Kumkum Bhagya: Bhagya ke Daage (chapter 18 updated) - Page 2

Part 1 -

Wow. Loved the part. Poor Ranbir and Prachi. Both are hurting. OMG! Prachi is claustrophobic. Hope Ranbir comes soon to rescue her.

Part 2 -

Loved the part. Ranbir loves her so much that even his anger for her couldn't stop him from coming to her aid. His last words to Prachi in this part are really heartbreaking.

Part 3 -

Oh no! Prachi is kidnapped! This Sanju is just impossible. 😡 Awe! That fb scene is just so adorable. Love the fact that Ranbir accepted that no matter how much angry he is with Prachi, it can't and wont ever affect his love for her. For him, she will remain his 1st priority always. And finally others too can realize his love for her. Hope he finds her soon.

Originally posted by: Nandini25

Part 3 -

Oh no! Prachi is kidnapped! This Sanju is just impossible. 😡 Awe! That fb scene is just so adorable. Love the fact that Ranbir accepted that no matter how much angry he is with Prachi, it can't and wont ever affect his love for her. For him, she will remain his 1st priority always. And finally others too can realize his love for her. Hope he finds her soon.

Kudos to you for helping new writers.

Originally posted by: ican

Kudos to you for helping new writers.

Thank you Ican. It's our responsibility to help new writers. I have just done my bit. That's all. Thanks to you for having so much faith in me that you directed Aman to me.

Originally posted by: Nandini25

Thank you Ican. It's our responsibility to help new writers. I have just done my bit. That's all. Thanks to you for having so much faith in me that you directed Aman to me.

Originally posted by: Aman120

Thank you for all the beautiful comments 😊

U r always welcome.

Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 5

(NOTE- guys i have use two photos,, if you want to see them,, you can go to my wattpad id karpeet,)

the realisation bring a smile to her face,, all her question were now answered,, all her confusion was cleared,, she finally realised what does she feel for him,, she closed her eyes and remembered how they met, fight, how he supported her, they become friends, and his confession,, she again close her eyes,,

(the photo i used here is the place where you propose)

prachi was standing at the centre looking at decorations,,

"prachi"

she looked around to see ranbir close to her,, looking in her eyes,,

(here,, i used the photo from pranbir holi promo when both were close to each other looking in each others eyes's)

ranbir:- (smiles) I love you prachi,

prachi:- (smilingly) i love you, i love you too ranbir,,

he cups her face,, and hugs her,, as he breaks the hug,, he looks at her as if asking for permission,, as she blinks her eyes, he slwoly leans and ends the gap between them,,

She remembered her mother words " pyaar karna toh aasan hota hai,, par pyaar ko jeetna aur muskilo ka saamna karna muskil hota hai," she knew she has to do something,, she has to get back to her ranbir, tell him she loves him and clear all their misunderstanding,, she hope that ranbir will come to her rescue no matter what, if only she could contact him but how,, she look around and saw broken glass pieces,, she carefully somehow grabbed it and started cutting the rope,, she cut it and freed herself,, she started to look around to escape from there but she heard the the footsteps and her fear rised,, if he saw her like this, sanju will alert,, she grabbed to rope and pretented to still being tied up praying that he couldn't find out,, the door opened and a guy entered,, he looked around as if searching for something,, she saw his phone in his pocket and a brick on a box,, and an idea popped in her mind,, she was scared to do that but she remembered how she beat those gundas,,

gunda:- aree vah bhabhiji, (she cringed at it) aap toh bahut jaldi chup ho gayi,, lagta hai aapko bhi ye jagah pasand aa gayi hai,,

NOT even in her dreams,,

prachi:- jaane do mujhe,,

gunda:- aree bhabhiji aap tension kyu le rahi hai mai aapko kuchh nahi karoga,, voh toh boss karege (laughs evily),, chaliye aap yaha enjoy kariye mai chalta hoon,, bye bye

he turned to leave and prachi used this as an opportunity, quietly getting up as she grabbed the brick and hit him on his head,, he immediately collapsed and prachi started to search him and found a key and his phone,, she immediately called ranbir,, ranbir was crying not knowing what to do and how to save prachi,, the world was fading away for him, when his phone rang,,

ranbir:- (still crying) hello

prachi:- ra...ranbir,,

hearing her voice was like flowers were showering over him,, her voice bring hope to him,, he immediately stoop up,,

ranbir:- (highly worried) prachi tum kaha ho, tum thik toh ho na, uss sanju ne tumhe kuchh kia toh nahi,,

