MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 21

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brij realized depth of maan's love for geet

both family members come know about maan's love for geet

maan's parents are ready to make geet their family member but mihindar n rano ask for time to think

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Part 25..


Interesting..

Everyone gets to know about maan's love for geet.

. They are shocked but the handas don't know what to say.


Brij realized the depth of maan's love for geet.


Geet asks why maan is calling her.


Waiting for his confession n her reaction.

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Awesome updates. Read last ten updates together. The story is moving very nicely. Khuranas and Handas all got to know about Maan's love for Geet. Waiting for Maan's confession in front of Geet.

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PART 26

All came back to KM

Dadi and Anjali made him settle in room.

Maan: Dadi wo Rano aunty Mohinder uncle ko

Dadi: Unhe bhi pata chal gaya hai Maan.

Maan: Unhone kuch kaha.

Dadi: Nahi beta .

Just then Anjali came.

Anjali: Beta ye juice pi lo. Aur tension mat lo. Sab thik ho jayega.

Dadi and Anjali left him alone.

Amar Anjali Dadi started discussing.

Amar: Maa aap ko sab pata tha. Aapne bataya nahi.

Dadi: Maan ne kaha tha ki sahi waqt aane par wo sab ko bata dega.

Anjali: Kab se chal raha tha ye sab maa?

Dadi: Maan ne to mujhe college khatm hone ke bad bataya. Par mujhe maan ke bartav se hamesha lagta tha ki Geet ko wo bachpan se hi pasand karta hai.

Amar : Wo sab thik hai. Par mujhe nahi lagta mohinder ko ye baat pasand aayi.

Anjali: Iska matlab mohinder ji geet aur maan ke rishte ke liye kabhi nahi manenge. Maan ka dil tut jayega.

Dadi: hum filhal kuch nahi keh sakte. Kyunki Mohinder aur Rano Devki behen ki baat nahi talte. Is rishte ko boht mushkilo ka samna karna hoga bete.

Amar: Rahi dil tutne ki baat to Maan ko majbut rehna hoga. Har faisle dil se nahi liye jate. Kabhi kabhi dil ki bato ke liye dimag ki bate sunana hi behtar hai.

Anjali and dadi listened silently

Amar : Behtar hoga aap dono Maan ko samjha dijiye ki ye bato ko sochna chhod kar office me bhi dhyan de. Kyunki 3 mahine bad wo hamesha ke India laut raha hai. Uske baad main use M.D. declare karne wala hun. Main office jaa raha hoon 1 ghante me aa raha hun kuch files sign karni hai.

Amar went to office.

In Mohinder's cabin,

Amar: Mohinder.

Mohinder: Sir kuch chaiye tha.

Amar:wo jo files sign karni thi.

Mohinder gave him files. Amar signed it.

Amar: Mohinder wo hospital me jo bhi.

Mohinder: Koi baat nahi. Maan bete thik hai? Wo in sab bato ki wajah se main maan ko mila nahi.

Amar: chalo main ghar jaa raha hoon sath chalte hai.

Mohinder: Nahi sir. Mujhe thoda kam hai. Main bad me aa jaunga.

Amar: Thik hai.

Amar came home. Just then Brij came.

Brij: Namaste uncle.

Amar: namaste beta . Maan se milne aaye ho.

Brij: Jee uncle.

Amar: Beta aapke mummy papa humse naraj to nahi hai.

Brij: Nahi uncle. Bas gudiya ko lekar pareshan hai. Uski shadi tute 10 din bhi nahi hue. Upar se itna kuch isliye. Main maan se mil leta ho.

Amar: Beta suno. Maan se keh dena ki ab se aage aisi harkate na kare. Kyunki US se wapis aate hi use MD ki jagah leni hogi. Behtar hai wo apni jimmedari samajh le.

In room.

Brij knocked door. Maan who closed his eyes leaned to bedpost opened eyes.

Maan: Come in.

Maan saw brij.

Brij: Hi Maan. How are you?

Maan: Am ok. Kaho.

Brij: Tum Gudiya se boht pyar karte ho. Main samajh gaya hun. Par main nahi janta Meri dadi papa ji maa kya sochte hai. Unhe jab ye baat pata chali kuch react hi nahi kiya.

Maan: Ab main kya karu? Mere kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Brij: mere bhi. Main ye bhi nahi janta gudiya kya sochegi.

Maan: Wo kya sochegi kaise sochegi. Tum use sochne doge tab Na

Brij: Tumhara Matlab kya hai?

