My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 30

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Posted: 5 years ago

You have written it so beautifully ❤️

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Will. Do... Aaj socha but was busy... Will update tomorrow pakka....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

You have written it so beautifully ❤️


Thank.you avni... 🤗

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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


Will. Do... Aaj socha but was busy... Will update tomorrow pakka....


Waiting for tigress confession also .Keep it in tigress style 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago


Karungi avni kal pakka...

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Part 18


N. Ritwik ka call hai…

M. Ritwik…matlab….that guy…

N. Yeah……

M. then pick the call na….

N. no ways mini….just ignore him….

Saying he pulls her and starts dancing again….minni wasstill thinking that why would ritwik call neil but neil was not interested in ritwik…hewants to live the moment with minni….

M. ek baar call karlo na…

N. Kise…

M.Ritwik ko…

N. pagal ho kya…why should I speak to him…kabhi nahi..

M. Par neil..

N. no par var…I don’t want to spoil my time by speaking tohim…

This time minni really got angry on his reluctance…

M. Neil please yaar …I really feel there is something that’swhy he called u…

N. mein yaha tumhare saath time spent karna chahta hun aurtum us ritwik ko leke bhaith gayi …not done yaar…

M. Neil listen…I understand u want to spend time with me butyeh socho na ki itne saalo me he dint call u and today suddenly he called….matlabthere must be something na…

N. hmm yeah…u r right…let me call him back….

Neil takes his phone and calls ritwik….and puts in speakerphone…they hear a lady speaking on the other side…

N. Ah…ritwik se baat ho sakti hai…

OP. oh ji ek minute saab ji ko deta hun…

R. yes…

N. Neil here ritwik….

R. Neil…yaar thank you call back karne ke liye…I know itdifficult for u to talk to me but mujhe tuhse baat karni thi….its really important…

N. ya…infact mujhe yehi laga isiliye I called u back…tell mewhats that so important…

R. can we meet please …

N. no ritwik…mein itna bhi acha nahi hoon…mujhe teri shakalnahi dekhni…isliye jo bhi batana hai tell me on call.

R. please neil yeh baat hi aisi hai that I cant say it on phone…samajh…

Neil was again about to say no but minni insisted him tosay yes to meet….

N. thik hai…kal waise bhi mein delhi aa raha hoon…I willmeet u there…

R. matlab kal hearig hai kya…

N. how do u know…

R. Social media me itna scene hua hai…sabko pata chalega…right…

N. hmmm…

R. I will meet at court then…

N.court kyun we can meet outside..

R. no mujhe aana padega waise bhi court….

N. ok then…lets meet there….

They disconnects the call….and neil couldn’t stop himfrom thinking that what might have happened that ritwik called him after theselong years…

M. kya hua…

N. mein soch raha tha ki aisa kya ho gaya ki ritwik mujhsemilna chahta hai…aur wo bhi court aake…

M. maybe its about isha…

N. isha ke bare me…no ways he will never ditch her..bhale hithey are not together….

M. thik hai anyways kal aayega na…let c kya bolta hai…

N. hmm…

M. ab chalo mujhe bhook lagi hai…

N. ya ya chalo…kahin bhook ke mare tum mujhe na kha jao…

M. Neil oberoi tum zyada smart mat bano ha…

He snakes his hand through her waist ad pulls her close…

N. tumne meri smartness dekhi kahan hai mini madam…

Minni blushes but cover it and snakes her hand around hisneck by standing on her toes and leans to his right ear and whipers…

M. to phir dikhao…apni smartness…

N. acha…

M. hmm…

Neil leans to her face and was about to kiss her againbut minni literally poured the jug of water on his head….

N. yaar ….kya hai yeh…

M. u needed this chef….

N. acha let me show what was needed….

M. yeah show me show me…….


Precap: Neil gets a reality check.

Thats it guys..hope u all like it....

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Posted: 5 years ago


Kardiya....🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Very nice . Final hearing of court then ? MiNeil moment Mini saying show me .. show me made me remember holi scene 😉she says same there . Upload soon next please

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Posted: 5 years ago

Neil toh paida hi smart hua hai..😆

Too good lata... Nicely written...

Suspense khulne wala hai.. waiting for next update.

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Originally posted by: sub_94

Very nice . Final hearing of court then ? MiNeil moment Mini saying show me .. show me made me remember holi scene 😉she says same there . Upload soon next please


Thanks yaar...


Yeah holi time pe bolti hai Minni aise.... 😆

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