prachi smiled knowing ranbir was searching for her,,

prachi:- ranbir voh mujhse zabardasti shaadi karna chahta hai,, mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai,,

ranbir:- prachi tum bilkul mat daro,, jab tak mai hoon tab tak voh tumhe kuchh nahi kar payega,, tum mujhe bas ye batao tum ho kaha,, mai vahi aa raha hoon,,

his soothing words bring calmness to her heart,, she do wanted to tell him about her feelings but she wanted to say it face to face,,

prachi:- mujhe nahi pata mai kaha hoon,, ek kamra hai store room,, ranbir mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai,, kahi mujhe kuchh

ranbir:- prachi kuch nahi hoga tumhe,, mai hone nahi doga,, pehle apne aasu pocho aur thande dimaag se dekho,,

she wiped her tears and started to look around and saw something fimiliar,, she startes to think and something clicked in her mind,,

prachi:- ranbir ye sanju ke pitaji sarpanj ji ka farmhouse hai,,

ranbir:- (reassure) prachi tum tension na lo mai abhi aa raha hoon,,

ranbir cut the call and immediately start heading towards the location,, he will for sure save prachi at any cost,, and for sanju, he will not get away with this,, nobody will get away by hurting his prachi,, prachi was happy knowing ranbir is coming to her rescue,, but she taught to made an attempt to escape so she head towards the door but as she opened the door,, she saw sanju in front of her,, sanju was shocked to see her and immediately grabbed her,, he looked around to find his donkey at floor then at her,, he tightly grabbed her wrist hurting her and took phone from her,, he checked the phone which increased his anger,, he slapped her badly,, she fall on the floor touching her cheeks,, blood starts flowing from her lips and she started crying,, sanju grabbed her shoulder tightly pressing his fingers on her soft skin hurting her,,

sanju:- (threatening tone) samajti kya ho tum sapne aap ko,, mai inte pyaar se tumhe yaha laya aur tum uss ranbir ko beech mein le aayi pirse,, (he shouts)

prachi:- haa layi mai usse beech mein,, because i love him,, samje,, I.LOVE.RANBIR (she screams)

sanju pressed her shoulders more tightly while she shrieks in pain,,

sanju:- (dangerously) tum srif mujhse pyaar karogi,,

prachi:- (screams) nahiiiii,, kabhi nahi,, mai sirf ranbir se pyaar karti ho aur voh bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai,,

sanju:- (screams) koi pyaar nahi karta tujhse voh,, natak tha sab uska,, ek bet ke liye tumse pyaar ka natak kar raha tha,,

her eyes widened in shock,, FAKE,, her heart ache listening,, the floor slipped beneath her feet,, world started to fade away,, her heart broke,, her eyes began to tear up,,

prachi:- tu...tum zooth bol rahe ho,,

sanju:- accha mai zooth bol raha hoon,, bet lagi thi tumse pyaar karne ki,, varna tumhi socho ki aakir ek high class ladka tumse kyu pyaar karega,,

yes why would he ever love her,, he always like shorts dress,, so it was a bet all long,, the bitter truth left her heartbroken and she fall to her knees,, sanju smirked seeing her and left from there carrying his donkey with him,, while for prachi,, whole world seem to vanished,, the one person she loved was the the person who faked his love for her,, this hurt her a lot,, she never taught that ranbir would ever play with someone's feeling,, she taught he was a good guy, that he changed but he truth was he never changed,, he was still the same bad guy but even worse,, she felt stupid, betrayed, played, heart broken,, how stupid she was to fall in his trap,, she cried bitterly,, this all long was just a bet for him,, he only acted this long, his friendship, love and anger was just acting,, she started crying,,

prachi:- why ranbir why,, kyu kia tumne ye,, ( she closed her eyes and his memories started to invade) i hate you,, i hate you ranbir,, (she screamed)

ranbir was driving hastely when all of a sudden, he felt his heart ache,, like somthing started to break inside him,, he felt sudden sadness, pain sorrow but why,, he decided to ignore it as he was highly worried for prachi,, he kept on driving when his car tyre punctured,, he banged on the steering wheel angrily and got out,, he kicked his car tyre in anger,,

ranbir:- isse bhi abhi puncture hona tha,, ab waha par kaise pocho ga,, plzz god help me

