khushi Tujhko hee main
mohobbat bana ke chala

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Ho Gaye Shuru Yeh Silsile Hogaya
yeh dil deewana, hota hai pyar kya kisne jaana

Khilti kaliyon mein dhundhu bas tere disha

Main na jaanu hai aakhir yeh kya karva

Tujhe dekhu to aaye lab pe khushi

Khuda na kare ho kabhi duriya

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab ham chale

Hogaya yeh dil deewana, hota hai pyar kya kisne jaana

Hogaya hun mai pagal ab tere liye

Tere bin dil bechara yeh kaise jeeye

Maine khoyee hai chain payee tujhme khushi

Tu banni jaane jaana meri zindagi.

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab ham chale

Hogaya yeh dil deewana, hota hai pyar kya kisne jaana

Teri aankhon mein jannat basa ke chala, Teri zulfo ki chauv

mein chalta chala

Tere naino mein chain, tere lab pe khushi Tujhko hee main

mohobbat bana ke chala.( "Pyaar Mein Kabhi Kabhi")

Gauri was burning with jealousy.

After the show got over Gauri heard others saying:Omkara and Dhara look so good together.What a sizzling chemistry!

Gauri could not bear it.She walked away.

Gauri was sitting in the canteen.Dhara came and sat near her.Gauri suppressed her anger.

Dhara:Guess you are not interested to eat though you ordered yummy food.I guess it's because your mind is disturbed because of something.

Gauri asked her rudely:How does it matter to you?

Dhara:I know that you are angry with me.Because you feel that Omkara and I are in a relationship.

Gauri was stunned.

Gauri:Nothing like that.Whatever you and Omkara are dating.Right?So enjoy with Omkara.Don't disturb me.

Dhara:Who told you that we both are dating each other?

Gauri:I heard him telling you that he likes you.

Dhara:You heard only that much and concluded that he loves me?Omkara told me that he likes me.But he also told me that though he likes me he loves another girl.That is you Gauri.

Gauri could not believe it:What?

Dhara:Yes.Omkara loves only you.He told me that.

Gauri felt an unknown happiness which she herself did not realize.

Gauri:Did he really say that?

Dhara:Yes.I also noticed you getting angry seeing our dance.It's only a dance Gauri.Not romance.So chill.The others may have praised our chemistry and you got hurt.Right?But don't be hurt.They were only praising our on stage chemistry during our dance.But in real life Om's chemistry is with you Gauri.

Gauri was numb for a moment.

Gauri:Why are you explaining all this to me?I don't love Omkara.So whether he loves me or not does'nt matter to me.

Dhara:I know that you have feelings for Omkara.Don't suppress your love for him just because of ego.Because Omkara loves only you.

Dhara went away.Gauri became dull.

Gauri was walking on the ground.Omkara came after her:Hi Gauri...

Gauri:Oh ho Omkara..don't come after me like typical eve teasers.

Omkara became dull:You compared me with stupid eve teasers?Did i misbehave with you?

Gauri:No.But when you come after me to woo me it irritates me.Because I don't love you.So don't disturb me.

Suddenly Omkara pulled her closer to him:I challenge you Gauri,Before college ends you will fall in love with me and confess your love.

Gauri:But what if I won't fall in love with you?

Omkara left her.

Om:Then I won't come after you.I will never disturb you in any way.

Gauri:Are you sure?

Om:Yes.

Gauri:Then waiting for that.So that you will stop following me.

She smirked.

Om:Let us see.

He walked away.

Gauri went to Jugnu's house.

Archit and Pranati welcomed her.

Archit:Today you came here without Omkara.

Gauri:Ya..I felt like seeing Jugnu.

Seeing Gauri,jugnu came and hugged her.Gauri hugged her back.

She spent time chatting with Jugnu.After some time Jugnu lay on the bed and talked.

Slowly slowly she fell asleep.Pranati covered Jugnu with duvet.

Gauri:Why Jugnu's head is always covered?

Archit and Pranati became upset.

Pranati:Because she has no hair.She is undergoing chemotherapy.

Gauri:What?

Archit:Omkara did'nt tell you?Jugnu is having blood cancer.

Gauri was shocked.In other words she was shattered.

Archit-Pranati were in tears.

Archit:It's because of Omkara that Jugnu is not knowing any pain.Omkara always visits Jugnu..gets her engaged in jokes and games.He always makes her so happy that Jugnu forgets her pain.

Pranati:Omkara is great.Though Jugnu is not his blood relation he did everything for Jugnu..including her high medical expenses.

Archit:Once Omkara gave me lift.He dropped me home.That's how he met Jugnu.After meeting her Jugnu he kept coming here for her.Thus he became our family member.

Gauri became very emotional.She thought:Omkara is so nice.He never tried to boast of himself.

Pranati:There is an operation coming up for Jugnu.Blood transplantation.It will decide our future.

Archit and Pranati were in tears.Gauri became upset.

Gauri:Please be strong.Jugnu will be cured and live a long life.

Pranati:We hope so.

Archit:We pray for that.

The Days passed...

The College was nearing it's end.

Gauri went near Omkara.

Gauri:Omkara,I want to tell you something.

Omkara blushed thinking:Gauri is going to confess her love to me.

Gauri:My marriage is fixed.

Omkara giggled:You think that your lie will make me a fool?Never.

Gauri:Why should I lie?My parents brought me a good proposal for me.He is Akhil from London.Akhil and I are good friends since childhood. I like him.So I said yes.

Omkara was shocked.

Om:No..you are lying.

Gauri took her phone and showed her a photograph.It was her photograph with Akhil.

Omkara's heart broke into pieces.

His eyes became wet.

Om:You are right.You won the challenge and I lost.

He held her hand:I am sorry Gauri.I disturbed you a lot in the name of love.I apologize to you from the bottom of my heart.But I swear...I did'nt mean to hurt you.Please forgive me.

Omkara's pain touched her heart.She felt bad for him.

Gauri:It's ok Omkara.I have only taken it as a joke.

Omkara said in his mind:But my love is not a joke.

Omkara gave her a pale smile and walked away.

Gauri said in her mind:Sorry for hurting you Omkara.

While walking away painfully Om collided with Dhara.

Om:I am sorry Dhara.

Dhara looked at him:Is everything alright Omkara?You look so dim.Usually you are so cheerful and positive minded.

Om:Sometimes even the most cheerful person will break into pieces.

Dhara:What happened Omkara?

Om:I lost Gauri.She belongs to someone else.

Dhara was shocked.

Dhara:Omkara!

Om:I have failed in my love life.My one sided love has failed.

Dhara became upset.

Dhara:I don't know why you say like this.But don't lose hope.

Omkara smiled painfully and walked away.

Gauri may have accepted the proposal for now. Lets see if she will change her mind.

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