IshRa FF - Tu hi manzil dil tera musaafir (pt 5- pg 7) 15th may - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful update.

Ishra married life is starting on a beautiful note .

Like how arranged marriages happen .

It's nice that the bhallas are understanding n wanna give this couple some time before they are comfortable with their marriage n ishu mingles with every one at ease.

Raman is watchful of ishu's every action.He is wanting to fulfil her wishes without showing that he is doing it for her.

Is Akash's chr over with this phone call?

Or he'll play a significant role in the story ?

Pl continue your story .

Don't stop abruptly like quite a few writers here.

Your writing is good n story original ..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome update a.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: GBSC

Wonderful update.

Ishra married life is starting on a beautiful note .

Like how arranged marriages happen .

It's nice that the bhallas are understanding n wanna give this couple some time before they are comfortable with their marriage n ishu mingles with every one at ease.

Raman is watchful of ishu's every action.He is wanting to fulfil her wishes without showing that he is doing it for her.

Is Akash's chr over with this phone call?

Or he'll play a significant role in the story ?

Pl continue your story .

Don't stop abruptly like quite a few writers here.

Your writing is good n story original ..


Thank you so much for your awesome comment. Loved your feedback.


Well, the next part is going to answer all your questions and for that stay tuned!


Loads of love.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Part 1

Superb update

Ishra came to bhalla house they were welcomed warmly by everyone ishra entered in ramans room raman closed the door ishita slapped him he was shocked he said why don't she understand akash was not good for her she said who he is to decide that raman said if he was that good why he didn't came in mandap to marry her ishita was not able to reply as raman was right raman said he have all rights on her now ishita got nervous raman said he will not do anything till she is ready she said she is never going to fall for him as her heart beats for akash raman hoped she will get to see akash true face soon he went to sleep in guest room ishita was thinking about ramans word ishita should say sorry to Raman for slapping him

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Awesome update

Raman was admiring sleeping Ishita his talk with sleeping Ishita was nice raman came out of washroom ishita was staring at him she came into senses soon raman asked her to wear the clothes which his mother have choosen for her she agreed with argument raman was happy ishita screamed raman asked if he can come into washroom she asked him to come she hugged him and asked him to pick her there is lizard and she is scared of that raman brought her out of washroom picking her he teased her she realised what she is doing ishita was admiring raman toshiji and raman were happy noticing that ramans parents blessed Ishita and asked her to stay freely as their daughter rituals started Ishita wanted to be alone for sometime so she can try to find about akash raman told everyone she needs rest he took her to room and asked her to rest he is going to office he left Ishita called akash she asked why he didn't came in mandap now she is married to raman but she loves him she asked him to take her with him akash said he never loved her he was just behind her property but when her father denied to give her share of property after marriage he left her he asked her never call back ishita was numb to react she realized her parents were always right they tried to stop her many time but she was blind in love with akash she fainted

Pls update soon

I m requesting u pls update for the readers who are commenting and liking ur story

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Superb update

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Hi

Amazing story line

Enjoyed reading all parts

Like Raman’s unconditional love to Ishita

His parents are good

They made Ishita comfortable

Liked the small moments between ishra

SO Akash is behind her property

Waiting for Ishita’s reaction after knowing about akash

Will she accept Raman

Or this akash will come back

Pls update soon eagerly waiting

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely update .

Ishra relationship is going on good note .

Waiting for more .

Updt soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

Teaser:



Raman was continuously calling Ishita on her mobile but she wasn't picking his call. He got more worried amd hoped for her wellbeing.

R- ishita, tum call kyu nahi utha rahi? Bina bataye kahan chali gayi ho tum?

Meanwhile, he received his mom's call amd answered.

R- maa, ishita call pick nahi kar rahi mera. Aap ne phir call kar ke try kiya shayad aap se baat kare?

T- nahi puttar, wo ghar me kisi ka call nahi utha rahi. Mujhe bahut fikr ho rahi uski, meri bachchi kahan chali gayi hai?

R- aap tension mat lo maa. Mai ghar ata hu.

T- haan puttar jaldi aa.


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Ishita- akash tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya? Mujhe kitna bharosa tha tum par. Khud se bhi kahi zyada. Ye sila mila mujhe mere pyar ka? Ab mai kis ke pas jaungi? Amma appa ko bhi muu dikhane layak nahi rahi mai. Kon mujhe apnayega?

She cried on her fate very brutally as if her world has shattered into pieces. Tears were flowing from her eyes sitting under a tree when she lost all her energy and fell unconscious of the happenings whereas her mobile kept ringing but to bad luck, it was kept silent.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

She fainted to n her room right. After akash truth ..then how again she fainted in park...

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