on the other side, prachi kept on crying,, she couldn't hold back the tears,, she remembered how her mother suffered when her father left but she never showed,, though her heart break knowing the bitter truth, she stood up,, her mother taught her to be strong,, she had to escape,, for her mother,, she wiped her tears and took the keys and headed towards the door,, she hope and tried to unlock it and it did,, she peeked outside and saw a corridor,, she walked towards the end and saw that there were almost 15 guys downstairs,, she hid behind a pillar and scout,, she knew that sarpanj ji farmhouse had two exit and if she is not wrong then hopefully sanju will be that dump to leave that exit unguarded,, she looked around and headed towards the exit and her taught was exactly right,, sanju is really that dump,, she opened the door and ran outside but two guys saw her and ran behind her,, prachi got to the road with guys behind her,, but she wasn't fast enough as they outrunned her and surrounded her,,

gunda 1# :- (breathing heavily) kya ladki bahut bhaagne lagg gayi hai,, tujhe sabak sikana parega,, (he started closer to her)

prachi:- (scared) door raho mujhse, mere paas mat aana,,

gunda 1# :- (smirks evily) kyu darr lag raha hai, (he moved more closer)

gunda 2# :- bhai par boss,,

gunda 1# :- aree mahinder todha enjoyment mein kya chala jayega boss ka,, unke pass toh lifetime hein (laughs evily)

gunda 2# :- haa bhai

she was digusted by them,, he grabed her wrists while cryingly stuggles begging them to leave her,, she closed her eyes out of fear when the grib loses,, she open only to find ranbir holding his hand,, he was hell angry,, she was relived to see him there,,

ranbir:- (angry) tumari himmat kaise hui prachi ko haat lagane ki (he beat them badly) prachi ko haat lagaiga tu ha,, jaan se maar daaloga tujhe,,

he kept beating the hell out of them,, for once she was scared to see ranbir this angry,, she was confused,, was he really angry or faking it,, he continued to beat them mercilessly when they passed out,, he immediately hold her hand and ran in the forest,, they kept on running till he taught they were safe,, he hugged her tightly,, in his embrace, she forgot the world and hugged him tightly,, they continued to stay like that when prachi remembered the bitter truth,, she out of anger pushed him away from her and slapped him,, he looked at her with shock,, hot tears were on her face,,

prachi:- (angrily) kyu kia tumne esha,,

ranbir:- (what was she talking about) kya

prachi:- (she lets out a painful chukkle) innocent banne ki kosih mat karo,, (grabs his collor) kyu khela mere emotions ke saath (she screams),, kyu kia pyaar ka nataak,,

ranbir wides his eyes as he remembers the bet,, he look at her,, she was deeply hurt with this,,

prachi:- (taunt) wah ranbir wah,, kitna accha natak karte ho,, (stiffs) dosti ka natak, pyaar ka natak, nafrat ka natak,, kitna accha natak karte ho,, aur kisi ke emotions ke saath khelna koi tumse jaane,, kitno ke emotions ke saath khele hai aaj tak,, mujhe lagta tha ki tum badal rahe ho,, ek acche insaan ban rahe ho,, ek acche dost par voh sab sirf ek natak,, mujhe umeed nahi thi ki sirf ek bet ke liye tum itna gir sakte hoon,, tum aaj bhi ek bahut gatiya insaan ho ranbir,, kisi ki feeling ke saath khelna bahut accha lagta hai tumhe,, i hate you,, I HATE YOU RANBIR (she screams)

ranbir:- (shouts) shut up,, (he grabs and pins her to the tree,, his eyes blazed with anger) shut up,, (dangerously close) haa thi bet PAR (joining their heads looking in her eyes) sach toh yeh hai ki aaj tak maine kabhi koi acting ki hi nahi thi,, mai sach mein tumse pyaar karta hoon,,

prachi:- (though wanted to believe) jhoot,,

ranbir:- (he cups her face) tum maano ya naa maano par sach hai yahi ki mai tumse sach mein pyaar karta hoon varna mai yaha tak tumhe kyu bacane aata,,

prachi sensed some kind of pain in his voice,, like this was affecting him too but pain or acting and if pain then pain of what,

prachi:- (smiled bitterly) tumari bet ke liye,, apni bet jo puri karni hai,,

her words hurt him a lot,, he was right,, she would never ever understand,,

ranbir:- tum mujhe kabhi samaj nahi paogi,, na pehle na aaj,, and you know what prachi,, even i hate you,,

prachi:- maine tumhe-----

a gunshot interuppted them and they turned around to see sajnu and his men with their gun pointed at them,,

sanju:- vah kya show tha,, maza aa gaya,,

ranbir immediately covered prachi from them guarding,,

ranbir:- sanju agar prachi ko kuch bhi hua toh mai tujhe maar daaloga,,

prachi looked at ranbir,, she couldn't believe it, he would still act which could cost him his life,, why is he doing this,,