Maan: Use to bas ek hi word ata hai " Brij veer ji" Bachpan se itna protect kiya ki kha kuchh sochti hai. Veer ji veer ji bas yahi soch ti hai

Brij : Tane Mar rahe ho mujhe. Agar Geet ko bolunga na tumhe dekhe gi bhi nhi

Maan: Kyun mujhse is tarah se blackmail kar rahe ho.

Brij : Main blackmail nhi kar rha . Tum bhul rahe ho Gudiya meri behan hai. Ab to mujhe aisa lagta hai ki Geet ko main protect nhi Kar paya . Isliye tumhe us se pyar ho gaya.

Maan: Mujhe mat bolo. Snow-white se to kisi ko bhi pyar ho sakta hai

Brij : Snow-white tumne Geet ko nickname bhi diya.

Maan : Jab tum yaha rehne aye the. We played football. Usi din de diya nickname.

Brij: Main soch raha tha Geet is safe. Kyun ki college me kbhi kisi ne Geet ko pareshan nahi kiya. Tum se dur rakhna important tha wahi nhi kiya

Maan: Suno Geet ko pareshan Karne ki koshish ki thi Maine roka tha.

Maan said again

Maan: wait wait Tum mujhse kyu Zagad rahe ho

Brij: Nahi tum to jhooth bhi bolne lage Tumne mujhe kyun nahi bataya ki Gudiya ko kisi ne chheda tha.

Maan: Batata to tum uski jaan le lete.

Just then Geet came.

Geet: Veer ji apne kise mara

Brij: Kisi ko bhi nahi Gudiya?Tum yaha

Geet: Niche maa papa ji aaye hai aapko bulaya hai

Maan was looking towards Geet loving eyes.

Brij noticed it.

Brij: Go gudiya. Am coming

Geet: Aap jao mujhe dadi maa ne medicines dene ke liye bola hai . Papa ji ne bhi mana nahi kiya

Maan thought was looking at her with love " SO cute you are, falling in love with you more and more"

Brij saw that and said bit loudly " Maan"

And gave look like behave yourself.

Maan waved hands to Brij ( saying bye)

Brij : Gudiya 5 min me niche aa Jana

Geet nodded yes. Brij left.

Geet: Ye dawai bhijwayi hai

Mean: Thanks sn... Geet. Tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai?

Geet: Am fine . Ye aapki medicine. Main chalti hun

Maan: Kaha

Geet: Veer ji ne niche aane ke liye bola.

Maan faked pain while she was leaving

Geet: Kya hua.

Maan: Its paining

Geet: mujhse kehna tha. Don't move. Main medicine deti hun

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PART 27

After 1 year

Maan: Geet mujh me aisi kya kami hai Jo tum mujhe dekh Kar bhi undekha Kar deti ho. Itna to main bhi janta Hun ki tum wohi Geet ho par tumhari muskurahat kaha chali gayi.

Geet: Sir aap ki is tarah ki baate mujhse nahi karni chahiye. Main aap ki employee Hun. Aap mere boss. Koi sun Lega to Kya kahega

Maan banged his hand on table.

Maan: Yaha koi nahi hai sab ja chuke hai. Geet tum is tarah ki baate mat karo tum achhe se janti Ho main tumhare liye Kya feel karta Hun. Main tumse boht py....

Geet covered his mouth with her palm

Geet: Sir ye aap Kya kehne jaa rahe the. . Aap yaha ke Malik.

Maan hold her hand removed her hand kept it on his left chest.

Maan: Wo to main baad me bana Hun. Meri dhadkane mehsoos karo Geet , ye sirf tumhare like dhadkta hai Geet.

Geet removed her hand

Maan: Kyun mujhe aise ignore Kar rahi ho. Kyun tadpa rahi ho. Mar jaunga Geet.

Geet: Ye aap kaisi baate Kar rahe ho. Aap ka accident hua that tab pata hai Anjali aunty, Amar uncle , Dadi ji kitna dar gaye the.

Maan: Janta Hun aur wo bhi jante hai Mera accident kyu hua.aur ab tum bhi janti ho.

Geet: Sab janti Hun is liye keh rahee Hun mujhse dur rahiye. Kahi aapki Jan na chali Jaye Meri wajah se.

Tears escaped from her eyes and started sobbing.

Maan kept his hand on her shoulders

Maan: Look at me Geet

Geet: Aap dekhiye janam lete hi ye seher mata pita ke liye andhera ban gayi. Kyun apni khud ki Jan ke dushman banana chahte ho. Veer ji hi aapko samjha sakte hai

Maan: No ab tum hi mujhe samjha sakti ho. Ab ye tumhari jimmedari hai. Kyun na Abhi test karle.

