IPKKND : OS Pari Singh Raizada ‘First Words’ 20th April new - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitritt9s

Don't know who is cuter pari or asr BTW loved your is anyway thks once again

both as cute as each other but Paris the cutest, thanks for reading. Great to see feedback, keeps me motivate to keep writing.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: abivicky86

After a long gap you have written this OS .Such a cute little story normally we all have that impression that Arnav doesn’t get along well with kids ,but this story changes our perception of Arnav and kids.

thank you yes I haven’t written any OSs for a while and nothing on these set of raizadas. This ends up being quiet similar to my os Raizada girls in some ways but still different.


I think in these difficult times I was just craving a little bit of woolliness, something soft and light. I think there’s something very sweet about the father daughter sort of relationship. I don’t remember when Pari first came into my stories but ever since she’s been the cutest addition. She first made a appearance in deedar I think, later Raizada baby.


He was upset that pari was not acknowledging him as bade papa despite the fact he loved her very much ,but soon he got an opportunity to play with her when there was no one to take care of her. Pari was happy being with him so also Arnav both enjoyed being with each other. soon Arnav also got his reward when Pari baby addressed him as bade papa and Arnav was thrilled

Its the little things and I wanted to show that even ASR is moved by the little things in life. Thank you for continuing to read..



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Posted: 5 years ago
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beautiful story and adorable pari

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Posted: 5 years ago
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No extra effort here.. no twist n turns..which I liked here.. seems like real life scenario.. like how a baby gets so attatched while Arnav gave time to their bond..❤️❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoti_kuku

No extra effort here.. no twist n turns..which I liked here.. seems like real life scenario.. like how a baby gets so attatched while Arnav gave time to their bond..❤️❤️

keeping it nice and simple

Thanks glad you liked it and I really enjoyed writing this too.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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thank you my friend !


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks all for the lovely comments ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks !! Glad you liked it


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Superb cute shot

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