sanju:- mujhe maarega (he pushed forward) mujhe maarega (he punched ranbir)

ranbir and sanju get into a fight when he pushed ranbir that he lands on ground while prachi holds him,, sanju and his men close to them when ranbir sprinkler dust in their eyes,, using the opportunity,, he grab her hand and both start to run,,

sanju:- (shouts) pakro unhe

they start chasing them,, ranbir and prachi end up to a cliff when one of goons points his gun at them and shoots,, prachi felt like she is about to die but in a second ranbir pushes her to the side and the bullet ends up touching his arm (cho ke nikal gayi),, prachi was shocked to see this,, he was saving her at the cost of this life,, he falls to the ground grabing his arm,, prachi runs to his side,,

prachi:- (crying) ranbir ranbir tum thik ho na,,

ranbir:- prachi mai thik ho bas goli cho ke nikal gayi hai,, (he stood up) prachi tum jao yaha se,, bhaag jao,, (it shocked her,, he was saying her to leave him,, no she won't leave him not in this condition)

prachi:- nahi,, nahi chor ke jaogi tumhe

ranbir:- prachi plzz jao

prachi:- kaha na nahi,,

his men surrounded them,,

sanju:- bahut bhaag lia tum dono ne,, le chalo inn dono ko,,

they took pranbir back to the farmhouse,, prachi and ranbir are tied up in different rooms,, prachi thinks about ranbir,, his actions were confusing her,, the way he was fighting for her confused her a lot,, he was also ready to took a bullet for her but why " mai sach mein tumse pyaar karta hoon " no he is lying, he is lying,, he is just doing it for the bet but why this much for the bet,,

After some hours,,

prachi heard footsteps,, the door unlocks and sanju enters,, he comes in front of her,, and gives her a box,,

prachi:- kya hai ye,,

sanju:- (smiles) tumare kapde,, ye pehen lo aur niche aa jao shaadi ke liye,,

prachi:- nahi mai nahi pehnogi

he cups her face while she jerks it,,

sanju:- soch lo prachi,, kahi tumari bachpane ki sajah ranbir ko na mile (she looks at him shocked while he smirks) toh uske liye chup chap pehen lo (he leaves)

she cries on her fate,, if she didn't do what he says, he will harm ranbir,, no even if for ranbir it was a bet,, she really did love him,, she won't let sanju harm him,, on the other side,, sanju came to see ranbir in sherwani,, ranbir looks at him with shock in sherwani,,

sanju:- (laughs) kya dekh rahe ho,, ohhh ye (pointing towards sherwani) voh kya hai ki itna sab ho gaya ki tumhe bata hi nahi paya,, meri aur prachi ki shaadi hai abhi,,

ranbir:- (angrily) sanju (if not for ropes,, sanju would have been lying on floor)

sanju:- (grabs his collor) chilla mat,, kuch nahi kar sakta tu,,

ranbir:- (threatening) agar tune prachi ko kuch bhi kia toh mai tumhe chodoga nahi,,

sanju:- (he starts punching him) kya kar lega tu,, mai batata hoon,, kuchh nahi,, kuch nahi kar payega tu,, (he leaves him) mai prachi se shaadi karuga,,

ranbir rage increase,, he keeps struggling with his ropes,,

sanju:- mai usse shaadi karuga (ranbir is looking at dangerously) usse cho ga (his ropes starts to losen up) usse maaroga (his anger holds no peeks) usse pyaar karoga,,

he breaks the chair,, and grabs sanju and slams his head on wall instantly knocking him out,, he checks his breaths and is relived to know he is alive,,

ranbir:- ab kya karu,, prachi ko bacana hai kisi bhi kimaat mein,,

gunda 1# :- (from oustide) boss sab thik hai,,

ranbir looks around and then his eyes end at his SHERWANI,,

hell,, these parts are getting longer and longer,,

# lets guess what will be next ones word limit,, 3rd part was 1635, 4th part was 2536,, this one is 2817 so lets guess,,

plzz tell how you liked to story,,

how you liked bet reveal,, i know many taught it would be rhea to reveal it, but i taught why not with sanju,,

And plzz don't forget to tell your taughts on ending,,

thanks for reading,,

stay home,,stay safe

Good progress with the story.

Hope Pracho doesn't give in easily.

Do put chapter 5updated in your FF heading too

Originally posted by: ican

Good progress with the story.

Hope Pracho doesn't give in easily.

Do put chapter 5updated in your FF heading too