Maan pinned her to wall

Geet: Ye aap Kya Kar rahe ho.

Maan kept his finger on her lips

Maan: Shhhh... Chup raho Geet.

Started closing distance between lips. Their lips were centimeter away. Geet closed her eyes in anticipation. Maan felt Geets increased heartbeats. Geet was able to feel his breath on her face.

But Maan kissed her forhead instead of lips.

Geet opened her eyes.

Geet : Ye aap ne Kya kiya.

Maan: Maine kiya Geet par tum to mujhe rok sakti thi na.

Geet: Mujhe chhodiye. Mujhe Jane dijiye.

Maan: Maine kaha pakad ke rakha hai.

Geet ran away from him went to her cabin.

Geet took her bag and leaving for home

Maan: Kaha jaa rahi ho.

Geet: Ab boht der ho gayi hai Ghar jaana hai

Maan: Chalo

Geet: Main chali jaungi

Maan: Brij ne tumhari jimmedari mujhe di hai. Jab tak wo aa nahi jaata.

Geet: Mujhe nahi Jana apke sath. Maine Brij veer ji se baat Kar li hai. Maine unhe keh diya ki aapka Kam pending hai isliye aap busy ho.

Maan: Maine kab kaha ki main busy Hun

Geet: Kyunki aap meeting ke liye prepare karni hain aapke presentation hai.

Just then Romeo came.

Maan: Tum to half day lekar Gaye the na

Romeo: Ha par fir Brij ji ne kaha ki Geet ji ko Ghar chhodna hai

Geet: Chalo Romeo

Romeo: Haa aap wait kariye parking me. main dopahar ko charger bhul Gaya wo leke aata Hun

Geet nodded and left

Maan: Mr. Romit or Romeo, just because tum Geet ke junior ho aur Brij tumpe trust karta hai I offered you job. You are good boy. Tum mere aur Geet ke bich Kyun aa rahe ho.

Romeo: Main Geet ji ka junior Hun. Par main bhi Geet ji se pyar karta Hun.aur aap bhi sir. Geet ji na hi aap se aur na hi mujhse pyar Karti Hain. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Let's play Destiny game. Dekhte hai kiska nasib Kya hai.

Romeo phone rang

Romeo: Ji Geet ji wo charger dhundhne me waqt lag gaya just 5 min

Romeo: Good night sir

Maan: Good night

Both shaked hands.

Maan: Geet trust Karti hai Romeo par but mujhpar nahi. I kissed her today. Kahi wo mujhpar gussa to nahi.an

Maan's phone rang

Anjali: When will you come home? Dad is asking

Maan: Mom kitni baar bolu mujhe kaam hai. Dad hamesha se yahi chahte the na.

Anjali: Is tarah se nahi bola tha maan beta.

Maan cut phone

Anjali: Maine kitni baar kahu maan ki shadi karva dete hain. Uske friends they are married.

Amar: Samajhne ki koshish karo yu jabardasti kisi ladki se shaadi karva ke us ladki ki zindagi kyun spoil karna.

Savitri: Hum Sab chahte hai ki Geet ki shaadi Maan se ho. Par Geet ke sath jabardasti nahi kar sakte. Kisi bhi ladki ke liye asan nahi hota aisi baat hone ke baad dusre rishte ke liye sochna. Sari koshish maan ya hamari taraf se nahi ho sakti. Geet ko bhi kadam badhana hoga.

Anjali: Brij samjha sakta hai. Par Geet se itna pyar hai. Uske liye apni jaan bhi de dega. Phir ye baat kyu nahi sunega.

Maan came home

Anjali: Baitho beta main khana laga deti hun.

Maan: Main dinner karke aaya hun clients ke sath. Good night to all.

Maan went to his room

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geet kyun maan ko avoid kar rahi ho........maan ko sab kuch khulke batao......feeling bad fr maan.................


painful update...........

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maan's family supporting him but ask him use some brain while doing anything

like the conversation between maan n brij

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27

very painful update

geet is not responding to maan's love but comfess her fear.

maan is hurt seeing that geet trust other but not him

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Wow superb 👌 update waiting for next

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Nice updates. Now Geet is working in Maan's office. Maan confess his love but Geet is not responding. She is ignoring Maan. She is afraid that Maan will be in trouble if she would be with her. Who is this Romeo. He laso loves Geet. How dare he told Maan about his love for Geet. Maan's family wants Maan to get married but Amar does not want to ruin some girl's life.

Continue soon.

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